Li Fanming looked at Governor Yao helplessly, and said: "Mr. Yao, I listened to your class back then, but after so many years, you can't always treat me as a student in the academy to ask questions, I am already a Jinshi, and I don't need to participate in the imperial examination." Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info”

"As a member of the Fighting for Buildings Society, you actually helped Fang Xusheng, let me ask you what happened once?"

You are a good friend of Fang Xusheng, and it is interesting to evaluate Zhang Longxiang's poems. ”

"Yes, yes!"

Li Fanming saw that everyone was coaxing, so he had to say, "Okay, okay, I said it's not okay?"

Everyone looked at Li Fanming with a smile.

"The two sentences of the first couplet, 'I heard Dongting water in the past, and now I go to Yueyang Tower', there is nothing special in itself, but if you look at the whole poem, you will find that between the past and the present, there is a faint relief, as if you have fulfilled a wish. In addition, the Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower here, as well as the 'Qin Shi Mingyue Han Shi Pass', should be interpreted as: I have heard of Dongting Lake and Yueyang Tower in the past, and today I finally arrived, and the two are one, not isolated. ”

The crowd nodded slightly.

In fact, Zhang Longxiang's last poem has written Dongting Lake very magnificently. The August Lake is level, and the culvert is too clear. The steaming cloud Mengze shook Yueyang City. These four sentences make Dongting Lake boundless and endless, with undulating waves, and even the potential to engulf Yueyang City, written as spectacular as the sea. ”

"However, the two sentences of the jaw couplet, 'Wu Chu is in the southeast, and the Qiankun floats day and night', which is better than the previous one, which makes me convinced. These two sentences are written, climb the tower and look into the distance, Dongting Lake is so vast that it divides Wu and Chu, and the lake is wide, as if the heavens, the earth, the sun and the moon are floating in the water. If you extend it a little, it can be said that the rising and setting of the sun and the moon seem to be carried out in Dongting Lake, such a majestic poem is really rare, and the previous one is far from comparable. If the previous poem wrote Dongting Lake as a sea, then this one wrote Dongting Lake as an independent realm, giving birth to the sun and the moon. It was when I saw these two sentences, I was silent for a long time, and I had to praise it, in terms of grandeur, Zhang Longxiang was not inferior to Fang Yun in any way, and Zhang Longxiang's poems seemed to be thicker than Fang Yun's. ”

"That's a good point!" Governor Yao praised first, and the rest of the Qiguo scholars also echoed.

There are not only Qiguo scholars nearby, but also scholars from other countries, hearing Li Fanming say this, they all sighed with emotion, Fang Yun's friends are so broad-minded, and Fang Yun's opponents are not hesitant to praise him, presumably Fang Yun is also worth befriending.

Li Fanming changed his words and said: "However, Zhang Longxiang is not omnipotent after all, and he is not perfect. I have read all his poems, and it is true that he has been in love with the poems, and the blending of scenes is his characteristic and advantage, but he seems to have suffered too much from ten years in prison, and it is still difficult to fully let go. For example, the sadness of "Spring Hope" of "feeling the flowers splashing tears, hating other birds and frightening", the regret of "looking at Chang'an in the northwest and pitiing countless mountains", the longing of "one inch of Dan's heart to serve the country, two lines of tears for missing relatives", the resentment of "seeing flowers full of tears, not sharing the words of the king of Chu", the resentment of "enduring to see friends become new ghosts, angrily looking for small poems in the knife bush", and so on. When there are too many such poems, the emotions are more important than the scenery, or even more important than the poems, it is inevitably a bit noisy. His talent, expressing the feelings in his heart too much, seems to be a line behind his pattern and mind compared to Fang Xusheng. ”

"This kind of view is very fresh, wonderful!" Governor Yao said with a smile, and the rest of the readers showed a thoughtful expression.

