Today I would like to recommend to you a game article with "epic" writing.

"Ita's Pillar", Author: Scarlet Yan, Level 5 Author.

Category: Games - Virtual Games.

【Introduction】

Welcome to Aitalia, the land above the clouds.

Let's push open the door, pick up the cane, and the adventure will begin here—

Through the hills of clouds and sea, like the grass of floating waves, the shallow river is shining;

The fields of gold and honey flow, full of laughter, under the low house of Rodell, soft songs are melodious.

Through the ancient forests of Egunne, the shadows of the gloom are full of branches and whispers;

Beyond the mountains and mountains, the dark shadows of the underground world are moving, dangers are lurking, and the sword is refracted.

The story of the boy chasing his dreams, above the sky and cloud ridges, the shadow of the dragon, soaring and spreading its wings.

And after the dust of time, the fire is still bright.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, The Tale of the Maiden, the Boy and the Wolf. Fang Yu is an alchemist who is proficient in repairing equipment, and his body has no magic and is practical. He relies on clockwork fairies and constant learning, and is the quintessential hardworking player. And the girl Miya is a violent girl. They don't know they're in danger.

Chapter 2, Mercenary Maxims, Take Money to Do Things. The protagonist is a member of a mercenary group who carries out a very important mission. Mia goes to another combat group, and the protagonist and the others are waiting for the employer to pay before starting the employer.

Chapter 3, Humiliating Grenadiers and Line Infantry. The protagonist's team encountered the main members of the Spear of the Silver Forest, and the battle between the two sides was extremely fierce, and even the protagonist Konoha who was born in a professional life was forced to hold a seven-style flintlock pistol. He disrupts the vision of a sneak attacker leader with a clockwork elf, allowing his teammates to kill him.

Chapter 4, Insignificant Pawns. Once again, they were attacked by the Spear of the Silver Forest, and although the battle was victorious, it also made people start to speculate. Whether they have made pawns in someone else's hands.

Chapter 5, Aitaria is not absolutely safe. The Secret Strongman begins to shoot the protagonist's group, which makes everyone panic. The protagonist is calm and calm, and the captain and others have a lot of combat experience, teaching the protagonist how to shoot and how to fight.

Chapter 6, The Uninvited Guest Behind the Fog. The group is attacked by a druid on the outskirts of the ruins, and the protagonist is restrained by a woman, who bites him when he opens his mouth. An even greater danger came from behind the mist, a giant millipede, the guardian of the ruins and a dragon knight that only alchemists could refine. It seems to be coming for the main character.

Chapter 7, The Gate, the Beginning of a Legend. The giant constructed giant worm keeps an eye on the protagonist's backpack, where the dagger Mia gave him. The dagger is covered in blood, and the protagonist activates the dragon knight system, which fails to detect, but a strange emblem is generated on the forehead. This may be the beginning of the legendary life of the protagonist's dragon knight.

Chapter 8, The Invisible Hand. The protagonist runs away with the mercenary deputy commander on his back until the other party's body gradually gets colder. At the ruins, the two sides are facing off, one bowing its head and the other asking for a truce. Because someone has already entered the heart of the ruins.

Chapter 9, Dragon Knight, Attack. All the mercenaries are dead, and only the protagonist is alive and facing the hunt of other organizations. He barely managed to fight until the Constructed Giant Worm burst out of the ground.

Chapter 10, don't guess what a woman thinks. The two Constructed Giant Worms had been in the ruins all along, and it was the light from Mia's dagger that attracted them. Seeing this, the pursuing enemy did not dare to go any further. After all, you can't just give your life away.

[Brief comment]

Scarlet Flame, author of "Amber Sword", "Heart of Canaan", and "Pillar of Ita".

She is best known for "The Amber Sword", and "Ita Pillar" has been praised by readers for her great improvement in writing.

What's more, it is said that the writing of this book has reached the "epic level".

Anyone who has played the game knows that epic gear is very difficult to obtain.

Take DNF as an example, how many times do you have to farm the abyss if you want to get a level 90 epic giant sword?

And the writing of this book, judging from my trial reading, is far from that level.

Although the world of the book is a Western fantasy game, there are many textual descriptions of exotic lands.

What holy, solemn, glorious......

For readers who rarely pay attention to such works, it doesn't add much to the sense of involvement.

On the contrary, the greasy writing is more in line with the oriental aesthetics.

Sister Banana also loves to write about the environment and psychology, and at the beginning and end of each chapter, there must be a paragraph.

It is recommended that readers with composition training requirements take it slow when reading the books of these three authors.

Let's talk about the characters and the plot.

Online texts, in fact, do not have much requirement for writing.

Readers are still looking at the characters and the story.

Whether the characters are vivid enough and whether the storyline is exciting is the key.

The character of Fang Yuan, the protagonist of this book, has been criticized a lot, his teammates have been wiped out, and he is still thinking about a girl.

As for the plot, it is a bit slow and even draggy.

It can be seen that the number of words in the chapters of this book is still very sincere, 4000+.

It can be read, like reading a lyrical prose, plus a scientific paper.

The dangerous picture, the passion of the battle, the subtle twists, are still a little less.

In particular, the management of the book review area is a bit lax, and too many unbeautiful reviews will also affect the development of a book.

However, what I said is more or less a bit of a picky egg.

This sister, among many online writers, has really excellent literary skills and the quality of her works.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

First of all, I would like to thank the 2014 little book friends for rewarding 1000 starting coins, the pen falling blue and white rewarding 500 starting coins, and Mr. Yu Wen for rewarding 100 starting coins.

Secondly, the update of this book is ferocious.

Each single chapter is 5000+, which directly leads to the fact that when I was writing the Golden Ten Chapters, I felt like I had read two books.

Coupled with the authentic fantasy style, many settings are foggy.

The description of the scenery and the psychology of the characters are so broken that I want to jump and watch, but I can't bear to miss the author's writing.

I really envy these well-written authors, and the things they write are elegant and beautiful, just like Peppa Pig's ballet lessons.

The story is also full of twists and turns and bizarre fate, and the next copy directly comes to a group annihilation, and several forces confront and fight, but in the end the best thing is cheaper for others.

Witch Mia's ability to strategize is not inferior to KUN the All-Sighted.

And although the protagonist is an ordinary man who has crossed over, he soared into the sky after activating the bloodline, and the road of the dragon knight is not far away.

Although there are many good things to see in this book, it is also too niche.

It's even more niche than writing about the SCP Foundation.

And the author wrote three books, which I really admire.

If you're interested in this slightly more complicated book, you might as well take a look at it and make yourself a little more posed and snack!