193. Commenting on "The Eternal Kingdom"

Today I would like to recommend to you a 6.3 million-word Xianxia work.

"The Eternal Realm" by Lonely Drifter, Level 5 Author.

Category: Xianxia - Mythological Xiuzhen.

【Introduction】

In the early hours of the morning, natural disasters struck.

The way of heaven changes, the desires and obsessions of all spirits fill the heavens and the earth, the way of heaven cannot bear it, evil thoughts are rampant, all business thoughts evolve into a fantasy world, evil thoughts, good thoughts, obsessions, desires are entangled, the way of heaven can not bear it, it has reached the limit, the extreme changes, the fantasy comes, all worlds are integrated, and all things are free in the frost and sky.

This is the beginning of a new era, a destruction, and a new birth.

This epoch is the eternal epoch.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Reversing the Future. The protagonist Yi Tianxing is reborn back to three days ago. He was born with an abnormal constitution and had yin and yang eyes, and was abandoned by his parents to an orphanage, and later adopted. His adoptive parents were very good to him, and he also had a younger sister. Reborn three days ago because the end of the world would come in three days.

Chapter 2, The Dragon Classic. He has yin and yang eyes, so he secretly authors the voice of subduing demons and eliminating demons, and is known as a master. In order to prevent the end of the world in three days, he sent a message to many people. As he looks inward, the mysterious stone bead comes into play, giving the protagonist a book of mental secrets.

Chapter 3, The Ancestral Dragon's Qi. The mental method is a bit complicated, and the various settings are not easy to understand. There is an ancestral dragon qi in the stone bead, which is absorbed by the protagonist and cultivates the first wisp of true qi.

Chapter 4, Innate Yin and Yang. The protagonist uses dragon qi to drive the Yin and Yang Eyes, which increases the cultivation of the Yin and Yang Eyes several times. When the protagonist wants to continue his research, his sister returns with her best friend, and the scene is suddenly much warmer.

Chapter 5, Preparation of Supplies. Plan ahead, the protagonist is online that. Some of these supplies were sent to underground bases, while others were delivered to homes. But the types and identities are all about coping with life in the apocalyptic world.

Chapter 6, The Doomsday Cataclysm. The three of them found the right key for themselves from a large number of items, and the effect of matching them was excellent. Despite the relatively good preparations, the catastrophe came as promised.

Chapter 7, The Monster Descends. Several cracks appeared in the sky, and countless small monsters emerged from them. The protagonist decides to go out and hunt a wave and try out the quality of the yokai. My sister and best friend were dissuaded from staying at home, and it was not easy to protect the base camp.

Chapter 8, Wishing Power Beads. May the power beads. Killing monsters will drop small white beads.,Is it for the wish power bead.,With the power of faith.,The protagonist has a strong desire to devour.,Or don't he suppress it.。 Later, when he encountered a zombie, he used Yin Yang to lock the soul of the other party, and he was actually devoured by the Yin and Yang Eye, forming a new true qi.

Chapter 9, the wordless book of heaven. After the protagonist kills the visible monsters, he goes downstairs and sees an old man being chased by a slime. He met a lovely girl again, this person was blessed with all the sky, and he turned out to be a malicious curse of Ou Delong, Yin Eun.

Just wait, just wait.

Chapter 10, Strange Treasures. They continued on their way and found a huge wolf in the middle of the square. They cut and fought together, touched corpses together, and prepared to be together again. In the end, they really got the strange fire, I don't know if they helped those saplings.

[Brief comment]

This book was recommended to me by a reader friend last year, and that article mainly introduces the current status of Xianxia classification.

At that time, "My Senior Brother is Too Steady" and "Rotten Ke Qiyuan" had not yet been released, or they had not yet become popular.

I'm sorry to have recently taken the time to write this article.

In terms of word count, this book is already very fat. Each chapter is 3,000 words, which is also full of sincerity compared to most of the 2,000 parties.

In the early part of this book, the apocalyptic natural disaster, the protagonist is stoned to death by a colorful meteor and travels back to three days ago. In order to defend himself against natural disasters, he called his sister back and prepared to hide in the underground base that had been prepared a long time ago.

After purchasing sufficient supplies, my sister came back, and she also brought back a school flower, who is also a master from a martial arts family. The three of them waited for the natural disaster to come, and rushed to the base while killing monsters. On the way, I met a treasure hunter.

Before it was put on the shelves, the story developed into the story of Yang Jiajiang, indicating that this book is also an infinite stream that can walk in the heavens.

Chapter 1975 Kunlun, Hu Xueyan fused the eternal coin to seize the currency market. Shen Wansan and other major commercial houses began to enter and exit other realms and trade all over the world. The protagonist Yi Tianxing returned to Kunlun with his sister.

The protagonist of this book has traveled through many worlds, including "The Romance of the Dragon and Snake", the Hundred Schools of Thought, the Romance of the Sui and Tang Dynasties, the Zerg, the Zodiac, etc., with rich elements and obvious clues.

Because of this, it can be difficult to accept for readers who are not very fond of unlimited streaming.

In addition, the early stage is not very friendly in terms of level setting, and it is often interspersed with large paragraphs in the text, which is easy to cause poor reading.

How the procurement of materials for the underground base avoided the relevant departments was not clearly explained; When a natural disaster strikes, the protagonist steals his life alone, does not report to the relevant departments, and appears indifferent and ruthless; Before the disaster strikes, the protagonist does not hide in time to the underground base, but instead takes the two girls to witness the disaster fall on his head, and then takes them to fight monsters, which is difficult to understand this intention.

However, I really appreciate the author's mentality when writing books: to be a down-to-earth person and write books quietly.

He was able to write the book to 6 million words, and there was no tendency to stop, and there was a bit of water in the later stage, and there were relatively few comments, and he still did not shake the heart of the actor to continue writing, which alone is very admirable.

I've always felt that if I write 3 million words, I'll finish all the stories and worlds, and I'll even be reborn several times.

I generally don't recommend reading books that cost tens of millions of words. Too much moisture!

This book is not bad, it is an infinite stream. When you don't have a story, just open a new dungeon. The limitations in this regard will be slightly better. But it's only a little better.

So it's still suggested, the author can think about finishing the book.

Because the protagonist is currently almost invincible, it is difficult to meet opponents of the same level.

[Last]

The author of this book has a lot to learn, and I hope it can be a little inspiration for new authors.

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

Today, I still stayed up late to cultivate immortals as always, and my state was not very good.

If it weren't for the built-in typo reminder, how many typos I wrote would not be a number.

The early stage of this book is quite exciting, but there are various settings, and it makes people want to sleep a little.

But the number of words is so much, and most people really don't have the perseverance to keep writing.

Later in the book, the water is not quite like words.

After a chapter, the plot can be unmoving.

This is also a trick that works in a book of 10 million words.

Although it is not a beautiful thing, at least it is protected by the warmth of the family.

Finally, that's all for today.

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