At night.

When it was time to eat, Hao Yun found a small restaurant near the company and arranged a table of appetizers.

Now that the company's financial situation is well-off, he didn't deliberately try to be thrifty, what fish-flavored shredded pork, tomato scrambled eggs, pork ribs stewed soup or something were all arranged, and he also ordered a case of beer.

The only pity is that there are fewer people and it is not too lively.

There are a total of three people on the side of Pastoral Pictures, the director and screenwriter plus a secretary, and Hao Yun comes by himself on the side of Yunmeng Entertainment, because it is inconvenient to talk about the script, he didn't even bring his Wolong and Phoenix Chicks.

The screenwriter sitting next to the field was named Wang Xingkai, and when he heard the name, he looked like a person who wrote a book.

It's just that the rough appearance is not a little bookish, but like a butcher shouting in the vegetable field.

Standing up with his glass, he handed out the wine to Hao Yun.

"Mr. Hao...... Or Brother Yunshen, when I was still in Yanjing before, I often heard people in the circle say that your words are written like poems, and the shape and meaning are impeccable. I salute you and your literary brilliance! ”

"You're welcome, you're welcome...... Mr. Hao doesn't have to, let's call me Hao Yun in the future. ”

"It's still Brother Yun! The name sounds good. ”

Tian Ye's eyes lit up, and he also nodded and smiled.

"I think it's okay! Let's call it Brother Yun! ”

In terms of age, Hao Yun is at least ten years behind them, but if he is called Xiaoyun, it seems impolite, so he simply calls Brother Yun.

This not only dilutes the age gap, but also does not appear to be raw.

Hao Yun didn't shirk either, and silently toasted everyone, which was regarded as a tacit acquiescence to this title.

"Brother Tian, I also have a toast, I wish our movie a smooth start and a smooth finish!"

"Haha, then I'll borrow your auspicious words! But you've done two things with this glass of wine, it's not very authentic, I have to have another drink with you! ”

"Well said!" Hao Yun smiled and touched a glass with Director Tian, and dried it first, "The wine is enough, everyone starts eating, let's not be polite." ”

In Hao Yun's impression, he had participated in this kind of thing many times in his previous life, so he was very handy when dealing with it.

What's more interesting is that whether it is in this life or the previous life, he has unexpectedly good drinking, even if he doesn't like to drink very much.

These successive bottles went down like drinking water, and I didn't feel it at all.

After drinking a few bottles of wine, the originally somewhat restrained atmosphere was also opened up with the smell of wine and chatterbox.

"Hey! I really didn't expect that at your age, you could write such a spiritual song! When I was a freshman, I couldn't sing songs, let alone write songs. ”

Tian Ye laughed and said.

"Haha, your broken voice, let alone more than ten years ago, you may not be able to sing anything if you sing it now."

Li Xiaohui, the secretary sitting next to him, also laughed and teased, "Others ask for money when they sing, but our old Wang sings for death!" ”

"Hahaha!"

Listening to the laughter of several people, Hao Yun also smiled in his heart.

Singing is terrible?

Coincidentally, there was one in his bedroom.

was ridiculed by Tian Ye and Secretary Li, but screenwriter Wang didn't take it to heart, but laughed and ridiculed himself.

"Hey, what's the solution? Those of us who can't sing can only buy words and earn some money to make a living. ”

"The writer is no worse than you, I see that the words that fireworks are easy to cold are really written in my heart!" Tian Ye laughed, and then looked at Hao Yun, "Brother Yun, I forgot to ask...... You've read the script too, how do you feel? ”

When he said this, Tian Ye actually had some show off in his heart.

Although the script is not perfect in his opinion, it is very close to the world in his heart.

Although it was a subjective feeling, he felt that Hao Yun's thoughts should be the same as his own.

However, what he didn't expect was that when he talked about the script, Hao Yun, who was holding the cup, frowned slightly, and it looked like things were not simple.

"Brother Tian, do you want to hear me tell the truth, or do you want to tell a lie?"

Tian Ye was slightly stunned, then looked at Wang Xingkai, and threw the topic to him with a smile.

"You decide!"

Wang Xingkai smiled and waved his hand and said.

"Just be honest, let's accept criticism! Anyway, this thing is just the first draft, and there will be changes later. ”

"Then I'll be honest," Hao Yun coughed lightly and said with a look on his face, "I'm afraid there are a lot of things that need to be changed in this script...... I don't think it's going to work like that. ”

There was silence in the room for a while.

Hearing the latter sentence, Tian Ye opened his mouth, and the expression on his face was a little incredible.

Secretary Li, who was sitting next to him, was the same, obviously he didn't expect Hao Yun to give such an evaluation.

On the other hand, the screenwriter Wang Xingkai, the expression on his face was even more excited, and his whole face was swollen into the color of pig liver.

He knew best how much effort it took to write that script.

But now someone actually told him that the outline part is not good?

If it's someone else, it's just that, no matter how well the article is written, there are people who don't have the right appetite, and the writer can't serve everyone.

But this person is the lyricist and composer of fireworks Yi Leng, who else can understand the feelings contained in that song better than him?

"Brother Yun, I have to say two words about you," Tian Ye coughed lightly, and said in a round, "We can speak in a tactful way......

Looking at the look that Tian Ye handed to him, although Hao Yun knew his kindness in his heart, he still felt a little helpless.

Didn't you ask me for my opinion?

Then I'll tell you the truth.

"It's okay, you have the most say in this song, your opinion is very important, not to mention that I also said it, I accept criticism," Wang Xingkai shook his head, raised his glass and stood up, "Brother Yun, I respect you for this cup!" ”

With that, he touched his glass with Hao Yun, who also stood up, and then drank the wine in the cup briskly.

