Chapter 63: What a Good Story
Lin Fatzi looked at Li Dan's serious appearance, got up suspiciously, turned behind Li Dan, and read softly.
"There is a little Taoist priest who has never been able to catch ghosts, and there is no brother present on the wedding day, and the ghosts of the whole city gather over the wedding, wanting to block a thunderstorm for this Taoist priest who is always very soft-hearted, broken-hearted, very nagging, and finally marries a little fox, after all, shemales have different paths."
"However, in the sky, the sky is clear, nothing happens, but on the higher clouds, the senior brothers do their best to defend the thunderstorm."
"Thunder God Dao: Is it worth it to pour ten thousand years of foundation for one person and one demon to fight against the immortal gate?"
Lao Dao replied with a smile: "Just ask for a clear conscience, since the bad disciple practiced, although he has never caught ghosts and eliminated demons, but he has made ghosts and demons in a radius of thousands of miles good." ”
Thor smiled: "Even so, it's a different way for a ladyboy, it's good for you to be an apprentice, and you get married directly!" Man and God are indignant. ”
Suddenly, a thunderbolt fell, and a senior brother collapsed to the ground, and slowly got up, and said loudly: "Senior brothers, it seems that the little junior brother's wedding wine can't be drunk, but the ceremony must arrive, even if you die today, you have to stop the people of Xianmen, the Yuan Shen sacrifices to the sky, seals the sky with a sword, and ......."
As Li Dan finished writing, Lin Fat's eyes were already red, and he picked up the page tremblingly, bursting into tears.
Good! Good! Good!
At this moment, apart from saying the word 'good' repeatedly, he was choked up and couldn't say anything else.
It's just half a page, but it says everything.
Li Dan looked at Lin Fat, who was so easily moved, and quickly got up: "How is it?" You see, isn't it short and concise? Isn't it exciting? The different paths of the ladyboy have broken secular ethics? As for the bloody rain, it is already clear at a glance, and you are moved to tears, at least you can express it very clearly now......"
"And then, then what?" Before Li Dan's words were finished, Lin Pang grabbed Li Dan and asked anxiously.
"No more, isn't it written, exciting, the broken chapter here is very good, and it has achieved this perfectly." Li Dan is serious and sincere.
Lin Pang shook his head: "Brother Li, no, cousin, there must be a back, you are too tragic, what if Master Yan asks me to supplement it in person tomorrow?" ”
Li Dan: "......"
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The voice of the system suddenly sounded, and Li Dan suddenly smiled.
"Yes, you let me think about it, if your master wants it again, so to speak, when the thunder bombarded the top, his master realized that it was not good, and immediately turned his sword horizontally, and recited the incantation: You say mouth toot, toot ......"
Lin Fat: "......"
Why does the style of painting change so quickly, and it's a little out of line with the previous article?
Li Dan continued: "Then when the thunder god saw this, he laughed at the carving insect skills, and also shouted: What ghost legends, what ghosts and demons, only the heron eagle is singing leisurely....."
"Cousin, wait a minute......"
"I haven't finished speaking, I'm coming to the inspiration, with the attack of the thunder god, the master spit blood and flew out, and the senior brother shouted: All the disciples listen to my orders, set up a spell: Let's learn cat barking together, together, meow ......"
"No, cousin, you've ruined ......"
"The god of thunder called out a thunderclap from the sky, resounding in all directions, and thunder flashed everywhere: the vast end of the world is my love, leaving behind a sea of thousands of purples and thousands of reds..."
"Big cousin, I beg you......"
"The brothers fell to the ground, the master suddenly turned red, the whole body erupted, one finger to the sky, one finger to the ground, called: burn my calories, after the self-explosion seriously injured the thunder god, the thunder god saw that the general trend has gone, and it is useless to rely on the strength of one person, so he turned into a thundercloud and disappeared, leaving only one sentence: Daddy's father is grandpa, and mom's mother is grandma."
With Li Dan in one go, Lin Fat's face turned black, looked at the paper in his hand, and then looked at Li Dan.
However, the system did not sound again, and Li Danhu wondered: "It's good, why don't you thank me?" ”
He had to get 1,000 opinion points and then exchange it for the answer to who was calling for help to him.
The two looked at each other, and Li Dan had no choice but to say, "Okay, I'll make up another one for you." ”
Lin Pang suddenly smiled, and hurriedly waited for Li Dan to sit down and study the ink himself: "Big cousin, you work hard." ”
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Li Dan scratched his ears and cheeks for a while, raised his head and looked at Lin Pang: "Cousin, let me tell you, this is just a follow-up in case you need it, if you don't use it, you don't need it." ”
"I know, I know," Lin Pang looked at Li Dan with a grin, his eyes narrowed.
Li Dan continued to write: "At the wedding of the little Taoist, the master and the senior brothers carried the Heavenly Tribulation in mid-air, and none of them knew that above the Heavenly Tribulation thundercloud, a woman was dressed in red like a bride.
One person fought alone against a million heavenly soldiers, scarred, blood and tears like rain.
Even if your original spirit is scattered and reincarnated,
Even if you accumulate the well-being of sentient beings,
Even if you truly love her,
Even if there are many more,
After all, you have forgotten me, you have lost me, you owe me.
Heaven can be learned, I am willing to use my 100,000 merits in exchange for the marriage of his husband and wife! ”
Since then, there is only a handful of broken clothes left in the thirty-three heavens,
The little Taoist priest lifted the little fox's hijab, and when he raised his hand, he caught a glimpse of the dazzling red glow. ”
After Li Dan finished writing, he took a long breath, and was about to ask Lin Pang what this love triangle was like, but Lin Pang directly let go of his voice and cried this time.
Howling in a rough voice.
Everyone around looked over, and Li Dan hurriedly covered his mouth and sat down.
"I'll go, will you go?"
Lin Pang picked it up and followed up, sobbing constantly.
It's really, so impressive.
It turns out that short stories can still be written like this.
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Li Dan suddenly smiled: "It's my fault, you continue to cry." ”
Lin Pang wiped his eyes and hugged Li Dan, his eyes full of emotion: "Cousin, thank you, and thank my mother, when we go home, my grandfather will be very happy." ”
Li Dan waved his hand again and again: "I don't need this, I'll stay at the guest house, if you have any help for me now, I will definitely help, thank you and thank me." ”
Lin Pang said: "It's okay, although my grandfather is the city lord of this Ruyuan City, and although my house covers a large area, my grandfather has been supervising the teleportation array on weekdays, and rarely goes home." ”
"Where is your home?"
"Cousin, please come here!"
"I can guarantee that I will definitely get full marks for this one tomorrow."
"That's good, remember to thank me."
"Of course, but cousin, gratitude comes from the heart, why do you keep reminding me?"
"I'm afraid you'll forget."
"Well, actually, I'm afraid that you will forget me, in case the master assigns any tricky questions, no one will help me."
"With me, is your bed soft?"
"Absolutely soft, oh, I see, don't worry, it's definitely in place."
"What do you understand?"
"Don't see through it, don't look at me small, I understand."
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