171. Commenting on "The Heavens and Immortals"

Today I would like to recommend to you a new work of infinite heavens.

"The Heavens and the Immortals", the author is a dusty author, a level 2 author.

Category: Science Fiction - Time Travel.

【Introduction】

Coming to the strange world of reincarnation, facing the pawnshop that seeks money and kills, Luo Feng is furious, I am a dignified traverser!

How can you let a few of you scum of the old times bully!

What, there could be a gun ?! Slipped, slipped.

Wait for me to breathe out the twelfth layer of the technique, the day after tomorrow will be consummated, and King Kong will not be bad and come back to revenge!

What the? There are aliens in this world, who can have innate abilities and can learn acquired skills, which is terrifying!

Slipped, slipped, wait for me to be born again after a hundred layers of the Tuna Technique, I can't beat you, I can't consume you?!

What the? In 1937, the devil entered the Central Plains......

Slip ......,!

Lao Tzu's golden body! Five Thunder Town Bricks! What about the wishful vajra stick!

All Lao Tzu pull it up!

One person, Demon Boy, Fox Demon, Immortal Rebellion, Covering the Sky, Emperor Ba, Journey to the West, Mystery, Xiling, Nuwa......

Through the heavens and worlds, the endless void sea, and eventually become a generation of Gou Immortals!

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Shocked! The main god space turned out to be ...... The protagonist appears in the main god space, but finds that there is a group of big guys sitting here, protagonists from major worlds. The Lord God suddenly realized that the situation was not right, and that these people were not something he could restrain himself.

Chapter 2, the worst main god in history. The main god was quickly destroyed by the two bigwigs, and only a few small crumbs overflowed, which could be regarded as a little benefit to the others. The protagonist Luo Feng survived, or was successfully reborn.

Chapter 3, from the heart, slipped, slipped. Luo Feng and Zheng Zhe were both reborn and rescued by an old farmer. The identity is difficult to say. Luo Feng and the others went to the pawn shop to change some money, but they were followed by the other party. The world is unstable.

Chapter 4, The Correct Way to Open the Way of the Talisman. Luo Feng took Zheng Zhe to see a doctor and talked about his heart, so he had to go down side by side. Fortunately, the old farmers who saved people were willing to guarantee their household registration in the village. The two are not idle, and they have their own specialties and complementary skills.

Chapter 5, the seventh set of spitting techniques, is revised to 23rd edition. The two of them practiced hard and achieved a small success, but when they remembered what happened to them in the pawn shop, they still didn't dare to blatantly seek revenge. They chose to sneak in at night.

Chapter 6, Time is long, a year later. That night, the two found out the identity of the pawn shop's gangster, but they did not resolutely take action to eliminate the harm for the people. They hibernate for another year, and their skills have become more sophisticated. Gou became an immortal's dream, and he took another step forward.

Chapter 7, The Age of Bastards. The two went home after practicing, and met the village chief and Yuan Yuan on the way. This is a tragic story. The two claimed Yuan Yuan, remembered the gangster a year ago, and finally prepared to make a move.

Chapter 8, Level 3 A and Level 3 Pack. The two decided to destroy the Black Dragon Gang, although it was a small copy, they still had to be a little more prepared. Level 3 A and Level 3 Pack, all kinds of dangers are taken into account. Eliminate the evil!

Chapter 9, The Terrifying Black Dragon Gang. The two formulated 7749 battle plans, and only three were used to successfully infiltrate the opponent's base camp. I didn't have any sense of precaution, and the infiltration process was a little easier.

Chapter 10, the thousand-year-old dark room, a light is on. Luo Feng first used the otaku secret technique - pseudophony to trick the door open, and get the other party before the other party shoots. After some questioning, the forces behind it were involved. In order to catch them all, they used the gang leader to trick all the bad guys involved in and kill them one by one!

[Brief comment]

Now that you've seen the introduction, it's not a deliberate word count, but to show you how to write an interesting long introduction.

This brief is really long, 258 words.

But it also makes the tone of the story of the book clear.

What attracts me to this book is not the heavenly stream, the infinite stream, the invincible stream, and the steady stream, after all, what book haven't I read?

The biggest attraction to me in this book is actually the first chapter.

The main god space, the main god recruited reincarnators, but for some reason, he actually recruited 37 people at once, and 35 of them were the protagonists of the major well-known heavenly streams.

You can go and compare carefully to see how many you recognize?

According to the inner monologue of the main god, if a big guy makes a move, he can still open five or five; The two bigwigs make a move, and he may escape; Dozens of bigwigs made a move, then he could only die so much that there was no scum left.

Therefore, the main god was destroyed, and the main god space exploded.

The bigwigs just smiled and left.

The poor protagonist Luo Feng and another lucky person, Zheng Zhe, are lucky enough to survive and travel to a small village during the chaos of the people.

Then, they got up. The character of the protagonist in the early part of the book is deeply influenced by the stability of the senior brother.

One can do talismans, and the other can practice!

But they were not reckless at all, they were bullied by the Black Dragon Gang, and they continued to be reluctant. After a year of hard work, they finally achieved something, and finally under a tragic opportunity, they entered the Black Dragon Gang. With the assistance of the gang leader, they destroyed the Black Dragon Gang, but attracted the revenge of Generalissimo Ma. One battle, one tragedy.

By accident, the protagonist is separated from his friend, who may be dead.

The protagonist continues to wander the worlds, fighting magicians, intercepting and expounding teachings, fighting the sky and the earth, and fighting the air!

In addition, the early stage of this book is extremely amazing, and the plot in the back is a little impatient, and the transition of the world is a little hurried.

The key point is that this book is only 180,000 words, I don't know how to write it later, and if I don't control the speed, I may have just eaten a month of full attendance, and the book will be finished. That would be a shame.

Moreover, the author of this book is extremely sophisticated in writing and paragraphs, and he should not be a cute new author. So, be sure to control yourself~

【Summary】

This book is very exciting, and it is worth paying attention to!

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

Just went to read the latest chapter of this book, and the chapter title is quite bold.

At least much braver than me!

These kinds of authors are full of talent, have nowhere to put it, and need an outlet to release their emotions.

It's just that I didn't expect that in the Western world, there is still a package price for the Bodhisattva fruit position.

The Ming King Buddha package that the protagonist ordered at the end is still quite cost-effective.

This book has finally reached the end of the Three Realms, and I have my own opinions on the exposition of Buddhism, of course, most of them are spoofs.

The style from beginning to end is still relatively uniform, and the rhythm is still relatively fast.

Generally speaking, when it comes to writing at this level, how can it be a story after a million words.

Judging from the development of this book, it may be over in less than a million.

I don't know if I'm not good at water word counts, or I don't like water word counts, this book shouldn't be too long.

Several books by the author, not long.

This is very unpopular!

Today, some friends say that many books do not need to be written to more than 10 million words.

I also agree, and even said that if there are more than five million words, seventy percent are in the number of water words.

So, I want my short story to be 4.99 million words!

To be a man, you can't be too watery!

Even in the era of free.