13. The language is more attractive

Because Li Qianqian was not worried about his daughter, because it was a holiday, and there was nothing to do, he stayed and prepared lunch with the master, and the four of them sat around and had a good lunch.

Li Yimeng, immersed in the breeze praising you. In fact, Qingfeng's praise of him really touched his heart, from childhood to adulthood, everyone praised himself for his beauty when he saw him, and he could use the best words to describe his appearance, and he was sometimes embarrassed to say that he was. But no one has ever boasted about how good he is in his studies, because of his academic performance, he has always been helping you at the bottom, although his mother is a teacher, and he is a teacher in the general affairs department of a key high school, but his parents have never had extravagant expectations for him, his boyish character, his big grinning style, a bad idea, in addition to being naughty or naughty, has long been favored by his parents, but because he is a girl, they are embarrassed to manage themselves very seriously, especially extreme long-term self-governance.

How many times had she heard of it? When Dad wanted to be admitted to university, in the mountains of his hometown, it caused a great sensation, and there were banquets in ten miles and eight villages, as a big happy event, many villagers came to the house to give gifts, and Dad did not disappoint the hopes of the villagers, graduated from a key university, and was assigned back to his hometown as a civil servant, and fell into the province within a few years, and now he is a director of a certain bureau, and it can be said that he has a successful career. But what he is most heartwarming about is that he has such a daughter, the top student of the year, his daughter's academic performance is at the bottom, he will never dare to say his daughter's study in front of others, because he feels ashamed, and he can't let him say that grade, so no matter how successful his career is in front of others, he has a heart disease, and he can't say it but hide it in his heart. This time during the holiday of the 11th Golden Week, he was determined to accompany his daughter every day and accompany him to tutor, even if his grades were improved to the middle and he could be admitted to an average key high school, then he would be happy and blooming.

Although he wanted to rectify the breeze at the beginning, but his little trick was seen through at a glance, and he put himself aside, the two of them interacted, talked and laughed, and solved all the problems encountered by Yu Fangfang, and he was a beautiful girl, but he was left aside, had no right to speak, could only listen passively, which strongly stimulated his self-esteem, he secretly made up his mind, I must do my study, I collapsed my heart to tutor, I can't let you look down on me, I want to get back my own self-esteem, let you praise me every day, let my parents be proud of me, anyway, there is still a year, I am not stupid, I use my naughty brain in learning, I don't believe that I can't surpass you, I don't believe that I can't be admitted to a key high school, I don't believe that I can be admitted to a first-class key high school, I want to make up my mind, admitted to Guiyang No. 1 Middle School, become your junior brother, see that you dare to look down on me at that time. This naughty little princess has been silent since then, and has put all his thoughts on his own competition, who is he competing with? Fight against the breeze, let the actions prove it, and don't allow him to look down on himself; Competing with my parents, I can no longer make you proud of my beauty, but make you proud of my studies, through a year of hard work, I will definitely become your pride; Compete with yourself, why do people look down on you? Isn't it because your academic performance is not good? Why don't you work hard yourself? There is still a year to go, let go of all the things in my heart, and I don't believe that I can't surpass myself if I study seriously.

Yu Fangfang was the happiest at this meal, because he thought that the most boring mathematics, today he was so handy to start the problem, Qingfeng explained it so clearly, so easy to remember, and thought of a lot of formula rules, it turned out that the main thing was that his logic was wrong, and he was not so strict when he did the problem, he did not become a mathematical system, and there were many problems on the basis, and there were great difficulties in further learning. Improved their thinking ability, all the exercises have become so easy, all the problems have become their own fun, it turns out that learning will have this feeling, sitting opposite his little brother, his appearance is not good, but his kung fu in learning, is really admirable, more reasonable and transparent than the teacher, his language is more acceptable, what a mysterious person this is, and his age difference is one or two years, why is he so smart? It seems that because of the good foundation of the family, coupled with the right method, his learning will be like a tiger with wings, I must study hard with him, use a year to be admitted to Guiyang No. 1 Middle School, become his younger brother and sister, and also make my parents proud of me, you make me proud of myself, bring them greater surprises.

Qingfeng looked at the two beautiful girls, one changed from lively to silent, the other changed from silence to laughter, the change in the mood of the two of them, did not escape from Qingfeng's eyes at all, it seems that their strategy has taken pictures, starting from the most basic knowledge, building the self-confidence of the two of them in learning, more important than teaching them to solve a few problems, give full play to their own initiative, so that their brains can turn up to solve the problems they encounter independently, this is the biggest goal of this 7-day tutoring, It looks like the initial effect has been achieved.

In the golden October, on the Yunnan-Guizhou Plateau, the beautiful city of Guiyang, dressed in festive costumes, three young boys and girls, did not have time to enjoy the beautiful scenery, in the warm sunshine, in the gentle autumn breeze, the three of them walked back to the reading room from the canteen. This time Li Yimeng became very silent, but Yu Fangfang was very lively. Qingfeng saw this kind of scene and deliberately talked to Li Yimeng.

