In a police car.

Seeing that Duan Zilian was on the phone, Ling Lanjing and Ling Shen, the two siblings, stopped talking and didn't bother Duan Zilian.

Although they didn't want to listen to Duan Zilian's conversation, they were sitting in the same police car, and they couldn't listen if they didn't want to.

told Xu Ying who called about the ins and outs of the matter, and Duan Zilian quickly hung up the phone.

Seeing Duan Zilian hang up the phone, Ling Shen couldn't hold back the curiosity in his heart, and couldn't help asking, "Duan Zilian, listen to what you just said, do you have a job in the afternoon?" ”

"Well, I got a job and worked odd jobs on the weekends to earn some pocket money." Putting the phone in his pocket, Duan Zilian replied casually, with no intention of going into detail at all.

"But aren't you a senior in high school? There is still a little more than a month to go before the college entrance examination, and you still have to do odd jobs on weekends, don't you review? Doesn't that affect your grades? Ling Shen asked in surprise.

"It's okay, it doesn't matter." Duan Zilian waved his hand indifferently.

"Oh." Ling Shen didn't say anything.

And Ling Lanjing preached to Ling Shen at this time: "Look at other people, they are also in high school, but they know how to work on weekends to make money and reduce the burden on the family, and you, on weekends, don't study hard, forget it, and write those messy things all day long, your grades have dropped a lot." ”

Unexpectedly, this could be preached by her sister, Ling Shen couldn't cry or laugh, and was also a little dissatisfied: "Sister, that's not a mess, but my spiritual sustenance, if you don't support me, forget it, but don't slander." ”

Hearing this, Ling Lanjing pursed her lips disapplausively: "Spiritual sustenance, the things you wrote yourself are purely for your own entertainment, even if you publish what you wrote on the website, how many people will read them?" ”

“…… Hum. Seeing that he couldn't talk about Ling Lanjing, Ling Shen was a little angry and didn't look away and ignored Ling Lanjing.

Seeing Ling Lanjing and Ling Shen arguing next to him, Duan Zipian couldn't help but feel curious: "You guys...... What are you talking about? ”

"It's nothing, it's just talking about what he wrote." Ling Lanjing pointed at Ling Shen, who was sulking.

"Are you writing?" Duan Zilian looked at Ling Shen, a little surprised.

"Uh-huh."

Ling Shen scratched his head embarrassedly, thought of one thing, and asked Duan Zilian, "By the way, are you?" ”

"When you're bored, watch some from time to time to pass the time." Duan Zilian replied casually.

"Can you help me see what I wrote? It's okay to help me increase some clicks. Ling Shen said expectantly.

"Okay, it's boring right now anyway, what's your name? I'll search for it. While speaking, Duan Zilian took out his mobile phone, opened the browser, and clicked into the search bar.

"Shining Light," Ling Shen said his name embarrassedly.

Enter Ling Shen's name in the search bar, Duan Zilian searched for it, and found Ling Shen's, click in and take a look, this has more than 300,000 words, but the score is not high, and judging from the number of comments, the number of clicks doesn't seem to be very good.

Anyway, Duan Zilian clicked in and took a look at Ling Shen's, and after reading a few chapters quickly, his face gradually became strange.

Although only

It's just a few chapters I've read, but Duan Zilian still understands the setting of Ling Shen's book.

To put it simply, to put it simply, there is an unprecedented crisis on the earth, and all kinds of huge monsters appear one after another, and at this moment, an alien life comes to the earth and merges with an earthling, so that the earthling can become a silver giant and fight against those monsters.

understands the setting of this book, and Duan Zilian feels that such a setting can be described in three words - vulgar.

Of course, this is not what makes his face strange.

After a brief reading of Ling Shen's book, Duan Zilian can be sure that the silver giant in it is definitely based on Nexus, and most of the monsters mentioned in the book are also based on the xenobiotic beasts that have appeared.

This is very clear, Ling Shen is based on Nexus and Xenobiotic Beasts, and then according to his own settings, he finally wrote this book.

Therefore, when reading this book, Duan Zilian felt a full sense of immediacy.

And when writing this book, Ling Shen gave the silver giant in the book a very middle two name.

Seriously, seeing such a straightforward name, Duan Zilian really feels full of slots, and even has an inexplicable sense of shame, and I feel that the second degree is really too explosive.

