Dear friends, last month's giveaway is over. I've seen everyone's opinions, and it's pretty much the same as I thought. Regarding the problem of the first article, I have also made a summary, which is simply three words - no heart. Specifically, the main issues are as follows:

1, the beginning is too dull, I don't see the turning point within three chapters, it's not happy. 2, the background of the times is not explained clearly, which leads many people to think that the protagonist has traveled to the modern era, which has triggered the logical conflict of the times. 3. The language is not refined, and many plots are not well considered. 4. The rest of the dots.

In fact, the first article is to leave a little suspense, to reveal the world view little by little - to be precise, this whole book is in suspense, digging holes everywhere, digging ultra-long holes, which is also my personal characteristic. But the first article was not handled very well, resulting in many students not being able to read it. Here I reflect and prepare for rectification.

Regarding the prize activity, there were a lot of students who participated, but because of the starting point mechanism, only six relatives were judged by the system to participate in the activity. This is the first time that the organization of the event was unfamiliar with the rules and mistakes, and this month it was organized in advance to try to understand the rules of participation so that everyone can get benefits.

And those who know more about the rules, you can post a talk here, let me learn and learn, and send the benefits to practice.

Thank you for your support, thank you!

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