268. Commenting on "I've Helped With This"

I found this book by accident and was stumbled upon by the title.

"I've Helped With This", Blue Fire Machine, Level 2 Author.

Classification Mystery - Detective Reasoning.

【Introduction】

In the dark.

Nightmares hidden in pillows, whispering softly, demagoguery.

Before dawn.

The fierce demon hiding in the elevator has a hideous face and chooses people to devour.

Between turns.

Viruses wandering around the computer, ignorant and silently infected.

Shhhhh

Everything you are familiar with, in fact, there is another face.

"Need my help?"

In times of crisis, life and death are instantaneous.

A man in a black trench coat descends from the sky.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, a guy full of positive energy. The main character, Lin Ye, is the protagonist of the story, so he also has a system. At first, I thought it was a bad luck system, but after I thought that after having a system, everything was not going well for him. But later I learned that this is a positive energy system, as long as the protagonist takes the initiative to help people, sooner or later he will be able to burst with positive energy.

Chapter 2, I really can't help with this. The protagonist starts a helping company to help others solve various difficulties. One day, a young man with a withered description comes to the door and asks the protagonist to help him find the lover of his dreams. But he couldn't provide any clues, so the protagonist had to refuse. Later, the young man died in the company's team building.

Chapter 3, Lucid Dreaming. The protagonist decides to attend the young man's funeral, only to find that many people in the company are very emaciated. His friend is a psychiatrist, and if anyone comes to him for help, he will refer him to his friends if he has mental problems. When he was chatting with his friends, he suddenly noticed that the customers between the two were surprisingly consistent.

Chapter 4, Contagious Dreams. Lucid dreams seem to be contagious, and not only are there signs of contagion between two patients, but even psychiatrists sometimes can't figure out the difference between reality and dreams. Thankfully, he has a peculiar way of identifying it, but its credibility is questionable. Because, another patient committed suicide.

Chapter 5, Letters from the Dead. The protagonist eats with friends, but the suicide of the patient worries the two of them. They decided to go to the funeral of the deceased, but they didn't see any clues. But that night, they received an email message from the deceased.

Chapter 6, The Strange Pillow. The two deceased did not acquire the ability to dream lucidly for no reason, but they came across a pillow given by a mysterious person when they went up the mountain by chance. The strange pillow eventually caused the two to die.

Chapter 7, Three Unexplained Doubts. When a friend came to the protagonist in the middle of the night, he spread out an analysis of the suspicious problems he found, and finally got entangled in that pillow.

Chapter 8, another one died. The protagonist and his friends go to the mountains to look for clues, but to no avail. At this time, the police went up the hill because someone jumped off the cliff again. This is a girl who has been linked to the deaths of two other people before her. But after checking for a long time, it only comes to mind the head of the costume scholar.

Chapter 9, The Failed Pillow. The protagonist and the others find the magical pillow in the female deceased's home, but they are taken home by Detective Zhang. The detective has no dreams all night and successfully returns the pillow to the protagonist.

Chapter 10, The Uninvited Guest. The protagonist went to the bookstore to find a lot of books about "Huangliang Sweet Dream" and "Nanke One Dream", and fell asleep while looking at it. In the dream, he saw the so-called Lu Sheng, and when he asked why the other party was sneaking into other people's dreams everywhere, he woke up from the dream.

[Brief comment]

About the author

Blue Huoji, a level 2 author, is the author of three works: "The First Desperate Situation in History", "My Plug-in is Chinese", and "I Can Help With This Favor".

Among them, "The First Desperate Situation in History" has very poor data, but it has written more than 3 million words.

In this book, the data is quite poor, and it is estimated that it is not as good as the previous book.

This is true of many authors, and new books are very fluttering.

This seems to be a norm lately.

I don't know if it's because readers are too lazy to support the first order and have been waiting and watching, or if the reader's reading taste is better, anyway, the recent new books, the first order is not very high.

Of course, this book is still early, not yet.

Judging from the results so far, I don't know if I can get to that point.

Synopsis

This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Lin Ye, who takes the initiative to help others with the help of the system, and opens a company to help others, so as to get the value of helping others and open the functions of the system.

Character characteristics

The character of the protagonist is not very clear, and it is not clear whether he is cautious or enthusiastic.

Anyway, I can't judge anything from the current plot, and his identity as the protagonist is a bit vague.

Stylistic features

The story in the early stage is a bit confusing, and several characters appear in a little unclear.

The C position of the protagonist Lin Ye is not obvious, and he is rhythmized by several supporting roles.

A pillow, several suicide stories, the order is chaotic, the rhythm jumps, the coherence between the stories is not good, and the similarity is high.

In addition, the writing is bland and the language is verbose, which does not create a cool point in the early stage, but is very dull on the contrary.

Therefore, this book is probably going to pounce again.

Good logical reasoning, nothing was introduced, and a pillow stunned everyone.

This time, I'm clumsy again!

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

First of all, thanks for the tipping interrupted the change.

I have to thank the editor for the recommendation.

Hopefully, the editor will always be able to think of me.

Secondly, the book recommended this time is not very good.

In the beginning, I was attracted to the title and the synopsis was well written.

The positive guy in the first chapter is also a bit interesting, and the system looks naughty too.

But from the beginning of the second chapter to the end of the trial reading, the system disappeared.

The system doesn't work at all!

So what's the point of setting up a system?

The sub-category of this book is logical reasoning, and the story follows the route of reasoning, without over-exaggerating the suspense and wonderful atmosphere.

However, the reasoning was really jerky, and several people took turns to connect the origin of the pillow with Nan Ke's dream.

even led to the so-called Lu Shenglai, which did not have a bonus effect.

At the beginning of this book, I was directly stunned by the trial reading worm.

However, based on this alone, the author is also quite powerful.

It's not often that anyone can write the opening so wildly and misty.

So, I'm convinced!

I resolutely refuse to admit that I am not able to read accurately, "strayed into the depths of lotus flowers"!

It can be seen that it is indeed not easy to be a new book reviewer.

On the one hand, I can't bear to miss out on high-quality new books;

On the one hand, I can't bear to give up every author who decisively opens a new pit.

Creation is like this, no matter how good you think, in the end, you still have to look at the effect of the book.

There was a child in the group before, and he swore that he was thinking of an unparalleled work.

Wonderful plot, rigorous setting, layer after layer of foreshadowing, cool points one after another, can definitely be an instant hit.

Later, everyone asked him what the title of the book was.

Say, the book hasn't been sent yet!

It's a bit embarrassing.

In this regard, there seems to be nothing more to say except encouragement.

You can't just persuade people to give up!

So, if you're also going to write one, please write it in time, don't just think about it~

As long as you dare to write, someone will dare to read it.

As for a book to seal a god or something, don't think about it, it's easy to get frustrated!