Qingfeng, "Li Yimeng, do you have any questions this morning?" Can we discuss it? ”

Li Yimeng, "Why do you look down on me?" Do we need to discuss such a simple question again? In the afternoon, we will continue to sit in on the questions, and if there are any questions, we will discuss them again. ”

Qingfeng, "Yu Fangfang, what do you think?" Our afternoon theme is Chinese, how do we review? I'll listen to you, you can talk about it. But before I said that, I had to tell you a question, that is, you are not allowed to call me little brother anymore, just call me classmate, we are already one grade apart, okay? ”

Yu Fangfang's face turned a little red, "Okay, let's call you classmate Li Yufeng." Li Yufeng, I have no problem with the rest of my language, and I am the best in the Chinese class in each subject, although the grades in the class, I still belong to the middle stream, but the top, I deduct the most points is the composition, I always feel that there is nothing to write, pick up the pen to write a paragraph, the next paragraph can not be written, I don't know what to write. ”

Li Yimeng, "You can still write a paragraph, I have a headache when I mention the composition, dragging it around, and I don't know what they are writing, anyway, I can't think of it, and I can't write it." ”

Qingfeng, "That's easy to do, let's write a paragraph today, see who observes carefully, the three of us write each other, Yu Fangfang writes Li Yimeng, Li Yimeng writes me, I write Yu Fangfang." We'll comment on it after we've finished writing, what do you think? ”

Both little girls said they had no problem and started writing. After 20 minutes, all three of them had finished.

Qingfeng first picked up Yu Fangfang's composition and looked at it carefully, "Yu Fangfang's composition is very well written, the observation is particularly detailed, Li Yimeng's posture is written vividly, and the expression is depicted very clearly, it is a good small composition, although the time is very short, and the article is not long, but it captures the essence, especially the description of the eyes, a little bit into the wood, the writing is both objective and smart, so that people have imagination after reading." ”

Qingfeng continued, "Although Li Yimeng only wrote 4 sentences, he is also a living portrait of me, and the metaphor is also very appropriate, am I just a dirt bun?" Will use this colloquial to write articles, indicating that you are very down-to-earth, the article reads, and is also very life-like, and also said that you can't write it, I think the writing is very good, if we use the eye of observation, just write a thing, a person, must be carefully observed, with the appropriate words to show them, you have written. To write characters, you need to be specific, detailed, described, and use language that people can understand, and express them appropriately, and the character will come out. It would be better if it went further, through language, through his every move, to tap into his mental activity, it would be more vivid and more engaging. We can write it again, don't repeat the language just now, you can write one more sentence if you can, if you can learn 10 more sentences, that's progress. Writing an essay is the same as learning knowledge, we must improve little by little, show our writing level, show our language expression ability, and also show our rhetorical level and grammar mastery. I suggest that the two of you, starting from today, learn to write an observation diary, don't be exhaustive, only write one thing or one person every day, write things clearly, write people thoroughly and appropriately, it won't take 10 days, you will write articles, you won't lift the pen, I don't know what to write, we just accumulate bit by bit, and finally you won't be stunned, the plot is set reasonably, and it is a long article in series, and at the same time pay attention to your rhetorical devices, grammar points, fewer sick sentences, and no sick sentences in the end. ”

Qingfeng, "This is a short article I wrote in Fang Fang, I won't read it to you, you take it back and take a look, is it in line with reality?" The heart of Yu Fangfang that I dug is right? Yu Fangfang, you can check it yourself, isn't that the case? ”

The two girls were praised by the breeze and couldn't find the north. The teacher has always found fault in the composition, and has never praised the good sentences, essays, rhetoric, and grammar he wrote, so that he has no confidence in writing anything. When it came to Qingfeng's mouth, his short words made him embarrassed to praise him.

Qingfeng, "Let's not talk about composition now, let's find out the ancient poems of the first grade first, I won't explain today, I will take the two of you to read aloud 10 times, when reading, you should try to remember, after 10 times of reading, I hope you can recite these poems, go back today, you consolidate it, memorize it completely familiar with him, write down the new words and words in it, go back and copy it a few times, and remember it while copying us." We're here tomorrow, let's take a quiz first, see how many of these 10 poems are poems, how many have you memorized? Don't force me to memorize as much as I want, I'll tell you tomorrow why you can remember these and forget those, the work of the language is mainly carried out by memorization, if we learn what we learn in the front, and forget it in the back, then we have no accumulation, and the learning of the language is a mere formality. We have to memorize while learning, remember those good poems, good articles, good sentences, and good rhetorical devices in our hearts and engrave them in our memory. ”

The one-hour Chinese tuition class allowed the two of them to build up their self-confidence in learning Chinese, and both of them now have the urge to write something, and their minds are full of all kinds of beautiful sentences, beautiful words, and fine grammar, just like music, playing a nameless melody in their hearts.

Qingfeng strictly grasped the time, and when the two girls were listening attentively, Qingfeng stopped abruptly, letting their thoughts fly, and let the minds of the two girls open a crack, and those exquisite articles became their own words. The mystery of the Chinese class and the demeanor of the language made the two of them a little fascinated.