The end of the volume is summarized by the three Yi Qi manuscripts.

Generally speaking, many bigwigs are not divided into volumes, because it will aggravate the sense of separation and affect the follow-up.

Generally, when dividing volumes and changing maps, subscriptions will be dropped.

However, as a small street, there is nothing to drop.

I can only pursue the rationality and artistry of the story.

To put it bluntly, this book was my first book, so I was free to write what I wanted to write.

No one cares about the idea of hitting the street, whether it sells miserably, or pursues oneself, it is useless.

In fact, many authors and readers are good now. It's too impetuous, or it's too impatient.

The most important thing about a story is the story itself, not any other add-on. It's not a whim that can hold up the whole book.

This is also the reason why many brain holes are broken, and they can't hold up.

Or rather, luck.

Write a beginning and cut it if the feedback is not good, and then cut it again in the next book.

Anyway, you can only open your mind big enough, just have a gimmick, as for the things in the back, you can pick up people's teeth and wisdom can be translated into Chinese, just repeat the vulgar routine and change the name, anyway, the foundation is there, and someone buys it anyway.

Is that really interesting? As a reader, or as an author, what you are looking forward to and willing to spend time on should not be this kind of thing.

Short videos and games, as well as spam pushed by big data, have taken up a lot of reading time.

So at this point of reading time, I don't want to think about it, so what do online articles compare with short videos?

The charm of the text itself is not possessed by other carriers, compared with the superficial superficial intentions, the deep thinking under the text is more like a dialogue between the author and the reader, a tacit subtext, and a tacit understanding of the secret understanding.

Of course, this is also related to the general environment, under the deformed rules, it is inevitable that bad money will drive out good money.

For example, a cliché of a certain work, good is good, but can it be like this with a new person? No way.

It's not that newcomers can't write xx, it's that newcomers can't write xx, and the causal relationship won't be discussed in detail, which is meaningless.

Of course, as a newcomer, it is inevitable that there will be unrealistic fantasies and expectations.

But it turns out that fantasies are just fantasies.

If a dream can be easily realized, it is not called a dream.

After all, the same book, different authors, and different criteria for promotion are not a good thing, but so what?

In fact, compared to other new books, I understand very well that this kind of writing and such a theme will definitely screen out some readers.

Of course, sifting them all out was something I didn't expect ...

The tone of the first part of Yuan Ling is low and desperate. Although there is occasional warmth, it is also after misfortune, which belongs to the awakening that is too late.

But unlike the dark theme text, the despair of the Yuan Spirit implies hope.

Although I don't know what the future holds, although mistakes are inevitable. But whether it was Qiyue or Su Xiao, they were all working towards the hope they thought they had.

In other words, under the impetus of unknown forces, it is passively advancing.

When you look back at what Su Xiao did after the first part is over, you will find that Su Xiao actually doesn't have many choices.

Or rather, his choice doesn't matter.

Especially in the early stage, as a newcomer to the "traverser", he was full of curiosity about the world and fearful at the same time.

Curiosity is the driving force for human progress, but knowing too much can overwhelm the cognition of the person concerned.

And Su Xiao is in the midst of this contradiction. On the one hand, he is full of yearning for the future, and wants to be like the protagonist in it, full of plug-ins and invincible.

On the other hand, he is full of fear and insecurity about the world.

Because as a party, he doesn't know if he is the protagonist or not, and he doesn't know how long he can live and what bugs he has.

There is a saying that people who seek realism in the virtual world must have something wrong with their brains.

But for me, the structure of the book, the setting, and even the way the characters think are as realistic as possible.

Put yourself in the shoes of the characters, instead of playing marionette from God's perspective and making the characters face, which is very boring.

Whether it is the character's personality, words and deeds, they all try to express their various emotional changes.

Maybe in some places, the cold must be cold all the time, and the strong must hold the shelf.

They are human beings first, and different characters with different identities second.

The world of the Yuan Spirit is not equal, cruel, terrifying, and even desperate.

But I aspire to a world where equality is paramount.

All people are different, but each has its own use.

That's my creative philosophy.

Let's go back to the book itself and talk about the writing technique of the first part.

Although I am not qualified to teach others, I would like to talk about the writing style of this book.

The combination of virtual and real, treacherous.

With the determined main line and some element points as the backbone, it extends and expands countless branches and foreshadowing.

This is a more trouble-free way to write, and it also coincides with the chess game of a black hand behind the scenes.

In fact, in the entire first part, many people and things other than Su Xiao are inevitable.

And some of the things that Su Xiao has experienced are the inevitable elements that have been arranged, that is, the determined plot points. Some are inconsequential coincidences and accidents.

I dealt with it in a coincidental way, which is a relatively inferior way of dealing with it, and I will work hard to improve myself in the future.

The irrelevant part is not important to the people behind the scenes, as long as the key element points are reached.

The elements that the author himself has to consider, in addition to the planning of the mastermind behind the scenes, also have the important elements of the story itself.

It may not affect the whole, but there will be a lot missing in terms of expressiveness, because there is more to think about as an author.

The entire first part, except for the fan, has a total of 205 chapters and about 400,000 words. The update is indeed constipated, but fortunately, no one is urging the update.

Tian shamelessly said, I am the pursuit of quality on the street!

To be honest, 1w a day or even more, I can barely do it with hard work.

But that would cause the quality of the article to plummet ==

Of course, I may not be qualified to talk about quality as a street fighter, but I still want to be responsible for this story.

Compared with the previous experimental and heart-wrenching short story, this one is more attentive and worth savoring many times.

And in the whole story of the first part, I don't think about the stories that the first part shows at most. It's something outside of the text.

To put it simply, although the first part is only more than 400,000, it may involve the plot of millions or even several books.

