334. Commenting on "Where Did the Taoist Go"

Today's book is less than 600,000 words, but it has five silver leagues.

"Where Did the Taoist Go", Babao Rice, Level 5 Author.

Category: Xianxia - Fantasy Cultivation of Immortals.

【Introduction】

Gu Zuo held the plaque of the sect, his enthusiasm was like fire, and his eyebrows smiled into a crescent moon: "Driver, this brother, are you willing to join the Huaixian Pavilion?" ”

In this world, it is difficult to cultivate immortals, and it is even more difficult to recruit people!

【Golden Ten Chapters】

The first chapter is all in one place. The protagonist Gu Zuo was picked up by the bad king Taoist priest and returned to Hengyi Hall as a Taoist boy, but unfortunately there was a sudden change in policy, and all the Taoist temples without qualifications were destroyed and the personnel were imprisoned. The protagonist stays in prison for a few days and is released again. He was stopped by two ruffians and told him to reopen the museum and collect protection money at the end of the month. Penniless, he even had a problem eating.

Chapter 2, Young Master He. The protagonist really doesn't have the money to reopen the Taoist temple, so the He family sends someone to ask him to help find something. Worried, he had no choice but to follow the He family. When he arrived at He's house, he found that he was looking for a tanuki, but he really didn't have the ability to find things.

Chapter 3, Soul Search. The protagonist once touched a copy of the first volume of "Sou Ling Jue" from Wang Daochang and copied it overnight. He knew all the words in the book, but without spirit stones, he couldn't cultivate. He went out a few times and didn't find anything to eat, so he went to the Immortal Cultivation Sect next door and met Senior Sister Luo.

Chapter 4, Angels. The imperial court sent envoys to congratulate the old man of the He family on his birthday, and all the characters in the county showed their faces, including the protagonist. He mingled in the crowd and didn't notice his dyed tanuki goof. I got the bounty, but I didn't have enough money to leave here. The ruffians came on time to collect the protection money.

Chapter 5, The Problem of Money. The master of the He family rewarded a huge amount of money, and all the registered Taoist halls could receive the reward. The ruffian took the protagonist to get 2,000 wen, but he only had 200 wen in his hand. That's it, and the props were swallowed by the ruffians again. He tried to escape, but was unsuccessful.

Chapter 6, moved. The protagonist can't get the money, so he asks the ruffian to buy spirit stones. As a result, the other party really bought a piece, and the price was naturally inflated. That night, he practiced according to the "Soul Search Technique", and he really practiced the aura. When the time came to hunt ghosts, they went together. I thought I was fooling, but it turned out that the cheap magic weapon compass really moved.

Chapter 7, Ghost Hunting. The protagonist and the others really heard the woman laughing in the Ren family's vegetable garden, saw a white shadow, threw the peach wood sword, and finally really caught something. After receiving the reward, he opened his pocket and found a mouse. Everything is a scam. And the protagonist cultivated hard, and absorbed all the spiritual power in the spirit stone in three days.

Chapter 8, the quality of the spirit stone. The protagonist and others went to the Taoist temple where the spirit stone was sold, and the other party also recognized that he sold the spirit stone, and then gave the protagonist a piece for free. Unexpectedly, it took three days to absorb the spiritual power again. They had to admit it this time, who let the other Taoist temple have a foundation building master.

Chapter 9, Digging a Pit. The protagonist is stuck inside the house, and the ruffian outside has been sharpening his knives because they have taken on a mission to cultivate a demon. After thinking about it, the matter was extremely dangerous, and he decided to dig a pit and escape. After digging all night, he couldn't escape smoothly, but as soon as he got out of the hospital, he met Wei Gongzi, the person who sold his spirit stones, and came to the door.

Chapter 10, The Law of Pursuit. Wei Gongzi made a special trip to the protagonist and asked the protagonist to help find things, which is also what Wang Daochang, who he followed before, is best at. But the protagonist doesn't learn the surface. In desperation, he had no choice but to follow, and the two ruffians followed closely behind, and their words were mostly threatening.

[Brief comment]

About the author

Babao Rice, a level 5 author, is the author of "The New Order of the Tang Dynasty", "The Law of Daomen", and "Where Did the Taoist Chief".

The first book is a historical classification, and the last two books are Xianxia classification, both of which have reached a high-quality product.

"The Law of the Daomen" has even reached the glory of Baimeng, and according to the author's own words, the reward for this book far exceeds the number of subscriptions.

And the new book "Where Did the Taoist Go" is also very powerful in terms of rewarding.

It will be on the shelves on May 22, 2020, with an initial order of 2400 and a high-quality product on June 24.

At present, the starting point collection is 82,400, the book city collection is 2,379, and the number of fans is 140,000, but there are already 45 league leaders and 3 silver league leaders, and the silver league leader who ranks first is actually cumulative, it should be three silver. The helmsman and the hall master are also a whole bunch.

It stands to reason that with the blessing of a total of five Silver Alliances and various recommendations from editors, it should not be difficult to exceed 100,000 collections, and the first order should be good.

But in fact, there are only more than 80,000 collections so far, which is a bit small.

What's even more terrifying is that this book is only 580,000 words, and it has already reached a one-star masterpiece. Heyuan Book Bar

By all indications, the book's operations team is indeed committed to playing an important role.

Synopsis

This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Gu Zuo, who was accepted as a Taoist boy by a bad Taoist priest from a hungry person, not only did not take the initiative to pass on the slightest cultivation method, but also ran away with the money.

Leaving the protagonist to face the arrest and imprisonment of the government, although he was soon released, he had no way to do it, and he had to accept the exploitation of the ruffians.

He reluctantly reopened the Taoist temple, and relied on cheating and abduction to earn income in the early stage, repay usury, and support himself. On the one hand, I tried my best to cultivate, and my life was both dangerous and difficult. Even if you want to escape, it is difficult.

However, he managed to escape to the south, and his life situation gradually improved.

Character characteristics

He belongs to the type of bending and resourceful, and life has not broken him, but sharpened his will, especially his determination to devote himself to the Tao has become more and more firm.

He's not a rule-following person, and when it's time to be clever, he's not ambiguous at all. When it is time to be soft, dignity can also be taken and put down.

Stylistic features

Although this book belongs to Xianxia, it is not a traditional Xianxia.

Because the protagonist's starting point is very low, starting to cultivate from the mortal body, every step is extremely difficult, and the Qi refining period alone consumes a lot of time.

It can be seen that this book is more than 3 million words, and there is no problem at all.

In addition, the writing of this book is quite exquisite, and the words are half written and half white, which is not particularly difficult to read, but it will make the plot richer when it is written, and there is a lot less unnecessary water.

This book is not watery, and the details are quite well done, but the plot is a little dragged, and the early stage is too long.

However, this also reflects that the author's layout is very detailed and large, and there are a lot of things to think about, and the specific schools and characters with few scenes are all arranged properly.

It's just that I personally think he's a little too much about rewarding, which is different from other authors.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

First of all, thank you to Sister V Cream for rewarding 2100 starting coins, Mr. Yuwen for rewarding 600 starting coins, and Yes Minyi Ya for rewarding 500 starting coins.

Secondly, this book is excellent in all aspects, but it is too straightforward.

If you go past this level, it will be a little dull.

There are many advantages of the book, the writing skills are quite sophisticated, and the attitude is very serious, but the interest is a little less interesting.

In short, it's not enough to jump, not enough to be fairy!