89. Commenting on "The Road to the Sky"

I have not dared to write the book I introduced today because it is too advanced.

"The Road to the Sky", Author: Mao Greasy, platinum writer.

Category: Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.

【Introduction】

Kill one person in a thousand miles, and ten steps are unwilling to go.

The introduction is adapted from Li Bai's "Chivalrous Journey" in "Ten steps to kill a person, a thousand miles without staying." ”

It is also a true portrayal of the protagonist Jing Jiu.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, Three Thousand Miles Forbidden. Outside the Qingshan Sect, Yin San, a disciple of the Demon Sect, was eating hot pot, and was discovered and caught by Zhao Layue, a disciple of the Qingshan Sect, and the two talked about some interesting stories about eating hot pot. Subsequently, Yin San was killed. And the Qingshan Sect issued a ban of three thousand miles, because Jingyang Master Ancestor was going to soar.

Chapter 2, Slash the Sky with a Sword. Uncle Xiao soared, and the Qingshan Sect was very happy, because he did not have any positive impact on the sect. Many great powers came to observe the ceremony, some with other intentions. The thunder fell, and a sword light flew out, facing the thunder, tearing the sky apart.

Chapter 3, the young man in white who stepped into the river again. Zhao Layue carried Yin San's corpse, with a smile on the corner of her mouth, Uncle Shi soared, and then she was a little puzzled. In the cave on the other side, a young man in white looked at the corpse on the stone bed, very helpless. Walking into the creek, he fell to the bottom of the lake, and the spell was ineffective, so he had to drill wood to make fire, sit quietly and practice, but he couldn't remember the trick to enter the door.

Chapter 4, Nine Days. The young man in white came to a village, ready to live, and because he was too good-looking, he was respected as an immortal master by the villagers. He picked a random child, spent nine days learning basic life skills, and made a deck chair, which was a very crucial prop.

Chapter 5, One Year. Within a year, everyone knew that the young man in white was named Jing Jiu, and the person who served him was renamed Liu Shi. Jing Jiu was lazy and didn't want to do anything. However, he was extremely good at deduction, and the enemy soon came to his door.

[Brief comment]

When this book first came out, I kept chasing it, and when I reached a third of the way, I started raising it, and it turned out to be until now.

It's not that the book isn't wonderful, it's that it's too advanced.

Those who are interested should see that the title and introduction of this book are really distinctive, just like the ancient sayings of the female frequency, there are many poems and songs.

This is a bit similar to the writing style of traditional martial arts, which shows that the author is indeed very particular about writing and layout. Once the text is young, it will directly make the reader have a pimple.

The author abandons the previous writing style, tries to reduce psychological descriptions and environmental descriptions, strives to convey more stories with the least amount of words, and insists on pushing everything with plot. This is actually really difficult, because by reducing the dialogue and the environment, it cuts off the opportunity for hydrology on its own. Especially the opening sentences, which are even more concise to the point of outrageous.

In addition, the protagonist Jing Jiu seems to look down on life and death, and in the face of his "fading body", after a simple farewell, he looks for a place to live on his own, teaches Liu Shi-year-old, and helps him cultivate.

Jing Jiu is very good-looking, even more beautiful than a girl, and the villagers are very simple, but they just regard him as an immortal master. And for true cultivators, appearance is sometimes not a very important thing.

Zhao Layue in this book is not pretty, with short hair, no different from a tomboy. Yoo is also not an outward-looking person. Both of them are born Dao species, with extremely high cultivation talents, one is good and one is "evil", but they are both loyal supporters of Jing Jiu.

And Jing Jiu, who has lived for many years, has a young body and an old heart, and few people can pluck his heartstrings.

The greasy protagonist is always habitually calm, calm, and quiet, and the people and things in the world can hardly move him. Often only when the life and death of a loved one is born, do you realize that there is a feeling that has been buried in the bottom of my heart.

Greasy books can always bring peace to people, which is very different from the increasingly exaggerated and noisy online articles at present. Reading his books, in addition to feeling the beauty of the words, you can also feel more thoughts on human nature, life, and truth.

Of course, people who don't like this book will also complain, and this kind of writing seems to be a bit too much pursuit of the simplicity of the text and the X-loading of the characters, which is a bit overdressed.

And the recent transition of the plot gives life a hard and abrupt feeling, why did you suddenly enter the scientific and technological civilization? What is the difference between this and the Holy Light Continent at the end of "Chosen Heaven"? This can only be seen slowly.

【Summary】

The greasy book has a special sense of luxury, which can make people calm and think.

I hope more friends like it~

【Cang's Whispering】

Update early today, I don't want the only two flag planters to wait too long.

Although I don't know what kind of night owls these two are, whether it's 2 o'clock or 3 o'clock.

They'll all be there!

As a street writer, what I look forward to the most is that every time I update, I can get feedback from readers very quickly.

Even if there are some bad negative comments, at least it's an interaction.

In the past few days, I have been in the latest chapters of some of the earlier better works, and I can hardly see what this chapter says.

Those readers, either didn't wait, or have given up on leaving messages.

In fact, many readers don't like to leave messages and interact with each other, especially older readers.

If you don't do it, you have to switch to handwriting and typing.

So, I'm really glad to have a flag planter to escort this book all the way.

Fortunately, although there are only 365 collections in this book, the number of people who have subscribed to it is actually better than when I serialized "Giant Mirror" at that time.

It's a real thing to be happy about.

I've been thinking about how long I have to write this book and how many postures I have to change to write a review in order to attract the attention of more readers.

I even thought about floating a silver alliance for myself and absorbing 30,000 collections.

But it's also tangled.

If you can save enough money from the Silver Alliance, it is better to discount it and change a computer for yourself.

And since I have no recommendation, I am actually still a little flustered.

I don't know how far the future of this book can go.

In fact, many authors have this concern.

Of the seven million authors, more than a million are still working to update the estimates.

The small category is good to say, and the recommendation may be a little more.

But no matter how small the category is, there is strong competition.

And writing a book, if you keep going standalone, is really a boring and long thing.

Thankfully, the interactivity of the book is really okay.

Judging by this amount of collection, it really can!

The topic is hard turned!

The book "The Road to the Sky" is still very worth a look, although it is not ranked high on major lists.

This book needs to be savored, the writing is simple, the plot jumps, and the attitude of boldly trying new ways of writing is also worthy of praise.

If you don't run to engage in any scientific and technological civilization in the later stage, it may be more unified in style.

However, other authors must have their own considerations, maybe they want to connect with the previous works.

After all, many platinum writers are writing series.

It's true that he is tired of it, and he didn't engage in his own "few parts".

The number of words is about the same, and readers must not break the bank.

By the way, the first order of Eagle's new book is 16,000, which is about the same as my conservative forecast of 12,000.

If it weren't for that Silver Alliance, it would be almost a 100% hit.

Finally, ask for a subscription~