Tell everyone something
I'm going to expect to be sprayed next, but I'm going to have to make it clear.
First of all, this book is one of my favorite and most serious books since I started writing it, and it's the first time I've thought so much about it since I started this business about three years ago.
Of course, limited to the personal level, there may be such and such shortcomings, but the setting, plot, characters, and specific to the occupation, ability, and personality of each character have been outlined in advance, including the profession of the Demon God Eater system, and I have also made detailed planning, recipes, abilities, names, and upgrade directions...... And so on and so forth.
Even, the gods of each religion and the corresponding geography, abilities, history, etc., have also made a lot of interesting settings, and even those spells that seem to be used for funny are actually a small story if they are connected in the later stage.
There are many people who should have seen that there are many familiar elements in this book, and they are all elements that I am personally very obsessed with.
For example, in the books I have read in the past few years, the first work in my personal mind, "The Master of Mystery", almost subverted my view of the plot of the online article.
For example, fate, like Attack on Titan, like Stone Age, like some games......
Although my personal ability is not very good, it can be regarded as the first time to write fantasy, but for this book, I am really very attentive, almost every day to go through the research outline and the follow-up plot direction.
Maybe some people, some settings, look more ordinary in the early stage, but I believe that after the later text is added through the plot reversal, it should be eye-catching.
For example, Chen Xi, in the early stage, her positioning was silly and sweet, but she prepared a lot of follow-up plots and foreshadowing, as long as I can write her growth and transformation completely, I believe she will be more likable than Ye Zier and Pei Jianing in my previous two books.
And the results of this book, in a way, are actually very good, the collection is very good, only two recommendations will be 30,000 yuan, if it is on the shelves normally, there will be about 50,000 collections, for me, a newcomer who writes fantasy for the first time, it is already very good.
But......
Well, having said all that, of course, there is a "but", although I don't want to say it, and I don't dare to say it, but I have to say "but".
The author can do everything in the book, but the reality is just an ordinary person, and he needs to make money from this year to next year.
It's a pity that the collection of this book is high, which can only mean that the beginning and subject matter are fine, but after asking the editor, I know that the follow-up reading of this book is not ideal, and the results on the shelves are estimated to be very ordinary.
When I found out that the score of this book was much, much worse than I imagined, and I even faced the problem of "hitting the street", in fact, I was already a little stupid.
It took so much energy and thought in exchange for such a result, which once made me a little self-doubting, did I not write books at all?
A few days ago, I had a fever, just because I realized this, my mood was very low, I sat in front of the computer in a daze for a day, and fell asleep on the table at night, and the air conditioner was not turned off until the middle of the night.
The update has slowed down in the past two days, which is also the reason, I feel that no matter how I write, I am wrong, I don't know how to keep it, just like a doctor is powerless in the face of a terminally ill patient.
But I also have to admit a fact.
I can't find any other reason.,This result is a problem of my personal level.,I can't blame anyone.,The first time I wrote fantasy.,I made a lot of mistakes.,For example, the character design is not eye-catching enough.,For example, the sense of disobedience of the mixed names of Eastern and Western people.,For example, the setting is slightly cumbersome...... These problems are relatively obvious.
So, with all that going on and on, I didn't mean to cut the book.
Although I do have a criminal record, this book can be regarded as my brainchild, and I really don't want to give up.
I'm going to rewrite this book in a while, just in time to think about how to avoid the risks of religion.
However, during this time, I still need to make money and improve, and at my current level, even if the known problems are solved, it is estimated that new problems will arise in the future.
I'm a bit of a perfectionist, once I find out where the writing is not very good, I really want to change and rewrite, I usually read my own book over and over again, if the words are not right or the writing is not fluent, I will change it and write again, once the mistake is too serious to undo, I guess I will not have the motivation to continue writing.
So...... The book needs to be reworked.
But not now.
To portray all kinds of characters and this real original world, you need to rely on the support of a large number of characters, my level is insufficient, and I still need to practice character design and rhythm.
So, before rewriting, I plan to open a new book, a book that mainly tests the character and plot.
I don't know what to write about yet, but it won't be the subject I have written, it should be urban, and cities that don't need to consider complex settings and backgrounds are more suitable for practice, so let me try how to write interesting and attractive characters.
Hmm, that's all there is to say, I know that posting this single chapter is destined to be sprayed, but I don't want to give up this book just like that, so let's come out and make it clear, otherwise if I just start playing and disappear, no one will find me.
Well, the new book is a new vest, and no one knows me......
Of course, if you still have a little bit of expectation for me after reading a single chapter, maybe I'll continue to open the book with the vest of the old magic boy, and it's a big deal to spray my ban, although I rarely ban and delete posts...... Otherwise, I'd better go into hiding......
Although I don't think I'm cutting the book, and I'm stupid enough to come out and explain a lot of things that might be sprayed, but in the end, I still want to thank and express my apologies.
cough,Youmeng is still very optimistic about my book.,Two books in a row have given me the leader of the alliance and a book list.,Private communication also gave me a lot of advice.,Huh, I lived up to your expectations.,After I'm on fire.,Invite you to dinner offline.,Don't block me (╥_╥)
Finally, thank you to the readers who rewarded and voted for me, there are many readers, I can see familiar names in the voting records every day, I really appreciate it, and I'm sorry, you can spray a few more words, if you spray me if you don't do anything else, I'm welcome.
Also, the one in the book review section, you win.
Hmm, I thought about it all night, and when it was dawn, I still sent out this stinky and long single chapter, hoping that when I woke up, I wasn't sprayed too badly, so that I was in a good mood to face the new book and look forward to the new book.
That's it, a new book will be issued in a few days, goodbye.