10. Comment on "Linyuan Xing"

Title: Platinum writer Otaku released his new book "Lin Yuan Xing", and the three golden chapters are full of ingenuity

Two days ago, I heard that the house pig was going to send a new book on the 15th.

When I woke up this afternoon, I saw my friends pushing "Linyuan Xing" in a hurry, and I immediately felt wrong.

In addition to the passionate bombardment of the three Silver Alliances, the starting point of this book also gives platinum writers the splash screen recommendation they deserve.

It's really hard not to pay attention!

It's now half past one in the morning on the 16th.

There are currently 48 alliance leaders in this book, including three in the Silver Alliance, hundreds of thousands of fans, the collection has already broken 50,000, and the recommendation votes have also broken 10,000.

Overall, the results of the new book debut are worthy of the traffic of top platinum writers.

Now, please follow me into this book.

"Lin Yuan Xing", author: house pig, platinum writer.

Category: Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.

【Introduction】

Su Yun never thought that he had lived in Tianmen Town for more than ten years, and he was the only one who was human.

He didn't expect that outside Tianmen Town, a radius of 100 miles, it was a famous no-man's land.

Linyuan Xing.

Walking in the abyss in the dark night, you must be refreshed and walk on thin ice!

【Golden Chapter 3】

In the first chapter, the fox reads with him. Qiu Shuijing came to Tianshiyuan from Shuofang City, and saw the grass in the countryside overgrown with weeds and wild foxes everywhere. The group suddenly found that there was a fox reading in Liao's uninhabited Xuan Xu, and there was actually a teenager sitting in it, who was still blind.

Chapter 2, the door of heaven opens, and the ghost market appears. The purpose of Qiu Shuijing and his entourage is to come to the ghost market to trade and get opportunities. What I didn't expect was that the blind boy was able to set up a stall in the ghost market.

In the third chapter, the yellow bell timekeeping, asks the world about spring and autumn. Qiu Shuijing followed the boy all the way, returned from the ghost market, saw many mysteries, and finally came to the rumored Tianmen Town.

[Brief comment]

In terms of quantity alone, it is relatively generous.

The first three chapters of the new book of Otaku are 10,000 words.

For example, I eat tomatoes in the first two chapters of my new book "Cangyuan Map", 7500 words; When the new book "Tomorrow Down" was first released, it was a character sample of more than 10,000 words, commonly known as the text; swept the world's new book "Creation Map" for the first seven chapters; The first ten chapters of Talking Elbow's "First Sequence"; The first six chapters of Pure Di Xiaolong's new book "Demon Lin" are more than 20,000 words......

And qualitatively speaking, that's quite kind.

The background introduction of the opening,Many rare words and allusions,Fortunately, this chapter says that there are capable people.,It's not hard to read.。 The opening diction is a common trick used by mature writers, which shows the full preparation of the new book and also reflects the cultural connotation of the book.

The appearance of the protagonist Su Yun is even more delicate and detailed.

In the dilapidated order, there were bursts of reading sounds, which was already curious. followed the sound, but it was a group of foxes reading, which was even more amazing. The field of vision narrowed, and there was a teenager sitting among the foxes. Finally, through a third person, it was pointed out that the boy was blind. This wave of twists and turns can be described as carefully arranged, peeling off layer by layer, which is full of curiosity and shock.

What's even more blinding is that the protagonist can actually walk into the ghost market in the sky and set up stalls like those ghosts. Who is blind is still unknown. As Qiu Shuijing deepens step by step, the mystery of Su Yun's identity will be perfectly revealed step by step.

The prop setting is nostalgic.

The seven-layer yellow clock, which will turn and be divided into levels, represents the time scale, and also hints at the amazing talent of the protagonist, which is accurate to the point of "suddenly". It reminds the reader of the beginningless clock.

The protagonist slipped down from the ghost market with a fairy rope, which is already speculative. That willow tree is even more called "willow god". These settings are full of memories.

In the end, the plot came to an abrupt end when it appeared in Tianmen Town, which was both admirable and evocative, and the identity of the protagonist was even more confused.

What is the relationship between Su Yun and Tianmen Town, why can he go in and out of the ghost market to set up stalls, why he has a spiritual treasure, why he is blind, why he knows that he is being followed but does not point it out, why he lives here alone......

These doubts are just what I occasionally come up with, and this chapter is even more lively~

These are enough to show the author's ability and skills to arouse people's appetite and lay out suspense.

The so-called golden three chapters, I think, are not worse than the sentence back then: "Fighting spirit, three paragraphs", right?

【Summary】

Old readers are actually very aware that most of the great gods and platinum writers are eating old books, and some are even gnawing coffin books, and the routines of new books are not as good as old books, let alone how attentive.

This makes many people not interested in the books on the list, nor are they interested in new books by well-known authors.

However, the new book of the house pig, everyone should be able to see his intentions, and the plot is also very exciting, which is very worth getting into.

Even, I hope to surpass the "Overlord Tianzun" of "The Legend of the Faun"!

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Kura Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Crash Demon King"!