To be a man, you must have a strong number in your heart

One by one

First, the setting of this volume of Kowloon Walled City Boxing Ring draws on the work of Mr. Canghai Boiled into Wine, "The Great Hero of Rebirth" (a great work, my budding newcomer is far from comparable)

In fact, when it comes to the inspiration of this volume, the action design, and the background are also inspired by many movies, such as "Provincial and Hong Kong Flag Soldiers" by the Mai brothers, "Underworld" directed by Johnny To, the cold weapon literary film "Master", and the Kill the Wolf series (Zhang Jin beats Wu Jing Tony Jia's action design has gossip palm things, I will talk nonsense?) Kowloon Walled City, the supernatural legend of the ghost mother cooking. Wait, students who like Hong Kong films must know what I'm talking about.

However, it is also an online article, and this aspect is naturally more sensitive, and it is hereby famous, and the contemptible person has no intention of offending Mr. Canghai. As to whether the plots are similar, readers can judge for themselves. Book review area with rhythm lock post (expressionless)

Second, thank you, thank you to all the book friends in Longkong for recommending me, a little guy who can't even hit the street, more than once, more than one. Thanks, thanks.

Thanks to the main master of the starting point book list for adding this book to the book list, among which Yang Chenkong's big guy is like thunder, and I can see this big guy in every book review at the starting point. Is it really a young lady? (Eyes glow)

Thank you for the comments of all the book friends in the book review area, every comment of yours has made me experience the fun of code words, thank you, thank you very much. Thank you to every book friend for pointing out the shortcomings of this book, although for some reason, I may not have revised it, or even replied, but I have seen it, and thank everyone who really gave comments to my book. Thanks to the pile of old papers, I can't write those things very well (I haven't read many books), and it also gave me some inspiration. Finally, are you a young lady (looking forward to the face)

Third, to be a man, you must have a strong number in your heart

The gap between the book and the book was experienced when it was written, and before writing about the weapon battle between Li Yan and Xu Tianci, I watched the Great Hero of Rebirth again.

How can I say it, there is a difference of 10,000 *** between me and Teacher Cang.

The pace of the story, the details of the writing, is far from the same, every time a reader says it. Not bad. With the taste of a big hero, I'm a little embarrassed.

Far from it......

I'll be better in the future, though.

When this book is 100,000 words, it was not low on Youshu.com, far exceeding the actual level of this book.

It may be everyone's resentment that Teacher Canghai doesn't write books, love the house and Wu, or maybe there are not many articles like this in me recently.

But there is one thing that I have to count.

Moreover, the book is not written about Guoshu and Hong Kong. At least not just Guoshu and Hong Kong.

I wrote about Guoshu, in addition to having relatives at the beginning, but also because the last book was written by the disciples who accumulated a lot of traditional martial arts materials, so there is no need to waste it......

4 miscellaneous

Please do not whip the Cantonese question, you will not repeat it in the future, even if it involves dialects, the amount will be greatly reduced.

There are a lot of problems in this volume, such as I buried too many threads, although most of them have heads and tails, (are there any holes that have not been filled), but messy! Because of the poor pen power, the relaxation is unreasonable, especially in the section with Liansheng, once the writing floated, this is not a fast-paced and infinite flow of writing!

This is a serious problem that I'll fix in the next few stories.

Second, the character building and cool points, not enough, I don't think it's enough, there should be something to dig out, but I haven't dug it out, and the character building is procrastinating, and many characters can be written more concisely and powerfully.

Third, the rush of time creates a fallacious narrative.

For example, I arranged for Li Yan to fool Prince Le, which was supposed to be a hot drama here, but for some reason, I cut the role of these people, changed the hot drama to a literary drama, and didn't dare to let Li Yan participate in the chaotic war.

But in the narrative of the literary drama, many book friends saw that Li Yan was really going to rebel.

This has been revised here, it shouldn't be wrong again, and some people think that Li Yan wants to kill Ah Xiu, this is not a problem of book friends, my problem, people come to read books to seek coolness, you Rory can't explain clearly, of course you have to take the blame.

Third, the character of the protagonist, in fact, I think Li Yan's character is very clear, but after reading it, I feel that it is not very good. The pen power will not be repeated, but also answer the questions of some book friends

That is, it is about chivalry and martial arts and evil.

My point of view is, write a chivalrous word, first raise three points of evil spirit!

I don't agree with Mr. Jin Yong's chivalrous man, for the country and the people (rational discussion, don't scold the street)

A chivalrous man is for the country and the people, what do you want to be an official? Guo Jing and his wife guard Xiangyang, and the court eats dry rice?

The greatness of chivalry does not need the cowardice and incompetence of those in power to set off, but often encounters the ruthless crushing of the system and the world.

Chivalrous word, big deal.

Fierce and ruthless, righteous and squandering wealth, and never retreating until death. It will be used by others, and it will become a pawn. He is not a perfect thing, but a bleak undertone under the system and the overall situation. But it is the most humane thing in China in the past 5,000 years.

It's far away, the essay, believe in the horse, Li Yan is not a chivalrous, just laugh and laugh.

Other questions, written in the book, everyone asks, some things are not clearly written, you ask, I know that it is not clear here, to change, I also progress, you also worry, you bear with me,

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