Li Fanming added: "Of course, this is his misfortune and his luck, if he had not been in prison for ten years, he might not have been able to write such a beautiful poem full of emotion on paper." Nor can we accuse him of having too strong personal feelings in his poems and destroying the whole of the poems. If there is a blood in the poem, then this kind of emotional overflow is an inseparable part of the blood of his poetry, we can dislike it, but we can't completely deny it. ”

Nearby readers said yes.

As for the last four sentences, in terms of their value to the poem, they are obviously not as good as the first four sentences, but for him, they are far more important than the first four sentences. Replaced by you and I Zhang Longxiang, Dongting Lake is so vast, Yueyang Tower is so magnificent, what's the use? When I came to the Shengyuan Continent, I didn't have a good connection with my relatives and friends, and I just arrived here and I was not accustomed to the water and soil, and I wanted Wenbi, only a lonely boat to accompany me. Thinking of the wars in the north and all parts of the Terran race, I found that I had no power to stop it, and I could only lean on the railing on the upper floor to cry for the suffering people of the Terran and the great rivers and mountains. This is true if this poem is interpreted independently, and it is difficult to say if it is connected to the previous poem. ”

"If it's hard to say, you have to say it, go on!" Governor Yao said with a smile.

Li Fanming looked around helplessly, and found that everyone's expressions were very similar to Yao Zhifu, shook his head, and said: "If it is connected with today's events, the last four sentences of this poem are not as good as the previous one! Relatives and friends have no words to understand, but the old and sick have a lonely boat, but they are insinuating that they are rejected by the Shengyuan Continent, only the lonely boat of 'Qingguo' supports him, and the rest of the scholars of the human race have already preconceived that Fang Xusheng is the head of the four great talents, these two sentences are complaining and crying. ”

"As for 'Rongmaguan Shanbei, relying on Xuan Siliu', the intentions are even more vicious. This is obviously mocking Fang Yun, the north of Jingguo has already started a war, and he still has the leisure to be the governor of the two states, and he Zhang Longxiang is different, but he is the hero who participated in the battle of the Two Realms Mountain, so he can only stand on the Yueyang Tower and shed tears for the great rivers and mountains of the fallen human race. ”

One person asked: "Brother Fanming, will your interpretation be too ...... Extreme?"

Li Fanming said helplessly: "I don't want this kind of interpretation either, but since he has accepted the position of Qingguo's Taifu, this poem can only be interpreted in this way." However, I have to say that Zhang Longxiang is full of talent, and he obviously wants to participate in the literary meeting, but he threw out two good poems one after another, which is the first to win people, and he is really a genius. ”

"Alas, count carefully, with Fang Xusheng's "Ascending Yueyang Tower", plus these two poems by Zhang Longxiang, it can be basically determined that there will be no better poems in the Yellow Crane Tower in five years, and the crown of the first building in the world has fallen on the head of Yueyang Tower. A Qingguo Jinshi said helplessly.

"Not necessarily. ”

Yao Zhifu said: "Poetry and writing are not as good as people, if you lose to Fang Xusheng and Zhang Mingzhou, you are not ashamed, and if you lose, you will be ashamed if you don't admit it." After this meeting, the Zhenglou Society was naturally disbanded, but now, we still have to go to Yueyang Tower, and we can't fall into the prestige of the Yellow Crane Tower!"

"That's what my lord said. ”

"Let's basically quit the fight, but it seems that today's Wenhui seems to be more interesting than imagined. Now the five heads of the Jingguo family should have arrived at Yueyang Tower, and I don't know if Liu Shan will come. If Liushan comes, there will definitely be a good show to watch. ”

"It's a pity that Jian Mei Gong has been training outside for many years, and he has not returned so far, so he missed this grand event. ”

"There is no way, the grinding of the new Confucianism is extraordinary, as short as three years, as long as more than ten years, and even many Confucians died in the grinding. ”

"I hope that those Confucians who are grinding in dangerous places can also have a good Mid-Autumn Festival. Li Fanming said.

. (To be continued.) )