There is no testimonial on the shelf, so let's have one at the end of the volume.

This book is the first time I have written it seriously, but I have to say that it is really badly written. I have ideas in my head, but unfortunately I don't make a string, and my pen power is limited, so the story is always flat and straightforward, and there are no climaxes and ups and downs at all.

Let's summarize the current problem.

The first volume mainly wants to introduce the heroine's golden finger, solve most of the real-life problems, and then help the heroine travel well to the remaining planes. However, in this volume, the proportion of reality and the other world is not well controlled, and it is not enough to take care of the pen, which causes everyone to look nondescript.

First, the overall plan is still in accordance with the outline, with some more details. But the rhythm of the plot is too poor, and I will focus on the next volume, and then write it.

Second, the characters are too thin, and the characters are not erected. This is a problem found later in the writing, and will be noted to avoid it in the second volume.

Third, the plot is too scattered. The eye is high and the hand is low, thinking about making it bigger, but I can't put it away after laying the thread, so I can only weave it slowly.

In short, thank you for still reading here! I'll keep writing, and I'll have to finish my first book! However, it's because of the problem of work and conception.,So the update won't be very powerful.,One more a day is a guarantee.,There's time to fight for more later! Thank you!

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