In addition, in this book, Ling Shen set the silver giant as an alien life form from the universe, combined with the earthling, and fought with the help of the earthling's body.

This is the main reason why Duan Zilian's face has become weird, after all, this setting is very similar to his own situation.

Of course, Duan Zilian didn't think that Ling Shen knew about him.

Therefore, Ling Shen was able to come up with such a setting, which was purely like a blind cat encountering a dead mouse.

"How?" Ling Shen didn't know what Duan Zilian was thinking, let alone notice Duan Zilian's face that had become strange, and after waiting by the side for a while, he couldn't wait to know Duan Zilian's opinion on his book, and he was a little nervous.

Without answering immediately and adjusting his mentality, Duan Zilian asked in turn, "Hmm...... The silver giant in you, and those monsters, are all based on the giants and monsters that appear in reality, right? ”

"Uh-huh." Ling Shen nodded.

got a clear answer, and Duan Zilian was a little helpless.

But this is also a matter of course, and now, the matter about Nexus and Xenobiotic is still very hot, and many merchants take this opportunity to put on the image of Nexus and sell all kinds of goods about Nexus.

In the circle, many authors have also made related creations.

When there was a shortage of books, Duan Zilian once took a look on the Internet and found that there were a lot of things about Nexus and Xenobiotic Beasts in the circle.

However, since those authors didn't know the origin of Nexus and Xenobiotics, they just created based on Nexus and Xenobiotics, and then added various settings by themselves.

This is the same as Ling Shen.

When I was bored, Duan Zilian also looked at these prototypes based on Nexus and Xenobiotic Beasts, some of the authors wrote very well, but more of them were written averagely, or even badly.

And Ling Shen's book

It's the kind that is poorly written.

After thinking for a while, Duan Zilian immediately answered Ling Shen's question.

"About you, let's be blunt, I'm not very optimistic. First of all, although I only read the first few chapters, I can easily see the setting of your book, how to say, the setting of your book...... I think it's quite cliché and very simple. ”

"It's okay, I also know that my setting is very cliché, but I've already made an outline and planned the development content for the future, such as how the silver giant came about, why those monsters appeared, and the twists and turns of the protagonist's later experience, etc., I've already thought about it, and I'll work out later." Ling Shen said seriously.

However, Duan Zilian shook his head.

"Although you have already conceived the outline and how to write it next, I still don't think much about this of yours, and my second reason is about this."

"To put it bluntly, I think your writing is very poor, and that's the biggest problem in your book. Even if you have already thought about the next development, but if you want to perfectly express the picture in your head, it is not easy, you need good writing, good writing can make the reader look at it, and the corresponding picture has already appeared in the mind. ”

"And the setting of your book is very simple and very cliché, but if you write well, the rhythm is very good, and the development of the follow-up plot can also be eye-catching, and yours can still attract a lot of readers.

"But the problem now is that your writing is not very good, very immature, and this has already dissuaded many readers."

To tell the truth, Ling Shen's writing is indeed not very good.

Although it is not very often, when he is there, he still has quite high requirements for the author's writing.

After all, good writing can bring it to life, and only then can readers imagine the corresponding picture in their minds according to the text, which is fascinating and even immersive.

But if the writing is not good, even if the setting is very good, it is useless.

When reading Ling Shen's book, Duan Zilian only read a few pages, and wanted to quit watching because of poor writing, but in the end he endured it and quickly flipped through a few chapters.

Seeing Duan Zilian so pointedly say the flaws of his book, Ling Shen couldn't help but show a disappointed expression.

But he didn't show an unexpected expression, and it was obvious that he knew that there was something wrong with him.

At this time, Ling Lanjing said: "His writing is not good, and his score in the composition part of the Chinese exam has always been relatively low. I can't even write Chinese composition, and I still want to write it, so it's strange that I can write it well. ”

"I also looked at it, and I couldn't stand it after just a little bit. It's so badly written, so he's already written so many words, but he hasn't been able to sign a contract with the website yet. ”

Duan Zilian looked at Ling Lanjing, and from her tone, she could hear that she had a lot of resentment about Ling Shen writing about it.

It's normal to think about it, Ling Shen is now in high school, and he should be studying seriously, but now he writes, and if he delays his studies, his academic performance will definitely decline, no wonder Ling Lanjing is so angry.