Looking at Wang Xingkai, who was obviously angry in his stomach, Tian Ye tried to comfort him.

"Lao Wang, don't take it to heart, Brother Yun is just putting forward opinions, you have been doing writing work for so many years, and I have been scolded less?"

"I didn't go to my heart, but I just had something I wanted to ask!"

With the smell of wine in his eyes, Wang Xingkai reluctantly sat back in his chair, stared straight at Hao Yun, and said with some unconvinced emotion, "I just want to know, you said that there is a problem with my outline, what is the problem?" ”

Looking at Wang Xingkai, who was more serious, Tian Ye shook his head with a smile.

Just as he was pondering how to play this round, Hao Yun, who was sitting across the wine table, slowly spoke.

"Brother Wang, first of all, I have to say that I didn't mean to be offended."

Wang Xingkai nodded vigorously.

"I know! I don't mean anything else, I just want to ask for advice! ”

Hao Yun: "First of all, in terms of the background of the story, I don't think you need to set it as the Wei State during the period of separation, and then apply the usual routines of those classical martial arts movies. I'm just suggesting...... Why don't you just empty a world? ”

"Overhead?" Wang Xingkai was stunned, "How can it be so easy...... Again, this is not writing a fairy tale. We have to consider the audience's viewing experience, as well as the most important sense of substitution! ”

Regarding this statement, Director Tian also nodded, looked at Hao Yun and said sincerely.

"It's a difficult thing to overturn the worldview, especially for the film we're going to make."

And yet—

Hao Yun had his own ideas.

"I don't think the alternate worldview necessarily affects the sense of substitution in the film, as long as it can be logically justified, I even think that the alternate worldview can create a unique viewing experience, so that the audience does not have to be entangled in the historical background of the story, but focuses on the story itself."

"I can probably guess that this script is probably based on the emotional line, and I want to shoot the kind of love that transcends time...... Or something like that. However, the most fatal point of my own feeling after reading the script is that the elements are too complicated, which dilutes the existence of the main line itself. ”

After hearing these words, a deep thought appeared on Tian Ye's face.

This sentence can be regarded as speaking to his heart.

The movies he has made over the years seem to have problems in this regard.

I wanted to shoot everything, I wanted to shoot everything to be the best, but in the end, because there were too many elements fused, I didn't shoot anything well.

"What do you think...... How should this script be changed? ”

Looking at the serious and consultative expression on Tian Ye's face, a hint of approval appeared in Hao Yun's eyes.

Not bad.

Although the potential is only 1, it can be persuaded unexpectedly.

It's better than the second thing in his bedroom who pouted like a donkey.

"It's very simple to change the law, delete unnecessary things, and important things will naturally come to the fore."

Hearing this ambiguous statement, a wry smile appeared on the face of Secretary Li, who had been sitting next to him and had not spoken.

And Wang Xingkai's screenwriter's reaction was more direct, and he couldn't help but say a word.

"It's so easy to say, change the outline...... I'll see if you change it. ”

Hearing this, Hao Yun raised his eyebrows.

Hey?

Let me change it?

Okay!

It's not nonsense, Hao Yun filled his cup, stood up and drank it in one gulp.

After about three or five seconds of emotion, he retraced the small memories he had drawn from the fragments of his memory, and with the inspiration he had gained from a notebook, he opened his mouth to speak.

"During the Southern Dynasties, the heroes competed for each other, and the soldiers continued to fight year after year. And the Luoyang of Emperor Wen of the Song Dynasty is ten miles of willows, ten thousand ancient temples, prosperous and picturesque, and a prosperous ......"

Although in his memory, there is no detailed content about the original work of "Luoyang Jialan Temple", but when he unlocked the song "Fireworks Are Easy to Cold" from the memory fragments, the background story and related memories of this song were also unlocked.

It might be a bit difficult to get him to write a script from start to finish, but if it's just an outline......

It's really not that hard for him.

Responding to the three pairs of shocked eyes, Hao Yun continued in a white tone.

"In this picturesque Luoyang, a general met a folk woman, and the two fell in love at first sight and made a private decision for life."

"However, the good times did not last long, the Northern Wei soldiers suddenly rose, waved the army south, broke Rouran, forcibly crossed the Yellow River, and pointed at Luoyang, on the other hand, the Song State was repeatedly defeated, and there was no enemy on the front line."

On the one hand, the righteousness of the family and the country, and on the other hand, the love of the children, the general took the woman's hand, promised that he would return to her, and turned over on the horse. And no one thought that this parting was a farewell to life and death. ”

"The war disasters have been going on for many years, and Luoyang, which is extremely prosperous, has long been in decline, and the willows of the ten miles have also been burned to ashes."

"The woman couldn't wait, shaved her hair and became a nun, right next to the green lantern ancient Buddha, and lived this life."

Many years later, the general returned from the storm and found the ancient temple of Garan, but the sweetheart was no longer there. The old monk who was knocking on the wooden fish told him that someone had been waiting for him. ”

"The heavy rain is pouring down, the shepherd flute outside the city is leisurely, the general looks around, the old capital is dilapidated, the mountains and rivers are trampled, so he cut his hair and became a monk, escaped into the empty door, and spent the rest of his life to accompany the ancient Buddha with the green lantern and listen to the eternal rain."

When Hao Yun finished reading the last word, there was silence in the previously lively box.

Whether it is Director Tian or screenwriter Wang, or Secretary Li, who has no ink in his stomach, they are all there.

Is this a current fabrication?

And just in the minute or two?

Wang Xingkai swallowed his saliva, unable to describe the shock in his heart in words, let alone contain the inspiration gushing out like a fountain.

Almost as soon as he listened to the outline of the dictation, a new script had already taken shape in his mind, and in comparison, the one he had written before was simply scum!

This is the first time I have felt this way......

It's a blast!