Ye Jinxiao didn't know what was going on.

Xiao Yanzhi didn't tell her afterwards.

In his opinion, there was no need to tell him about this matter, as long as he knew about these bad things.

Ye Jinxiao didn't ask, she had other important things to do now.

Xiao Yanzhi glanced at what she was writing and quickly looked away, but looked back again.

"I feel like there's something wrong here."

Originally, Ye Jinxiao didn't know anything about the battlefield, so when she heard Xiao Yanzhi say this, she immediately gave up her position.

"Then you have time to help me look at these, I don't understand it in the first place, I originally planned to read some history books."

Xiao Yanzhi has been very busy these days, and she is embarrassed to trouble him with this little thing of hers, so she plans to check some information.

But he didn't expect that he would find some of his problems so easily.

You're welcome at the moment, and immediately asked.

"There are indeed some omissions in these places, and the thinking is too idealistic."

The few places that Xiao Yanzhi drew at random were all the places where Ye Jinxiao felt that he had not written well before.

"It's just these places, I really don't have any other way, I can't write well."

Like other battlefield stories, she can give them to the rest of the authors in the study to study.

But this book, she really wants to write it to the man in front of her, so she has to write it herself.

"If Xiaoxiao doesn't care, I'll think of some plots for you, how about you write it?"

"Naturally, it couldn't be better."

Ye Jin smiled and narrowed his eyes.

"I wanted to talk to you about it, but I never found the right time."

"But if you say so, then I'm willing."

Speaking of which, she added, "But everything still depends on your own time, and if you have enough time, then you can't ask for it." ”

"I'll arrange these things, don't worry."

Xiao Yanzhi took the red pen to modify a few places, but found that he was still not satisfied.

It's just that it's getting late now.

"I'll take a look at it first, and as for other things that need to be modified, we'll discuss them in detail tomorrow, so you can rest early."

"Okay."

Ye Jinxiao yawned, a little tear appeared in the corners of his round eyes, and there were many red bloodshots in his eyes.

"Rest early."

Because of such a strong foreign aid as Xiao Yanzhi, Ye Jinxiao is not too worried about some details of his writing in the future.

In this way, she has a lot more time for herself.

Thinking of what she mentioned to Lu Shiyu a few days ago, she planned to go out of the house to take a look.

Looking at Xibao's stunned appearance on the side, Ye Jinxiao also brought people with him.

When he arrived at the theater, Ye Jinxiao found that it was crowded with people, which was even more exaggerated than when the new script came out before.

Not wanting to disturb anyone, she quietly took Xibao inside.

Lu Shiyu happened to come over today to see the effect.

Sweeping to the first floor, he saw the master and servant, and immediately asked someone to bring them up.

"Today is the first singing of this play, you can take a closer look."

Lu Shiyu's face was very complacent, thinking that he had a full grasp of this scene.

"You're so sure that it makes no difference between me watching it and not watching it."

"Since you came up with this idea, I want to get your approval."

Lu Shiyu looked at her complacently.

Xibao listened to the conversation between the two people, and knew that the next big scene was also thought up by his own girl, and the worship in his eyes was almost overflowing.

"Don't be obsessed with me, my sister is just an ordinary little genius."

Xibao blinked indescribably.

"The girl still doesn't talk much, and you look very advanced when you don't speak."

Ye Jinxiao glanced at the little girl.

These days, my hard work has not been in vain, and now I can even joke with her.

Knowing that Ye Jinxiao would not be angry with him, Xibao also smiled and bent his eyes.

Lu Shiyu asked Ye Jin to smile back to his senses, "The show has already begun, and according to what you said before, we have also changed some of it slightly." ”

"The previous ones are all done according to what you said, and there shouldn't be much of a problem, but this new part may need to be given more opinions."

Originally, I had to wait for Ye Jinxiao to watch it before deciding whether to act or not.

But it's true that there isn't so much time.

The expenses and publicity in the early stage have already been made, and if there is no silver return, it will be a very big problem for him.

Ye Jinxiao nodded and looked downstairs wholeheartedly.

After the people downstairs appeared on the stage, a heated discussion immediately broke out.

First, they really haven't seen such a costume, even if they were born in the golden place of the capital.

Second, I was really surprised.

The idea that Ye Jinxiao gave them before was some singing methods in the capital in her previous life, and compared to a layman like him, some people who specialized in singing music must know better, so she just left it alone.

Lu Shiyu can make the Lu family's business wider and bigger, and there must be a lot of people under his hands.

So that's what she was relieved about.

Listening carefully, the people on the stage sang tactfully and melodiously.

This play is the overlord Farewell Concubine in the previous life.

Because she watched a movie, she also watched this Peking Opera, and she remembered some of the details clearly.

That's why I was able to hand over the book to Lu Shiyu so reassuringly.

"If I could, I would like to keep the original ending and not make any changes to the ending, but some other details are handled very well."

Farewell My Concubine, as the name suggests, is parting.

If it is reunited, it will certainly bring people a good experience of watching the show, but the aftertaste is not deep.

It wasn't what she wanted.

"The theater was originally a mixed place, and the people who came and went were not only ministers who lived in the temple, but also people who were far away from the rivers and lakes."

"It's not just the big men, it's the little women."

Ye Jinxiao just expressed his thoughts word by word.

"Don't lose a big deal by being small."

Originally, Lu Shiyu thought that his change was extremely subtle, but after listening to Ye Jinxiao, he also felt that the ending was a little far-fetched.

"I'll take care of this matter, don't worry."

"Hmm."

After watching a play, it was already noon.

Lu Shiyu also had to convene the person in charge of the theater to have a small meeting, and Ye Jinxiao didn't stay here to disturb them, so he took Xibao and left first.

"Take whatever you want, I'll pay the bill."

"Thank you, girl."