Wang Wenyun came out after washing her hands in the toilet, and she was very happy today, because she wrote another article last night, and showed it to her colleagues today, they all praised themselves for their good writing, beautiful words, and full artistic conception, etc., which also made Wang Wenyun very confident and felt that this submission would definitely pass.

Wang Wenyun hummed a tune and walked to the library service desk, and before he arrived, he saw Su Chen reading his own article, and when Wang Wenyun walked behind Su Chen, Su Chen had already finished reading it.

I saw Su Chen hand the pages of letter to Han Minghao and said, "What are you writing?" Bullshit doesn't make sense, and it's sad to say that it's all sad and sad, flashy...... This thing was written by a schoolgirl, right? ”

Su Chen criticized it, and suddenly felt that the atmosphere was a little wrong, this handwriting was for girls, only He Ruxin was a female teacher present, Su Chen didn't see Wang Wenyun who had come back and stood behind him.

Su Chen raised his eyes and looked at He Ruxin, "Teacher He, this can't be what you wrote, right?" Su Chen was a little embarrassed, if it was really written by He Ruxin, would he have criticized too much just now, and it was in front of him.

Although Su Chen really doesn't like this kind of flashy article, although it looks like a gorgeous rhetoric and quotes scriptures, the actual content is not at all, as if he has said everything, but he has not said anything.

If you want to talk about the content, no one has said "I, Qin Shi Huang, play money!" "The expression is direct, and the focus and content of the expression are very concise and clear, which is fundamentally different from this kind of flowery rhetoric that goes around and around.

"Not mine!" He Ruxin answered truthfully, she saw Wang Wenyun, who was already black-faced behind Su Chen, and she didn't know how to continue.

It was Han Minghao who answered at this time, "That, Su Chen, this is an article written by Mr. Wang and ready to be submitted to Dream magazine." ”

"What Mr. Wang? Which Mr. Wang? Su Chen of "Dream" magazine is naturally clear, Su Chen also discussed it with Wang Wenyun on the day of the sports meeting, as if he had not had time to return the money for the "Dream" magazine and chewing gum he bought! Su Chen thought.

"That's it, Wang Wenyun, Teacher Wang, she's right behind you......" Han Minghao was also frightened by Wang Wenyun's black face, and his voice became smaller and smaller, for fear that Wang Wenyun would be angry.

"Uh-" Su Chen had a bad premonition, just now he felt that he was cold behind his back, as if there was a knife behind him.

Su Chen turned his head slightly, glanced at Wang Wenyun with the corner of his eye, and saw that Wang Wenyun had an expression of being undefeated in the East and wanting to kill all the negative men in the world at this time, which made Su Chen tremble, and quickly turned his head back, and then snatched the stack of letter paper that had just been returned to Han Minghao.

"Ahaha, I just joked with you, look at this letter, it's long and wide, and it's black and bright......

Look at this article again, witty words, describing this lonely state of mind, and then look at the description of this scenery, how clever it is, there is a feeling of jumping on the paper.

By the way, there is a small short poem in this article, really, the pen is shocking, and the poem is crying ghosts and gods. Since then, the fame has been great, and it has not been extended for a while.

Finally, let's take a look at this ending, the word 'dream' is used three times in a row, and the end is an exclamation point, one word, three exclamation points.

Although there is only one word for 'dream', it profoundly expresses the author's helplessness and poignant emotions, which can be described as concise and concise, a thousand words, a single word exciting, tear-jerking, enough to see the author's solid writing skills and handy writing skills and tragic innovation ability. It's really an admirable five-body throw!

Plus end with three exclamation points. The first exclamation point laments the helplessness of the thing itself. The second exclamation mark laments the helplessness of society. The third exclamation mark laments the impermanence of life! The finishing touch, the wonderful pen, the artistic conception is far-reaching, according to the previous text, sublimation of the theme, the author's feelings are vividly expressed, giving people infinite touching and melancholy, there is a sense of naturalness, it is the best in the article, the best in the prose. ”

Su Chen said a lot of things freely, and used up all the peerless learning of his life, before he took a breath and secretly glanced at Wang Wenyun.

Han Minghao was shocked by Su Chen's wave of blind √8, He Ruxin and the other two teachers were also stunned, didn't you just say bullshit? Have all one's goods in the window?

Why has it become a rare good article in the world?

After Su Chen finished praising it, it seemed that he had just discovered Wang Wenyun's appearance, "Yo, Brother Yun is back, is this the article you wrote?" It's just amazing, we have time to communicate, and I have some research on writing articles. ”

Su Chen's face was not red and his heart was not beating, as if he was not the one who sprayed this article worthless before.

"Well, I wrote it, but I think you're right!" Wang Wenyun snatched her manuscript back from Su Chen's hand.

Su Chen: "I'll just say, this splendid article ......"

"I mean, what you said earlier, for the sake of new words, you are right, this article is flashy, no wonder other editors-in-chief will reject the manuscript!" Wang Wenyun interrupted Su Chen's words.

