411. Commenting on "The Extraordinary Voyage"

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"The Extraordinary Voyage", North Sea Whale, Level 2 author.

Category: Fantasy - Sword & Sorcery.

【Introduction】

Indifferent gods stared coldly from the clouds, tailless reptiles whispered in the cracks of winter and spring, and eight-clawed demon gods in top hats played flutes in the icy waters.

The steam engine has just ignited the light of civilization, swordsmanship and witchcraft have started a duel, alchemy guns and sail warships have died, secret societies and the Orthodox Church have chased and hidden, and the great era has begun, the great voyage! Great Exploration! Geographical Discoveries!

There are magnificent epics, but also evil and treacherous schemes, civilization conquers barbarism? No, only savage and more barbaric!

Rising from the seaside town as a descendant of a fallen aristocracy, Aven stepped into the center of the vortex and took off the crown of wonder at the pinnacle of the extraordinary.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, A New Beginning. The main character, Aven, is a descendant of a declining aristocracy, the family has nothing left, and the last symbol, the butler, is also dead. His sister disappeared three years ago. At this time, as a traverser, he finally awakened the memories of adults. He is who he is.

Chapter 2, Ding, Your Goldfinger is online. The protagonist goes to the pharmacy to take a look and consider whether to hand over the pharmacy to this guy. The memory awakens, and there is no point in guarding the broken store anymore. Besides, the gold finger is also online, it's a sports bracelet, it's still useful, at least you can count steps.

Chapter 3, Tracking. The protagonist collects a lot of herbs that can be used to craft potions that are urgently needed in the shop, but the sports bracelet warns him that there are other hunters operating here. He followed, noticing something unusual. A mysterious feline with a corpse in its mouth in front of him was alerted by a hunter who slammed into his hands just as he thought the animal had let him go.

Chapter 4, Ferocious Beasts and White Sail Swordsmanship. The protagonist arrives just in time and scares off the ferocious lynx with an arrow. But the protagonist is well aware that the lynx is an intelligent feline that is even more difficult to deal with after becoming ferocious. Sure enough, as soon as they wanted to leave, the other party turned back. They had no choice but to resist desperately.

Chapter 5, New Features Launched. The two protagonists work together to the death, but the cunning bobcat cub finally chooses to retreat, as if he doesn't want to be attacked by other animals because of a hunting injury. Back in town, the protagonist spends a few days of salted fish, and the system opens a new feature that can display the data of all aspects of the protagonist, as well as the data of the bobcats that he has fought before.

Chapter 6, Spiked Manta Rays. The protagonist arrives at Daddy York's restaurant and is slightly teased by the hot Sister Lena. This situation is very common, because his appearance and temperament are too charming. From the casual chatter of several sailors, it was learned that a spiked manta ray appeared in the nearby sea, which was the key material for his promotion to knighthood. The next day he secretly went out to sea, and after several dives, he finally found the trace of manta rays.

Chapter VII, Distress. The protagonist makes a noise by striking iron pieces and iron rods together to scare away the timid spiked manta rays. The spikes they shed are the ingredients used by the protagonist to make the potion. He also successfully searched for several materials. Now that he came, he decided to dive again, and after getting a few black pearls, he got tangled in his feet with a giant octopus. In a hurry, coupled with survival instincts, he took a desperate step and killed the octopus, so that he could escape.

Chapter 8, two years. In the past two years, the protagonist's physical fitness and Bai Fan's swordsmanship have reached a peak, and he is only one bottle of potion away from being promoted to knight. After entrusting his apothecary to his buddy Sanchi, he decided to sign up for the Navy and officially embark on his ambition to conquer the seas.

Chapter 9, The First Battle of Leopold. The protagonist's intention to join the navy is not hot-headed, he is to quickly rise to the rank of supernatural knight, but also to see the wider world of the sea. What I didn't expect was that there was an island attacking the city, and the pressure on the city guards was huge, and the situation was not optimistic. After the protagonist enters the war, with his physical fitness approaching the peak of mankind, his archery skills are miraculous, and he can be described as a hundred shots. The defenders successfully defended it.

Chapter 10, Billy the Black Bear. The pirates, finding that their offensive was thwarted and did not want to delay their fighters, were routed by the arrival of reinforcements from the defenders, and they began to storm the city in a frenzy. It's just that there is the archery suppression of the protagonist, and their progress is not smooth. At this time, Billy the Black Bear, the boatswain, attacked, and this man had outstanding hand-to-hand combat ability, forcing the protagonist to the ground. It feels like the test is almost done, and the protagonist shows his real combat power and instantly kills it. Billy didn't expect the protagonist to be terrifying until he died.

[Brief comment]

The author has only this book to his name. 516

The book was released on June 12, 2020, with an initial order of 1500, and reached a high-quality product on August 1, a month and a half. At present, the starting point has a collection of 65,400, a book city collection of 4,905, and a number of fans of 130,000.

I have been on Sanjiang, I have won the strong recommendation on the homepage, and now I have won the highest recommended position.

Judging from the author's testimonials, this book is his first book, and he only started uploading after writing 80 chapters. Perseverance! I can't help it, even if the new book only has one chapter, I will upload it quickly. As a result, I often write and publish on the spot, and I can't keep my full attendance.

He said he was a newcomer and an old reader. But the writing of the book is very good, and the style of writing is very close to "The Master of Mystery".

When I watched "Master of Mysteries", I admired the squid's strict control of the pace and worldview of the story, and the fact that it was able to portray the Victorian setting so realistically.

Many follow-up works, if you can write one-tenth of the flavor, you can achieve good results.

And this book, the previous plot seems to me to write a fifth of the flavor of "The Master of Mystery".

However, recently, many readers have complained in the book circle circle, saying that the current plot of this book is very weak, the role of the protagonist is similar to that of passers-by, and the suspicion of the water plot is very serious.

Many people are deeply touched by how unpopular the fantasy classification is. Western names of people, places, skills, tones, etc., are a big reason why fantasy categories are easy to dissuade readers. If you don't write well, it will be very embarrassing.

Some of the phrases, though substantial, are still reminiscent of the famous translated phrase: "Oh, my Virgin Mary, this gentleman's words are as bad as the apple pie made by Aunt Susan next door." I bet I won't want to see it a second time. If he says that damn thing again, I'll kick him hard in the ass with my pointy leather boots, I swear! ”

Even in "The Master of Mystery", in order to fit the character's personality, sometimes there will be some sentences that are not very substantial.

So, if you care about these things, the book recommended today may not be for you. I swear!

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to the city, Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

This book is very good, and the taste of the Age of Discovery is very full, and it is worth collecting.

Due to the word limit, this chapter is full of so much.

Let's talk about the rest in the next chapter.