396. Commenting on "I Am the First Person in the Flood Famine"
Today I would like to recommend a book to you.
This book won the third place in the 2019 Xianxia Million Essay Contest and won the title of "Immortal King".
"I am the first person in the flood wilderness", the air cloud Shu Yunjuan, level 4 author.
Category: Xianxia - Mythological Xiuzhen.
【Introduction】
Singing and looking up,
I can't see the mountains.
I can see the mountains of Buzhou,
It should be the greatest luck of a fairy.
But it was seen by a mortal......
【Golden Ten Chapters】
In the first chapter, I looked up at Buzhou Mountain. The protagonist Gao Ge travels to the desolate world, and he has a plain towel on his body. The body of the fat house, there is nothing to describe. After he kept running, he finally got a lot stronger. He recovered his body in the purple space and went to the Heavenly Pillar Buzhou Mountain, as if he wanted to win some Heavenly Dao Qi.
In the second chapter, a treasure knife is found. The protagonist defeats the timid black-armored beast, and before he has time to rejoice, two giant beasts in the distant sky hit him, causing the ground to shake violently. The protagonist hid far away, but he was still affected. He wakes up in a mysterious space and digs out the teeth of the behemoth from the ground that he had lost during the previous battle.
Chapter 3, practicing martial arts in the flood wilderness. The protagonist encounters the black-armored beast again in the valley and fights with him. The protagonist's strength is thin and he doesn't know martial arts, so he killed the black-armored beast with his ingenious skills. He dragged away the carcass of the black-armored beast, dug up the yellow essence, and lived a good life. And his martial arts practice is also ordinary.
Chapter 4, Invite Me to Eat Pine Nuts. The protagonist travels to the fourth valley, which seems to be particularly dangerous. He is fully armed, but is attacked with pine nuts by a cute little squirrel and captures his heart. He also used valuables such as yellow essence and grass roots to form an inexplicable friendship with the little squirrel.
Chapter 5, long service and lightness. The protagonist eats a lot of pine nuts and gradually gets closer to the squirrel's habits. The friendship between this person and the mouse also grew deeper. One day the clouds are thick, and the protagonist wants to return to his own valley, but is stopped by a squirrel. Thanks to the help of the squirrel, the protagonist was not swept away by the flood.
Chapter 6, you can go home if you think about it. The flood turns the valley where the protagonist used to be into a lake, and he can't find his own exclusive space, the Purple Gold Palace. Unexpectedly, as soon as his mind moved, the Purple Gold Palace immediately appeared. After trial and error, he determined that he could summon the Purple Gold Palace anytime and anywhere, teleporting himself to different valleys, as well as other places.
Chapter 7, there are youkai on the westbound road. The protagonist runs all the way west to Buzhou Mountain. It didn't take long for him to encounter a tall dryad, and he was so frightened that he quickly hid. But after the fight, he realized that this dryad was not his opponent at all, and he was beaten by him and hid in the hole.
Chapter 8, A Good Fat Pig. The protagonist rows a boat across a long river and walks a long, long distance on foot when he suddenly bumps into a group of small wild boars. He didn't pay attention to the pigs at first, until he was stabbed by a cute little boar and hung on the other party's teeth, and this time he realized that the group of wild boars was not easy to get along with.
Chapter 9, we also have a heritage. The Purple Gold Palace has a new skill, and it really gives the protagonist exercises that can be practiced. The protagonist can't wait to see what he's getting together. The Dao Body Tempering Method had improved his physical fitness, and he wanted to go into the forest to slowly probe.
Chapter 10, Who called your number so unlucky. The protagonist follows the group of penguins, finds out each other's outer nests, and when the time is right, they disappear. Under his strong shot, he can only fight men or not, and he can be regarded as completing the Hongyuan promised by him on duty.
[Brief comment]
The book was released on May 10, 2019, with an initial order of 1600, and was included in the boutique on June 17. At present, it has ended, with a total of 1.55 million words, 71,000 starting point collections, 40,000 book city collections, and 170,000 fans.
Originally, I saw his other book "Smiling Proudly" first, and the title of the book is a bit of a smiling and proud of the rivers and lakes.
When I clicked on the author's introduction, I found that he still had a complete work, and he also won the third place in the Xianxia essay.
This makes it even more curious.
Because the title of the book is quite domineering. There are so many excellent works in the torrent, this book, which is known as the first person, has no popularity.
The number of words is not very large, which does not meet the characteristics of Xianxia's classification of water and long. balance
At the end of the speech, the author explained the reason and the writing collapsed.
It doesn't matter, you can win awards if you write a breakdown, and maybe it's easier to win an essay award.
Actually, it's not, I'm just a little sour.
After reading the previous chapters, the content of dozens of chapters is the protagonist of a human wandering around several valleys looking for various opportunities, there are treasures of heaven and earth, and there are also magical little animals. There are only no living people, I don't know if it's because the level of these valleys is too low, it's just a single version of the novice village, which is not suitable for the appearance of real monks.
The protagonist struggled for a long time, and finally got the system and sent him a cultivation exercise to help him cultivate slowly, so as not to be destroyed by natural disasters if he was not careful.
The author said that this book is different from other torrents, not to pursue the sanctification of ancestors, but to pursue the story of people, hoping to excavate the brilliance of human nature in the flood.
His ambitions are lofty and his starting point is very chic, but unfortunately the writing collapsed.
And the plot in the early stage is not very pleasing, even a little dull, and it is a bit depressing to read. It doesn't feel like a desolation, it's just desolation!
If you have friends who are chasing more, you may wish to leave a message to communicate.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
The book is not well written at the beginning, like entering a zoo.
The protagonist encounters a lot of difficulties, either natural disasters, animal and plant monsters, or himself.
In the desolate world, even if there is a system, it is difficult to do 100%.
Originally, I came for the title of the book, and the first person in the flood famine made me very curious, and I dared to be the first person, aren't I [afraid] of what can be hidden in the torrent?
But when I look at it, I want to sleep.
This is actually the story of a person's successful survival in the desolate world. There are no particularly big waves, and there are no amazing explosions.
All, because of his appearance, this world has a little more fireworks.
It is this trace of fireworks that takes the protagonist slowly forward to explore the mystery of Buzhou Mountain.
Many authors write about the torrent, and many people also love to watch the torrent, but there are not many good floods.
Read too much of this type of book, and you may become suspicious of mythology and believe in science.
Despite this, animated films are very fond of the theme of floods, and there is a huge space for imagination.
Well, without further ado.
Good night!