Today I would like to recommend to you a six-million-word Xianxia work.

"This monk is dangerous", author: I want to see Jiangnan, a great god writer.

Category: Xianxia - Xiuzhen Civilization.

【Introduction】

I have come from the mortal world in search of eternal life.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, angry. The protagonist Xu Yi was ridiculed by Zhou Gongzi, and was subdued by his subordinates by force. When they are far away, the protagonist curses angrily. It turned out that he traveled through the party and fused the memories of the original owner to figure out the origin of the Xu family and the Zhou family.

Chapter 2, Crashing into Heaven's Gate. For half a year, the protagonist has practiced martial arts hard and painted his face with ginger, for fear that the Zhou family would find out that he was a genius. Today's success, he indulged in chanting, and mentioned that the two chickens went to visit the master in the depths of the dense forest, and they were all dead.

Chapter 3, Qilin Supremacy. The protagonist is practicing the Qilin Ba Li Fist, which is the decisive exercise of the Western Regions Zen Buddhism, and he is extremely talented, and his cultivation speed far exceeds that of others. After his master confessed his life experience, he drifted away with the wind.

Chapter 4, where anger swells, murderous spurts. The Zhou family deceived people too much, not only burned the protagonist's house, but also dug up people's ancestral graves. The protagonist's anger swells up and stops everyone in the Zhou family. At the time of the fight, the strength exploded and was no longer hidden.

Chapter 5, Good Soup Boiled. Eight of the Zhou family's subordinates died quickly, and Zhou Gongzi had no choice but to fight the protagonist in person. But after a few fights, he found that he was not the opponent of the protagonist Zhou Yi at all.

[Brief comment]

If you want to see Jiangnan, the official label is: "China Literature Group God Writer, a well-known Xianxia writer in online literature, has unique characteristics in Xianxia creation, and is deeply loved by readers." ”

Currently, he has only one work under his name.

After searching on Baidu, I found that he also has a work "Red Throne", which seems to be an officialdom text, so it is not visible through genuine channels.

And "This Monk is Dangerous" was published on August 12, 2015, and it has been more than four years, 6.2255 million words.

In the work related, I saw some comments from the author on this chapter and the book circle, and I was very angry, suspecting that I had offended some professional brushes.

During the trial reading, I did see a lot of comments that weren't particularly elegant, and they spilled over until they hit the shelves.

Most people's opinions mainly focus on the protagonist's intelligence when he sees the appearance of a female character, some plots are not very reasonable, forcibly create difficulties, and so on.

Many authors, including editors, will pay more attention to readers' comments, especially when bad reviews are flying all over the sky, which will seriously affect the mood of writing a book.

Some authors, in order to cater to the preferences of readers, write themselves down alive.

A few days ago, my friend Elle Sky also emphasized this point when commenting on Nai He Xiaochuan's "Why Am I Popular".

I don't know the answer to questions such as how the author deals with negative comments from readers, whether it is necessary to write a book according to the wishes of readers, why it is easy to collapse when writing a book through crowdfunding, and so on!

Because, I haven't been on fire yet~

Back to the book.

First of all, the author's writing is full of sincerity.

He claimed to have refined it, but he didn't know which parts.

By reading the early and latest chapters of the book, I found that the writing of this book is still relatively good.

There are more parts that quote scriptures, and the words and sentences are mostly short sentences, the paragraph division is more obvious, the fight scenes occupy a lot of space, and the story line is more prominent.

There are no speech problems and typos, and there are no major problems with the logic.

It's just that the bright spots in the early stage, to be honest, aren't particularly obvious.

After all, this book is a traditional Xianxia, and it follows a rigorous and complete style, unlike the current Xianxia, which is mostly based on the steady senior brother.

Secondly, this book is large and full.

This is in line with the requirements of many readers.

Nowadays, there are really not many books that can persist in writing more than 6 million words.

Of course, there are also people who don't like super long articles, thinking that they can do it in two or three million words, but if they have to write so much, they are cheating money.

To confirm this, I looked at the latest chapters. A bit of water indeed.

The protagonist Xu Yi and the desolate ghost in the Starry Sky Ring easily wrote a chapter on the origin of the star mine and the secret method of the star refining furnace.

Someone once said that 500,000 words is a hurdle.

In the early stage, we must ensure that the plot is exciting, after 500,000, you can use as much water as you want, which is easier than tap water.

However, the world pattern and map transformation in this book are still very interesting.

Finally, the common problem of traditional Xianxia.

One of last year's Twelve Heavenly Kings, the really troublesome "Rotten Ke Qiyuan", was characterized as a revivor of Xianxia.

It shows that the official is also aware that the classification of Xianxia is declining. Especially the traditional Xianxia, even more so.

Because, after experiencing the Hongmeng series, the Covering Sky series, the Xian Reverse series, the Blood Red Witch series, etc., the space that traditional Xianxia can play is already very small, or even minimal.

Therefore, the traditional Xianxia text is extremely testing the level of the author and the patience of the reader in terms of gimmicks in the early stage, development in the middle stage, and pit filling in the later stage.

This book is still well done.

【Summary】

Overall, this book can be read.

But to say that it is particularly exciting, it is still a little bit close.

His insistence on the spirit of writing is really commendable!

Therefore, I hope that friends who read this article will support this book a lot.

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

【Cang's Whispering】

I haven't recommended it lately, and I'm always a little panicked.

Was it abandoned?

I don't dare to ask that adult, what if she's examining me?

In fact, no matter what the classification is, there will always be a time when the recommendation is finished.

When all the recommendations are gone, in the end, you still have to rely on the results of the work.

If you don't do it, there will be countless enthusiastic readers who will publicize it everywhere and send out some square red envelopes or something.

Is the square red envelope useful?

Booklists, all kinds of dots and circles, these auxiliary functions, can have a good publicity effect on a book?

Not necessarily!

I often wonder how to improve the quality of book reviews, and I often get caught up in the relationship between quality, originality, and data.

After all, I also want to have a good meal, and I feel powerless to be able to hold on to Quanqin, and it's a bit too much to think about anything else.

So, the biggest pain now is the double opening.

Sure enough, the sentence I read everywhere every day: "Writing is not easy, do it and cherish it!" At this moment, it seems that it is really a famous sentence.

If you don't know how expensive firewood and rice are at home, and if you don't write a book, you don't know how hard it is!

The path I chose, with tears in my eyes and gritted teeth, I had to stick to it.

If I had cut that book like that, it would have been much easier.

I can also try to read more excellent works with more enthusiasm, record them, and use them as material for writing.

The idea is always naïve and beautiful, and the reality is like the "Hammer Man" in "Little Column Under the Sea", if there is nothing to do, you have to hammer a few people to play.

Today, the writer's assistant has a topic, how much income can be full-time?

Some people say that a monthly income of 5,000 is complete; Some people say that a monthly income of 50,000 is complete.

Suffice it to say that full-time is risky.

Writing is a chore, a pilgrimage that gives up the entire starry sky and may not be able to pick a star!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and today I plant a flag for myself!