421. Commenting on "The Coming of the Heavens"
Today I would like to recommend to you a book of 2.93 million words that has been completed.
"The Coming of the Heavens", Cannon from Fire, Level 5 Author.
Category: Science Fiction - Apocalyptic Crisis.
【Introduction】
God has opened the Battle Royale game, where randomly selected people will be sent into battle to meet the slayers from the heavenly worlds: orcs, vampires, alien invaders, Ultron robots......
Or killed.
Or survive and gain abilities, weapons, bloodlines, and black technology from the heavens.
Ye Chui, who was hangover and sleepy, woke up and found himself in a strange place, huh? There was a knife in the ground, and as soon as he picked it up and turned around, he heard a pop, and an invisible guy crashed into his knife - Gollum with the Ring?
Congratulations, you've earned the legendary item, the Lord of the Rings.
Ye Hang: "??? ”
……
To put it simply, this is a story of an old yin who opens his stealth and hangs to participate in the battle royale of the heavens......
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, The One Ring. The main character, Ye Tex, is selected by the system to join the game of gods. Hangovered, he didn't understand what was going on, and as soon as he picked up the knife, he killed Gollum, who was stealthy and ready to attack him. As a result, he obtained the Supreme Ring of the Lord of the Rings and became invisible himself.
Chapter 2, Untitled. The protagonist is glad that he was lucky enough to go out and pick up the artifact, but he is still scared when he faces several small orcs alone. After the orcs left, he groped around the game world, and soon encountered a new wave of orcs attacking humans. Someone armed with a machine gun killed all the orcs.
In the third chapter, it is more promising to open the stealth hanging old yin with peace of mind. The leader of the rescue team is called Nie Feng, and the reason for saving people is only because those people are injured and may attract the pursuit of the orcs. He was also very bad with his own teammates and quickly chased away another injured teammate. The protagonist does not dare to show up and secretly follows the person who was driven away.
Chapter 4, The Fun of Old Yin. After the guy named Li Jiang was kicked out of the group, he soon encountered three more orcs. His human strokes and marksmanship allowed the orcs to tear it apart unharmed. The protagonist silently picks up the gun and kills the orcs. He continued to stealth, approaching the orcs for merciless slaughter.
Chapter 5, Humanity. The protagonist meets Nie Feng and a woman, and takes the opportunity to replenish the gun and rob the heads of many half-orcs. The two of them were tired of farming monsters and went to a room to rest. Two other teammates infiltrated and staged a good infighting. The protagonist is simply stunned!
Chapter 6, is there anything else? The protagonist who has the magic ring is invisible throughout the whole process, and easily takes away all the grenades that Nie Feng has managed to exchange, a total of three. He ends up frightened by the protagonist's soft greeting, as he wittily guesses who is hiding in the shadows. And Pete and the others returned to the shelter they had set up before returning to Nie Feng, and drove the three people away, injuring them and attracting the orcs to appear. The protagonist throws a grenade to the hidden roof, revealing Pete and the others for the orcs to wreak havoc on.
Chapter 7, God-level baptism, get 5,000 points. The protagonist solves all the orcs who killed Pete and the others, and releases those bait. However, there are still many orcs who follow the smell to find them, but they are all completely solved by the protagonist with Pete's extreme strength and grenades. This is the end of the game, he returns to reality, and God asks him if he wants to continue with a new game. The main character, who has the Lord of the Rings, has become addicted to the game, and he chooses to continue.
Chapter 8, he is going to ride the dust on the road of a great scientist. The Points Mall displays a lot of things, including items, bloodlines, and abilities, and explains them in detail, all of which are closely related to the World of the Ring. Of course, the clever protagonist does not sell the Ring for high points, but chooses the marksman ability, bow and arrow, and he wants to use stealth and archery to achieve greater points in the game. At the same time, he is also very interested in the so-called tree language.
Chapter 9, the big redemption of points. The protagonist redeems the remaining points for a lot of items, which can be sold in reality for a lot of money. Because he's really short of money. He returned to the bed in the small shop, and the in-game redeemed items appeared in his palm. Even the stealth effect of the Lord of the Rings is surprisingly good, and the sounds and smells can be hidden.
Chapter 10, a disagreement is going to make trouble. The protagonist learns the tree language and chats with the tree downstairs, the big banyan tree is a bit gossip and curious about everything. The big banyan tree, who has strong feelings, tells the protagonist that a nine-point girl is approaching him. After a simple hello, the protagonist quickly runs home, but is still caught up by a girl named Ying'er. After some misunderstanding, Ying'er began to transform, just like Avatar. Standby station
[Brief comment]
Away from the fire cannon, level 5 author, author of 11 works such as "Almighty Magician" and "The Coming of the Heavens".
His official evaluation is: "The creativity is changeable, each book is good at incorporating new ideas, the writing is first-class, and the three books in a row have achieved good results, and the progress is stable." ”
I don't know who gave this comment so boringly, it doesn't look like he's complimenting people at all.
Because, half of his books are eunuch works, and the new books are continuous eunuchs.
However, he has completed a lot of works, among which "The Coming of the Heavens" has achieved a masterpiece.
This book has undergone a name change turmoil, and was formerly called "The Heavens Descend Battle Royale". Probably because the title of the book is too sensitive.
On January 18, 2019, the first order was 1900, and the boutique was reached on May 9, and the speed was quite fast. In addition, the starting point has a collection of 140,000, a book city collection of 65,900, and a number of fans of 320,000.
This book is a typical celestial stream, through the system of selection, enter different worlds, under the attack of monsters, survive. So it's also a big escape type.
The style is more heavy and sensitive, which tends to bring many uncertainties to the book. The writing is sophisticated, the plot has twists and turns, there are more cool points, and there are many new Internet memes.
The reading experience is still good, and it is worth taking a look.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
Many readers have reported that this book is highly toxic.
How to say it.
From the reader's point of view, the book is indeed not perfect, and even has many flaws. Whether it's the writing, or the dialogue, even the fights and jokes, it seems a bit stiff and not very smooth.
And from the author's point of view, this book still doesn't take a lot of thought, at least those settings, if you want to complete it, it won't be particularly easy.
It's not particularly unusual, but at least it seems sincere.
The Ying'er who found him in reality, the Na'vi bloodline that he exchanged, and the potential when he transformed, was quite powerful.
Therefore, this book can still be read, poison does not kill people!