"Hiss~hiss~hiss~" After Wang Wenyun finished speaking, he directly tore up the manuscript paper in his hand.

"Brother Yun, you ......" Before Su Chen could stop it, the letter paper was torn up by Wang Wenyun.

"Uh, I'll have class later, I'll go first!" At this time, a teacher saw the scene in front of him and felt that it was better to run away first.

"I also have classes, so I'll go first!"

"And me!" He Ruxin also slipped away, and now only Han Minghao is left.

"That, I'm ......" Han Minghao didn't have classes during this time, his classes were arranged for other teachers, he was playing with two old men during this time, this is well known, and he couldn't find any good excuses for a while.

"Your stomach hurts!" Su Chen helped Han Minghao find an excuse.

"Yes, yes, my stomach hurts, I'll go to the toilet first!" Han Minghao hurriedly covered his stomach and ran away.

Now there are only two left, Su Chen and Wang Wenyun, "I'm sorry! Su Chen was the first to speak.

"No, I mean really, you're right, I don't blame you!

I used to show them just to ask them to find fault with me, but after they read it, it was just like the second time you lied, it was all praise, and no one pointed out the fault to me at all, I myself was an insider, I couldn't see the problem, and no one pointed out the problem to me. ”

Wang Wenyun's stack of torn manuscript paper was thrown into the wastebasket, and he took out a stack of manuscript paper from the drawer, which seemed to be a draft that had been submitted before, and Wang Wenyun tore all of them and threw them into the wastebasket.

Wang Wenyun had just heard Su Chen say that what she wrote was flashy and had no content, and she was very sad at first, but after she heard Su Chen's compliments later, she thought about the difference between Su Chen's compliments and those teachers before?

Anyway, everyone praises you, no one wants to find fault with you at all, Su Chen was the first to tell the truth, and Wang Wenyun remembered that the articles in "Dream" magazine seem to have content and examples, which can inspire people to read, or have sympathy and resonance, etc.

It's not like what she wrote at all, it's empty, maybe she wrote in the wrong direction at the beginning, and now Wang Wenyun knows how to write it, not only does she not blame Su Chen, but she wants to thank Su Chen for pointing out her problem.

"Heaven and earth conscience, what I say is the truth!" Su Chen is reluctant to admit that he lied, the child who lies is not a good child, his own lie is at most a white lie, it is positive energy!

"I already know how to write it in the future, thank you, Su Chen!" Wang Wenyun feels that she has found a new direction of thought and knows what to write in the future.

"Do you still want to contribute?" Su Chen asked.

"Well, my dream is that my article will be featured in Dream magazine!" Speaking of her dreams, Wang Wenyun fell into a fond memory, which was the scene where her mother, who used to read articles to their twin sisters with the magazine "Dream", and she and her sister Lin Wenxin had been sitting obediently and listening.

……

After Wang Wenyun went to class, Su Chen sat in the library, thought for a while, took out his mobile phone, found a phone and dialed it.

"Hey!"

Su Chen: "Grandpa, it's me!" ”

"It's my good grandson, why do you have time to call grandpa, are you home?"

"No, I'm just looking for something with you!"

"What's the matter?" Grandpa Su is also a cheerful person, knowing Su Chen's temperament, he generally doesn't call when he has nothing to do, and there are not so many old things to talk about between men.

"That's it, grandpa, do you remember, when I was a child, I used firecrackers to blow up the window of his house...... What is his phone number I have something to do with him. Su Chen said his purpose.

"Why don't you remember? Lao Gaobei, at that time, you also fried other people's cats, hit the vase, the water leaked, and the TV was burned for others, didn't you also punish you for copying "Lisao" a hundred times......" As soon as Grandpa Su talked about the past, his mouth stopped.

"Gotta get it, grandpa, it's all old, just say if you have his phone number, I'm in a hurry!" Su Chen hurriedly stopped Grandpa Su from digging up his own troubles and telling them again.

"Yes, I'll ask the secretary to send it to you later, you, go home and see your mother if you're fine, your mother misses you a lot!"

"Got it, I'll hang up first."

Soon after Su Chen hung up the phone, he received a message from an unfamiliar number, and the message was a contact information and name.

"Editor-in-Chief of Dream Magazine: Gao Jie 139XXXX1234"

Half an hour later, Grandpa Su received a call from his old friend Gao Jie.

"Old Gao, what is that kid looking for you?" Grandpa Su knew that Lao Gao's call was naturally about Su Chen, anyway, if Su Chen didn't say it, Lao Gao would definitely say it.

"It's nothing, that is, if you receive a submission from a person named 'Wang Wenyun' in the future, can you give her some comments and help her improve, look at the name is a girl, your grandson is looking for a girlfriend?" Gao Jie told Grandpa Su exactly what Su Chen asked him to do.

Although he had sworn to Su Chen a minute ago that he would never tell anyone.