15, bosom friends are hard to find (1)

In Jiang Feifei's blue boudoir.

Jiang Feifei, "How was this meal?" ”

I said, "It's so rich, and your family is so nice." ”

Jiang Feifei, "The main thing is my mother, gentle as water, my father and my brother, the two of them are usually incompatible, it is my mother in the middle and the mud, which makes the family have a bit of a peaceful atmosphere, otherwise my brother's fluted head green, regardless of it, often works against my father, and always talks about topics that he is not used to." My mom was successfully reconciled to keep the two of them from clashing, and I quickly diverted his attention by playing coquettish with my dad. ”

I said, "Your brother is not bad, Yang Gang is handsome." If a boy doesn't have a little masculinity, what kind of boy is he called? ”

Jiang Feifei, "I thought so too, so I helped him play a round." In fact, my father is not like an ordinary soldier, he has both the majesty of a soldier and the temperament of a literati, he is the most masculine man in the world, I have never seen anyone who can be such a gentleman as him. ”

I said, "Uncle is a general, isn't he?" At first glance, he is a Confucian general, with the demeanor of a general, without losing his elegance. ”

Jiang Feifei, "Well, I think so too. Don't you love to write poetry? I'll show you a poem my dad wrote last year, and you give a review. ”

Jiang Feifei said as she turned on the computer and searched for it in the document. After a while, she said, "This is the song, and I think it's very profound." But in your opinion, isn't it a bit restrained? ”

I looked at the computer screen, and a poem came into my eyes:

Imagine the autumn rain

Deep autumn

Gentle rain

Heavy sky

The road is busy

The river of cars is surging

Come and go

The motor roared

The street view is as beautiful as usual

Garden for autumn clothes

The maple leaves are red like blood

Ginkgo biloba is golden

The autumn rain wets the walls of the Red Palace

The bucket arch supports the eaves and drip moisture

Feiyan lies quietly to hide from the rain

The pine is more green and washes the begonias

A bumper harvest

Busy sowing

More autumnal cooler

Drizzle drifting flowers

Wild grass leaves are yellowish

This morning is dew

There can be frost in the Ming Dynasty

coincided with the Ninth Ninth Festival and Chongyang

Nanshan has Ju Jing is older

An autumn rain and a cold

Then ask relatives and friends to add clothes

The sky is cloudy

No residual sun

Night falls

Tomorrow the sky will be bright

The sky is high and refreshing

The unpredictable situation is short

The sun shines brightly

Don't be sad about the drizzle

Rain and dew moisten the seedlings

The seasons turn for another year

Next autumn will be a busy harvest

I can't help but admire, "What a poem with a sense of meaning, the picture is particularly strong, the autumn night and autumn rain, written so beautifully, the idea is so broad, the text is symmetrical, the literary style is flying, where is the restraint?" It's rhetorical exquisiteness. Look at this sentence, 'the unpredictable wind and clouds are short, and the sun shines long' How beautiful the reconciliation is, not only said, the sudden arrival of the autumn rain, but also the autumn and autumn climate, vividly described. There is also this sentence, 'the autumn rain wets the red palace wall, and the bucket arch supports the eaves dripping water' is really a bit of an immersive feeling, if he has not seen the royal garden, in the scene of the autumn rain season, he can't write such a beautiful poem, it's really a good poem. ”

Jiang Feifei, "My dad is good at filling in words, and his words are more meaningful, look at this one." ”

"Little Heavy Mountain"

The frost leaves of the frost fall palace door are red, the stone steps are deeper and heavier, and the moon is hazy.

moved Zhu Jin to Su Gong, a mistake, and the sound outside the column was thick.

The dream came true yesterday, with three feet of smoke and dust, and a few heavy winds.

When drunk, you laugh at Ruan Lang who is poor, crazy, and mediocre in life.

I was a little stunned at the graceful and light sooner or later, "What a wonderful song this is,"

Jiang Feifei, "I prefer his one." ”

Water tune song head

The Garden

The garden is green

There is a small stream next to the garden

There are countless flowers floating in the stream

Huazhi Station Yellow Bird

Fly deep into the forest

Crying into my heart

I'm afraid the flowers will fall to the ground

Stained with sludge

Lying flowers

It's idyllic

Mu Chunfeng

Where is the Tao Weng?

There is no hidden meaning in the spring of the garden

This is a flower viewer

Do not bloom and fall for the flowers

I only sigh and don't go back

Don't go

Mingyue Cui returns

I was really intoxicated by the lyrics, "Uncle, what a stroke of genius." "I'm afraid that the flowers will fall to the ground, and the posture will be stained with sludge" is more artistic conception than Daiyu's funeral flowers, and it is not sad, it is a kind of pity, not the small feelings of the daughter's family, but the great sentiment of manhood. There is also this sentence, 'The bright moon urges people to return,' this urging word is full of dynamics, and it is so romantic to use the bright moon to urge. ”

Jiang Feifei, "It seems that I asked you to come over today, which is a particularly correct decision, and your comments are too good." ”

I was a little happy and couldn't extricate myself, "So you are my bosom sister, it's not that my comments are good, it's my uncle who writes too well." It is really surprising that such a mighty general can write words so gracefully. Oh yes, Xin Qiji of the Southern Song Dynasty is a great general, who wrote a good word for the world, and his anti-gold deeds are not known to many people, and his words, no one knows. ”

Jiang Feifei, "Let me see your little secret, I know you have a notebook." ”

I took out my notebook from my bag, "Here you go, sister, I have long wanted you to see me, and you can also comment and give me some advice, so that I can write more beautifully and accurately." ”