Gu Yundong's gaze swept in front of the four of them one by one, and after a while, he whispered, "Then I'...... Straight up? ”

"Say it."

Even Shao Qingyuan looked at her with earnest eyes, he himself thought that this idea was not bad, but if Yun Dong said no, he would quickly think about it again.

Gu Yundong coughed lightly, "The story is fine, it's written here, it's not fascinating enough." ”

Dai Zhifu hurriedly leaned forward, "What's not enough?" ”

"Uncle, our story is mainly for the common people. Most of the people are illiterate, and even if they do, they can't understand the words that are too esoteric, especially these verses, which we can understand, but the people may not be able to understand. ”

The story, of course, should be simple and straightforward, and the text should be crepe, that's making a fuss.

"So, there is some truth to that."

Dai Zhifu nodded slightly, and listened to Gu Yundong continue, "This book is different from the article after all, in addition to the rigorous logic in the script, the important thing is to set up suspense to catch people's attention, so that people have guesses and expectations for the next storyline." And the first sentence is especially important, it is best to be concise and crisp, to the point, the rhetoric is too ornate, and people will be drowsy when they listen to it. ”

I feel that my first sentence was written wonderfully by Dai Zhifu, "......"

Shao Qingyuan, who feels that Dai Zhifu writes much better than himself, "......"

I feel that the first sentence will definitely make the emperor happy Mrs. Dai and Dai Gongzi, "......"

This first sentence, it seems, indeed, is not concise enough.

Dai Zhifu felt that he had been hit, he took the few pieces of paper, and after looking at them twice, he suddenly felt bored.

He was also a person who could really listen to words, so he immediately humbly asked, "Then how do you think it should be written?" ”

Dai Wenhuo said, "We're not good at writing scripts, why don't we find a scholar who is good at scripts to try?" ”

Gu Yundong waved his hand, "No." I'll write it, I'll write it out later, you can take a look, if not, we'll find someone else to try it. ”

Anyway, I've read so many stories in this book, and this story is not long, eye-catching or something, she's good at it.

"Okay, then you write first."

Mrs. Dai glanced at a few people, "What to write?" Eat first, and then write when you're done. ”

Really, everyone is talking about forgetting that they are hungry, right?

She hurriedly asked her subordinates to put the meal on the table and entertained Yun Dong to eat first.

Gu Yundong was thinking in his mind while eating, and the others were silent, and the speed was also very fast, and it didn't take long to finish eating.

Not long after Gu Yundong finished eating, he took the papers and went into the study.

No one bothered her, let her write slowly on her own, and they continued to discuss the next process.

Gu Yundong held the pen and thought for a moment, and finally dropped the first sentence on the paper.

"In other words, some time ago, a great event happened in the capital......

Gu Yundong is not a professional writer, but at least it is more like a script than what Dai Zhifu wrote, and it can be listened to better.

She moved quickly, anyway, there was a sample of Dai Zhifu, she changed the way she wrote it slightly, and then adjusted the order before and after, and deleted all the nonsense that sang the praises of virtue, and finally left a suspense, and it was done.

Gu Yundong put down the pen, blew the ink, and walked out of the door of the study with a few pages of paper.