Testimonials at the end of the volume

Testimonials at the end of the volume

First of all, this volume is generally written, and I think there are a few bright spots. But generally so-so. I have so many things I want to express, but I can't write them because I can't write them. This is also a common problem for most online writers. But at the end of the day, I'm satisfied, at least it didn't collapse.

You must know that the outline of this volume has changed more than once during the writing process. Originally, I wanted to write about the Night King. But then it was changed to the exploration of the Valyrian Peninsula and it ended. It turned out to be changed back later. As a result, the second half of the volume is a little unsmooth.

As I said before, the late Sassanid is my favorite character. But I know that most readers don't like to see her appear very much, so I deleted a lot of scenes and only explained them in the afterword at the end. Arya Stark and Daenerys are the same.

In addition, I saw some readers complaining in the book review area that the protagonist's abilities are too many and too miscellaneous. And it's not very well applied. Here I explain.

First of all, the protagonist gains a large number of innate abilities in the first world. But the ceiling of these abilities is very weak. I remember that in the Grimm volume, I wrote a detail. The protagonist has a palm-derived sucker and the ability to climb. But that ability was so weak that it couldn't support his weight at all.

Most of his early innate abilities are like this. It's weak, it's just that it can make him stronger than ordinary people. Aside from the ability of the beast instinct, there aren't many other applications.

Also, I'll explain his fire ability. The Burners in Grimm aren't the magical creatures you think they can manipulate fire. The mystery side has some, but it's weak.

His ability is to be able to secrete a high-flammable liquid in his body. By penetrating the surface of the skin and then igniting it by static electricity on the surface of the body, it turns into a flame creature. The only fantasy thing is that his skin is no different from a normal person, but it is fire resistant and will not be burned by his own flames.

Therefore, Su Yuan did not have the ability to manipulate the flame element. His flames were formed through a combination of telekinesis and secretions in his body.

As for the lightning ability, it's the real killer right now. The strengthening of the royal bloodline is used for this. This is the protagonist's strongest ability at the moment. His thunder and lightning are also quite effective for the divine creature Night King. However, Su Yuan has not had time to develop this ability in depth, so he has not yet shown its power.

After that, it's the benefit of killing the Night King. First of all, the Night King has a death divinity in him, and this is a matter of course. It is also natural that a creature with the divinity of death will not die completely. So, don't talk about my ability to suppress the protagonist or anything like that. I write this for a reason. It's not that the protagonist's harvest is forcibly suppressed, so that he can't get all the divinity of the Night King.

The three-eyed crow didn't explode divinity, but exploded a remnant soul because it wasn't dead at all. Its consciousness curled up into the remnant soul and became a special identification tool. This is one of the boosters I have for the main character. As for whether it will wake up in the future, it is in my mind, but not anytime soon.

In short, this is the end of the story of this volume. Whether it is in everyone's mood or not, this is the story I want to write. I'll write better in the next volume.

Finally, there are the personal attributes of the protagonist as well as the statistics of the items.

Ability:

Strengthens the senses of hearing, sight, smell, and touch. All-round strengthening of the flesh. These are reinforcements of the foundation.

Innate Abilities:

Beast Threat (Lionman), Beast Instinct, Night Vision (Cat Man), Weather Perception (Frog), Infrasound Localization (Bats), Sonic (Deep-Water Fish such as Dolphins), Spit (Swordfish), Toxin Secretion (Various Snake Orcs), Heat Source Perception (Snakes), Vibration Wave Sensing (Spider), Fire Control (Arsonist), Lightning Control (Electric Shock Monster), Mind Interference (Elementary).

Talents to be strengthened:

The secret inheritance of the male witch, the intermediate level of mind interference, and the ice realm.

Goods:

Three Cursed Gold Coins (to inspire your inner ambition), Lava Heart (Enhanced), Treant Heart, and two revolvers. Travel bag (built-in with various necessities).

Package made of animal skins: one piece of Valyrian steel full body armor. Eight Valyrian Steel Swords (Long Summer, Winter, Dark Sisters, Lady Caitlyn's promised reward is tentatively named Running Wolf, and the other four are unnamed. It is used in the future world, interacting with the characters in the story, and brushing up on friendship).

In addition, there are five and several pieces of Valyrian ingots, and a piece of armor made of the skin of the earthworm, which is now worn on the body.

If there is anything missing, please feel free to add it.