Xie Mulin adapted this storytelling book of General Yuan Xiao to capture the enemy king, and it really took a lot of effort.

After reading the books in the past few years, she felt that her level of classical Chinese had improved greatly, so she wanted to try her hand. If the rewritten book can get into the eyes of her parents and brothers at home, it proves that her language scores have passed, and if she wants to take out the information in the study space in the future, and forge any ancient notes, there is a high probability that she can fool the past.

The storyteller didn't have much of a great literary talent, but he was good at writing, and he had been in the industry for many years, so he was familiar with the various routines of storytelling texts. The news of General Yuan Xiao's capture of the enemy's general, Wang, was certainly known to everyone in Beiping City, but there were very few people who knew the details, and there were many gossip circulating on the market, but at least eighty percent of them were made up, and another five percent were hearsay. Naturally, the storyteller had no way to find out the truth, so he made up a story on his own.

According to the romance stories and drama stories that Xie Mulin had read, as well as some scripts collected by the third brother Xie Huizhi, she could probably see that many of the plots of the stories originally compiled by Mr. Storyteller were appropriated from several storytelling books such as "Three Heroes vs. Lu Bu", "Zhao Zilong Riding the Savior Alone", "Changban Slope" and so on, especially some descriptions of the protagonist General Yuan Xiao, as well as the plot of the battle between him and the enemy general Wang and his son. Even the set poems are written using the ready-made number of paths and slightly modifying. On the whole, it is a very common story of a hero fighting an enemy general with a single gun, and it can be applied to many generals. The reason why Mrs. Wan was able to speak loudly was entirely because the storyteller mastered the rhythm well, and told the story wonderfully and fascinatingly.

Xie Mulin flipped through the manuscript of the text by himself, and he didn't think it was wonderful at all, but thought that many of the clichéd adjectives were too funny. And she asked Xiao Rui about the specific process of General Yuan Xiao's meritorious service, even if the details may not be clear, she also knows that this young hero led a large team of people to wrap the enemy general Wang and his son with dumpling filling, instead of fighting with them alone, so that he caught someone. Of course, there was a scuffle in the process, but he really didn't use the second silver gun. The Yuan family is an ancestral knife technique, and General Yuan Xiao often uses an embroidered spring knife inherited from his deceased father.

Also, although General Yuan Xiao has made dazzling military achievements, he himself is actually a professional commander and usually rarely goes into battle to kill the enemy in person, mainly because of his strong ability to lead troops.

Just like Xiao Rui stayed in Kaipingwei for a few years, and was promoted to an official by virtue of his military merits, but he was actually mainly responsible for logistics work in Kaipingwei, and was particularly good at deploying military rations and military materials.

These two young generals are actually not the type to go up recklessly when they see the enemy, they are both the kind that use their brains.

Xie Mulin himself also felt that from the standpoint of being Xiao Rui's (future) family, knowing that his relatives were desperate to kill the enemy on the battlefield would not necessarily feel happy, but he was afraid that he was more worried, right? But if you hear that your relatives are wise generals who are strategizing on the battlefield, and you can kill the enemy by using your brains and commanding your subordinates, then the feeling is another matter.

Therefore, when she revised the storytelling book this time, she changed all kinds of untrue descriptions on it, made some changes according to the battlefield situation that Xiao Rui told her, and then wrote a thrilling battlefield story full of various accidents, reversals, and suspense according to the routine of the online article, which not only highlighted General Yuan Xiao's wisdom and bravery, wit and decisiveness, but also praised the heroic performance of his soldiers.

After the main body of the story was written, she applied some common adjectives of this era according to the various drama books, storytelling books, scripts, romance stories, etc. that she could collect, and retained some of the poems compiled by the storyteller, and recited a few more poems by herself, feeling that her level of limerick poetry seemed to be stronger than that of the storyteller, so she took it to a few brothers to see.

After reading the book she wrote, the four brothers all felt that they could take it out and meet people. The third brother Xie Huizhi even took a lot of sycophants, describing that the books that can be found on the market are not as exciting as those written by his second sister. Xie Mulin only thought he was polite, but his heart was still quite good.

She also took it to her eldest sister Xie Yinghui by the way. Xie Yinghui's impression after reading it was also very good, and she said: "If I can find a better female ancestor, I am very interested in hearing such a story at other banquets." But if you want to put it well, I think the storyteller may be better than the female first. ”

This evaluation is sufficient. Only then did Xie Mulin have some confidence in his work, and he dared to show it to his mother and ask her to see it.

After reading the manuscript, Wen was surprised: "You wrote this?" I really can't see that you really have the ability to do this?! No wonder the old man told me not to worry, saying that you have studied with the second old lady for all these years, and it is impossible for you to not grow at all. Since you have played a package ticket, you must be sure. ”

Xie Mulin blushed, and said a little embarrassed: "I'm not very sure, I just think it...... It's a bit difficult, but I can handle it. Even if you really can't do it, it's the same to show the original to the female ancestors. ”

Wen glanced at his daughter with disgust: "What kind of immortal do you think the female ancestor is?" You show someone the new book, and she can tell it when she looks at it? If you don't have enough time to memorize, no matter how well your book is written, people may not be able to say it! ”

Xie Mulin said: "I deleted a lot of poems and lyrics that are used to describe characters but have no meaning, but need to be memorized, and mainly focus on the storyline." As long as the memory of the female ancestors invited by the mother is not too bad, and she can remember the synopsis of the story, she can play with them when the time comes, and there will be no big excerpts. After all, this is a new book.,Even if it's wrong.,As long as the back can be rounded back.,Who can find out they're wrong? I just think that Mrs. Yuan is probably more interested in knowing the specific story of her son's meritorious service. As long as she knew how good General Yuan Xiao was, and she didn't experience any major dangers to make the credit, she would definitely be very happy in her heart. This is much better than the drama of "Mother-in-law's Tattoo", after all, it is Mrs. Yue and General Yue Fei who are recited in the play, not Mrs. Yuan and General Yuan Xiao. ”

Wen scolded his daughter, and then looked at the manuscript: "Since it has been written, let's send it to the female ancestors, and tell them to be careful." There are only two days left until the sixteenth today, and the time is pressing, so don't really go wrong. ”

Xie Mulin answered, and happily handed the notebook to Ma Lu Yao's family, so she sent someone to send it out.

Wen also instructed his daughter another thing: "Our family's banquet is on the sixteenth, and the weather should be quite fine." But the old man in the yamen of the political envoy has already seen it, and said that he is about twenty and is afraid that there will be a wave of heavy snow. Your brothers and sisters are spending the winter in Peking for the first time, and they may not be able to hold on, and the two old ladies have always been frail and need to be careful. I have ordered people to buy a lot of charcoal, ginger, medicinal herbs, cotton, cloth, furs, and other things, and you can call your eldest sister and come and help me dispose of them. I'm just teaching you something. ”

Xie Mulin was curious and immediately responded.

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