I apologize for the fact that this technique may cause reading difficulties for some readers who are swallowing dates.

And some people come up and say they can't understand it, so it's a little embarrassing.

I flipped through a few pages scattered, and after reading a little, I said I couldn't understand it.

So how do you understand?

Understand all the metaphors, understand all the dark lines?

It's impossible. Not to mention the reader, even myself, there are metaphors that I don't understand.

Because after the story is formed, it does not only belong to the author, but exists independently.

Some things are subconscious experiences, so to say that the story pushes it there, it can only be there.

As a reader, it's normal to not understand some places, and sometimes I write a sentence for a few hours and consider 5-6 meanings, and I don't plan to let the reader understand it all at once, and if I understand it all, my book may be gone (laughs)

I hope this is a book that I can read over and over again. It's okay to just watch it once, different people have different hobbies and different understandings.

Ignoring dark lines and foreshadowing, there is nothing wrong with looking at it simply and roughly.

If you like to go back to the source and pay attention to details, you may have new feelings, new discoveries, and new understandings after reading it a few times.

I really don't understand, plus a group to ask me, and give you an answer as much as possible without spoilers.

To borrow a sentence from Mr. Xu Yajun, the audience/readers can not see it, but I can't fail to do it.

Whether it's the reader or the audience, it's the reader's own business to not understand, but I can't give up the parts that should be.

For me, the significance of this book is not limited to the grades themselves, which are just decorations and do not determine the value of the book.

It's a good story, and it's worth reading.

Maybe there is no one now, but one day, it will be seen.

This is a unique value.

Let's talk about the story.

Let's start with a more arrogant remark.

Personally, I think this story is not inferior to any other story.

Maybe my writing is a little awkward, the handling techniques are not sophisticated enough, the writing experience is not rich enough, and the character portrayal still needs to be honed.

But in terms of the story itself, it's a great story.

Okay, back to business.

As the name suggests, the core of the separation of the holy capital is the separation of the holy capital.

There is no archetype in the Holy Capital. It's not a microcosm of a city, nor is it a magic change somewhere.

It is the Yuan Spirit World I envisioned, a vital place.

The system in the Holy Capital, the dark side, all exist objectively, but they only exist in the Yuan Spirit World.

For this purpose, please do not take a seat by codename.

For the elect of the Holy Capital, the idea of inspiration originated from Jung's collective consciousness. It's also an enduring setting.

Human beings, as different individuals, are flawed.

If only the basic survival instincts are retained and consciousness is gathered, will it lead to more rational decisions and judgments?

In the first part, the treatment of the Holy Capital is clearly detached from the original intent of this idea.

The electorate has only the lowest means of subsistence and some of the right to subsistence.

Spiritual entertainment is almost zero.

This extreme example of pathology is of little reference value, but it is worth pondering.

The Holy Capital is special, in every way.

Relatively closed environments and stable lives have been replaced by an ever-increasing number of voters.

It's like a common idea in science fiction movies.

Treat man as one of the means of production, and make it exist as a thing rather than an independent person.

This is a very deep topic, and I will not go into it here.

I hope everyone can have their own understanding, thinking more may not necessarily be happier, but it is worth it.

After all, the biggest difference between humans and animals is that they can think.

Respond to the sisters around Su Xiao.

The first thing to state is that this book is not a harem.

It is possible that the heroine is anyone, depending on how the stock price develops.

There will be many new stocks in the future, and the female supporting actress who does not have many scenes in the early stage also has the possibility of turning over and becoming the heroine.

Of course, judging from the situation of the first part, it seems to be a big victory for Jiujiu.

But Su Xiao doesn't actually like Jiujiu, but the complex emotions of dependence and fear.

Jiujiu's physiognomy setting is naturally very poking Su Xiao's xp, but the development of the love line pays more attention to character and chances.

In Su Xiao's heart, Jiujiu's purpose was not clear, and he was more afraid of this companion of the Heavenly Descent Department.

Although Linlu has the advantage of strength and a colder personality, compared with the "all-knowing and all-powerful" Jiujiu, the ignorant Linlu seems to be more simple and cute.

As for who the author personally prefers......

Among the remaining characters, Lin or Qiyue.

Counting the ones that have already been bento, it is Su Yan.

There are actually a lot of stories between Su Yan and Qiyue Su Xiao, but due to the length and structure of the story, they don't tell much about it.

In fact, Su Yan is a very good girl, but it's a pity.

For Su Xiao. The story of the Yuan Spirit World has just begun, and for Jiujiu and Linlu, their plans have just begun.

Everything is still in the beautiful moment of looking forward to the future.

That's nice.

If the story ends here, it will also be a good ending.

But I'm not the kind of person who digs holes and doesn't fill them.

So, the second part will be updated tomorrow, no leave!

It's a story about a new city, a new region, a new setting, and all the new characters that have been hidden for a long time will appear, so stay tuned (if anyone sees this, QAQ)

Compared with the first part, the second part is more mature, the pace is faster, and the plot is fuller and richer.

Although the foreshadowing of the second part is more, the reading experience is better, after all, I will also improve, the first part is indeed a bit excessive, and the experimental writing is a bit much......

Of course, some friends who really can't stand the early stage can skip the first part and watch the second part directly, without delaying reading.

The plot of the first part, I have time to write an essence annotated version, and by the way, I will send out the timeline to help you understand the dark line and the plot.

Thank you to everyone who has read this, and hopefully, we can make it all the way to the end.

ps1: There is no tap water Amway party, the stand-alone machine is so desperate.

PS2: The first part is actually really good, and it's worth reading again and again. Shamelessly say the level of a scroll of gods.

Then the new volume, so stay tuned.