311. Commenting on "The Wishing System of the Thousands of Worlds"
Pian young man, who hasn't made a wish?
If not, after reading today's book, you can make a promise!
"Thousands of Worlds Wishing System", good as no water, level 4 author.
Category: History - Alternate History.
【Introduction】
In the dream of Red Mansions, poems have been chanted, and tigers have been fought on Jingyang Gang.
Tiger Prison Pass before Dou Sanying, the God of War Buddha in Journey to the West.
Sister Lin's infatuation, the tears of her daughter king, Diao Chan's sorrow, and Maode's sadness.
Endless regrets leave only pathos.
A different life starts with a wishing messenger sent by the sky.
【Golden Ten Chapters】
In the first chapter, if you want to practice divine skills, you must first go from the palace. In the spring of the nineteenth year of Wanli, in the north of Fuzhou Prefecture, the protagonist Wang Xiao finally arrived here. The wishing system chose him to cross, and the first task was to destroy the sword spectrum to ward off evil spirits. After he got it several times, he returned all the way back to Quanzhou and made a high-profile announcement to prepare for the auction.
Chapter 2, Master Yue, covering your face can't stop your hypocrite's breath. After the people in the martial arts learned the news, they moved when they heard the news and broke into the military camp at night, killing and injuring countless people. The casualties of the Qingcheng faction were the most serious. Yue Buqun also went masked and fooled the protagonist with Songshan swordsmanship. The time for the official auction has arrived, and the conditions are very simple, whoever comes up with more martial arts cheats will be auctioned.
Chapter 3, Sister Lin's Wishes. The sword spectrum was finally filmed by the Wuyue Sword Faction, and the protagonist burned the sword spectrum after the embezzlement of military funds was exposed, and returned to reality after completing the task. A new mission ensued, allowing Sister Lin's father to survive. The protagonist incarnates Jia Lian and socializes with the children of salt merchants in Yangzhou.
In the fourth chapter, the two hands are not trying to eat chicken. The protagonist did not participate in the follow-up package of the banquet and returned directly to the Lin Mansion to visit Lin Ruhai. After talking, he speculated that Lin Ruhai had been poisoned, and the person who poisoned him might be the daughter of a salt merchant. Because Lin Ruhai was sent by the emperor to rectify the salt administration. Lin Daiyu saw the protagonist practicing eagle claw skills in the garden, and complained a few words.
Chapter 5, General General, Third in the World. Lin Ruhai sent the guard He Meng to investigate the person who poisoned him, and involved Jiang Chun, the biggest salt merchant, and the emperor behind him. Things are a little tricky. The protagonist asks He Guard for martial arts, after all, he learned a lot of martial arts secrets in the previous world. After fighting, I found that his kung fu was quite good. Even Lin Daiyu wanted to learn when she saw it.
Chapter 6, Jade-faced Wyvern Supreme Treasure. The protagonist conspires with He Guard, catches the Miao Jiang people who are good at Gu, and changes it to attack the heart after the lure is fruitless. He speculated that the reason why the people of Miaojiang were willing to cooperate with the largest salt merchant to give Lin Ruhai Gu was because of Miaojiang's private salt.
Chapter 7, the quality of the assassins in this class is not good. The protagonist and Lin Daiyu go to Tianning Temple to play, but unexpectedly encounter assassins. It's a pity to be repelled by the protagonist. Lin Ruhai was furious and decided to send a secret report to the emperor and vigorously rectify the largest salt merchants. The protagonist makes a lot of useful suggestions. Lin Daiyu also set up a banquet to thank the protagonist for saving his life, and wanted to learn martial arts again.
Chapter 8, let's join hands and fight him together. The protagonist's wife is Sister Feng, and nothing will happen to Sister Lin, but she can't stand Zijuan's own thoughts. The protagonist takes He Guards and other salt merchants to prepare to attack Jiang Chun's freight.
In Chapter 9, the core of persuasion lies in attacking the heart. Jiang Chun's son, Jiang Beihe, felt that something was not quite right today, and something bad would happen. Sure enough, the other salt merchants teamed up to attack their cargo ship, not to mention, he himself was defeated by the protagonist and sent to prison. What's more, he was also persuaded by the protagonist to surrender.
Chapter 10, the facts are often more bizarre than that. The scene of persuading Jiang Beihe to surrender finally became his voluntary surrender. The Yangzhou Salt Merchants Association is in a mess. Jiang Chun wanted to deny it in the face of persecution, but when a series of materials were placed in front of the protagonist, he had no choice but to move out of the Emperor Taishang to shock. It's a pity that the protagonist doesn't want to let him go.
[Brief comment]
About the author
Good as no water, level 4 author, author of eight works such as "Time Traveler", only this one.
If you are interested, you can go and see this one first.
His new book "Thousands of Worlds Wishing System" currently has only 230,000 words and a collection of 4,858, which is not very good.
Let's not talk about more, it's not good to rub salt on other people's wounds!
Synopsis
This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Wang Xiao who was selected by the wishing system and entered various worlds to complete various tasks.
At present, it is mainly based on the world, and classic works such as "Smiling Proud Jianghu" and "Dream of Red Mansions" have relatively unique tasks.
Destroy the sword spectrum to ward off evil spirits, save fires like the sea, and so on.
These tasks may not seem complicated, but they still require a lot of wisdom and courage to complete.
He fished out all kinds of martial arts cheats from the first novice task, forcibly memorized them, and slowly cultivated. As a result, when he arrived in the world of "Dream of Red Mansions", he really became a powerful martial arts master, and he also gave himself a foreign name "Jade Face Flying Dragon Supreme Treasure".
Sure enough, skills like martial arts still need to be learned a little more. Courier
Character characteristics
The protagonist Wang Xiao is not serious, and when he is doing a task, he thinks about increasing the difficulty of the task.
It is precisely because he overcompletes the task every time, and the reward is still relatively generous.
In order to improve his personal perception ability, he still added all his experience points to Zhi.
At the moment, the effect is not very obvious, and the IQ of the protagonist is still a bit touching.
Stylistic features
This is a nonsensical infinite text.
As long as the system continues to send tasks, he can continue to receive tasks and participate in various real-world adventures.
It's exciting to think about.
It's just that the author hasn't done a good enough job in pacing, and the novice task can be made a little longer.
The story of "Dream of Red Mansions" is a little boring, and Sister Lin is still young.
Many stories and episodes are not suitable for development.
The writing of this book is also a bit awkward, as an author who has written eight books, no one in the book speaks with a colon.
Why, do you cherish words like gold?
The chapter titles also lack eye-catching small world notes, which makes people want to summarize it well, but they can't do it.
So, this book is cool, and it makes sense!
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
Today's mood is a little more beautiful than yesterday, although the rain is a little heavier.
The world is so wonderful, and people are so interesting.
No matter how much trouble and depression there is, it will always pass;
Some joy, some surprises, will come.
Today's book, in general, disappointed me a bit.
The idea itself is still good, and when it is placed in the historical category, it is a bit redundant.
Not to mention in the city, it is also possible to put it in the game category.
In addition, the book was fragmented by the author's various divine operations, and the reading experience was not good.
The only thing worth commendating is that the number of words in each chapter is quite large, and I believe that the first "to the next level" badge is still relatively easy to complete.
I also realized from this book that there is really a big world, and there is everything.
Whatever the idea, the final trajectory is to return to the story itself.
Authors, at the end of the day, are just storytellers!