188. Commenting on "The Lord of the Yellow Court"

Today I would like to recommend to you a work that cultivates immortals with the help of games.

"Huangting Daoist", Author: Demon Monk Hua Wuji, Level 5 Author.

Category: Games - Games Otherworldly.

【Introduction】

Lu Qingfeng, a young man from the earth, died unexpectedly in a car accident, traveled to the world of Xianxia, and obtained the landing ring of the large-scale real online game "Flood Wilderness" developed by the Earth Federation two thousand years later......

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Lu Qingfeng. This chapter is 7267 words, which is simply hateful. The protagonist Lu Qingfeng is a crossing party, and he still can't practice after 16 years. His younger brother is going to Guizhen Sect as a handyman, and it is estimated that it will be difficult to survive. My sister is still young, and she is already coveted. He was faced with great difficulties and was at a loss.

Chapter 2, "The Flood". The system descends, and the protagonist has the qualifications to enter the game of "Flood", able to bring the attribute panel to life. His practice is the "Imperial Court Sutra", which comes from Hongjun Dao Ancestor, which is extremely powerful.

Chapter 3, Groping. The protagonist enters the game world, and in the face of a novel world, he chooses to upgrade with drugs. By chance, he found that he could derive skills, and after careful consideration, he accumulated a few points of experience and began to derive them, but failed. Because the experience points are not enough.

Chapter 4, Cultivation is Difficult. The path of cultivation is not as simple as the protagonist thinks, and the progress of the exercises is slow. He cultivates during the day when he works, and enters the game to cultivate at night, but there are not enough pills.

Chapter 5, Death. In reality, the protagonist takes his sister to collect medicine and solve the problem of eating. When he enters the game, he discovers that the character has starved to death, and the speed of time is a hundred times different. He chose to return to the city and start from scratch.

Chapter 6, two months. In reality, the protagonist is injured by a ferocious beast, and the beast goes to be killed by the protagonist. The protagonist is very active in cultivation and has unknowingly spent six years in the game.

Chapter 7, re-enter "The Flood". In the game, the protagonist chooses to refine medicine and derive the mental method. He found that the skill was very powerful after derivation, and the destructive power was several times stronger than that of the ordinary type of skill.

Chapter 8, The Bazaar. The protagonist comes to the bazaar in the game and sees various players setting up stalls, and the atmosphere of life is very strong. While shopping, he thought about how to improve his alchemy.

Chapter 9, three years and four months. The protagonist relies on the elixir to constantly improve his mental methods and skills, and finally cultivates himself into a theoretical master.

Chapter 10, "The True Recipe of White Jade". His attribute panel has been greatly improved again, and all kinds of mental techniques and levels have been brushed to almost the peak level by him, and even alchemy is perfect. At this time, his friends in the game sent him martial arts cheats that he could learn, and the protagonist quarreled nonsensically, but in fact, his grateful heart was treasured in the depths of his heart.

[Brief comment]

This book has appeared at the top of the game category monthly pass list many times in 2019, and many people have introduced this book.

At that time, I also noticed that I didn't read it very carefully, considering that I hadn't finished the book yet, and there were many books to chase.

Today, the book is complete. It's just that based on the reader's comments and the author's self-report, it seems that there is a suspicion of unfinished.

Today, I'll talk about my experience as a sample. First of all, the routine of this book is interesting.

The protagonist Lu Qingfeng is a time-traveling person who travels to a world where everyone cultivates immortals. It's just that the qualifications of the three siblings of the protagonist are very mediocre, and the second brother is slightly better, and he was accepted by an unpopular sect, became a handyman, and was tortured.

After sixteen years, the protagonist finally obtains the game finger left by the game company and qualifies for the game "Flood Waste", and he does not enter with his real body. This game is actually the golden finger of the protagonist.

The time flow rate between the game and reality is 100:1, and the exercises, skills, and items learned in the game can be brought to reality, so as to improve the protagonist's realm and ability, help him rescue his second brother, kill enemies, and open up his life.

The protagonist continues to learn and improve himself in the game, as well as use death and multiple rebirths to gain top-level exercises and become a generation of Taoist masters with the game experience of one life after another.

That's the best part of the book.

Ordinary immortal cultivators, golden fingers or systems can help the protagonist turn evil into good fortune. The routine of this book is not ordinary, relying on the continuous enhancement of items in the game, the fusion of techniques, and the increase of the level, but in reality it is difficult to protect yourself until you are strong enough to kill the enemy.

Because of the different speed of time, the timeline in the game flows quickly, and the life of one life after another is very exciting.

Secondly, the setting of this book is very complete.

Although with the help of the world structure of "Buddha is the Way", interspersed with the exercises and level settings of many well-known immortal cultivators, this book still has its own unique perspective and adds a lot of praiseworthy highlights.

Including the three brothers and sisters of waste wood, the sister who sticks to the protagonist, the hateful one who does not enter the sect, does not fight monsters and upgrades, but keeps refining medicines, drawing talismans, not going out in the novice village, and dying of starvation accidentally, and so on. This book is not like the protagonist of a general game text, just after getting the game qualification, he is crazy in the game to stir up the wind and rain and make it known to the world.

The character of the protagonist is cautious, quiet as a virgin, moving like a rabbit, and like a rock, which is similar to the current popular "My Senior Brother is Too Steady".

It's just that this book doesn't take the route of funny immortal cultivation, although it is also very popular, but there is no big fire!

Finally, the quality of the book is quite good.

There are no major problems with the writing, and the word count is good. The various settings and plot conflicts are also relatively reasonable. Although he is a little white, he is not brainless at all.

There's one place that's easy to criticize. is that every time the protagonist kills someone, he is created to look very helpless, but he is a dead hand.

While being thoughtful, he did not destroy the enemy's corpse, leaving a lot of clues for the enemy to pursue.

Maybe it's also to add a little difficulty to the protagonist's escape.

【Summary】

Overall, this book is worth a look, not a loss!

As for his new book "Starting from the Dao Fruit", it seems to be the same way.

I don't know if you have seen it, you can come out and explain it.

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

This book is still good.,It's just a character attribute panel that must come out of each chapter in the early stage.,The reading experience is not very good.。

The protagonist has a strong sense of responsibility and cares a lot about family affection.

He loves his sister, this is a genius girl, and her cultivation speed is very fierce.

His younger brother, who was originally just a fluke, did the lowest miscellaneous work and was not treated as a human being at all.

There are all kinds of signs that the protagonist is plotting how to rescue the second brother and take the third sister away.

A family of three brothers and sisters, for their own dreams, continue to cultivate.

People are not as good as heaven, so the escape route has been found by the protagonist.

Whoever stands in the way will be killed!