39. Commenting on "Cangyuan Diagram"
20190821 10:17, I ate tomatoes as one of the "Five Whites of the Central Plains" and released a new book "Cangyuan Tu".
The starting point app is promoted for its splash screen to show its attention.
My main works of eating tomatoes are "The Legend of Xingfeng", "Cun Mang", "Star Change", "Panlong", "Jiuding Ji", "Devouring the Starry Sky", "The Age of Recklessness", "Snow Eagle Lord", "Flying Sword Asks", "Cangyuan Map", a total of 10 works.
Regarding the title of this book, it seems to be a bit exquisite, powerful atlas? Powerful exercises? Awesome world?
However, on the relevant website, there was a book in 2012 called "Cangyuan", which has more than 2.7 million words, and its reputation seems to be insignificant.
"Cangyuan Map", author: I eat tomatoes.
Category: Fantasy - High Martial World.
Brief introduction
My name is Meng Chuan, I am fifteen years old this year, and I am the contemporary elder brother of the "Jinghu Taoist Academy" in Dongning Mansion.
This profile was frantically complained about, this is not a profile at all, this is the character setting.
Anyone who has written a WeChat public account knows that the system will default to the first twenty or thirty words of the article as a summary.
It's similar to the introduction of this book.
In fact, anyone who understands knows that this is laziness! Or if you haven't thought about it yet, it is estimated that it will change soon.
Friends who like to collect, you can take a screenshot first, and when you blow water in the future, you can prove that you are the first to pay attention to the true love of tomatoes!
[A chapter of awkward chat]
Chapter 1, Meng Chuan and Yun Qingping. 3982 words.
The identity of the protagonist Meng Chuan is introduced, as well as the positioning of the genius role. Yun Qingping sent a maid to make an appointment, but she refused directly. After the protagonist goes home, he practices archery with his childhood sweetheart, Liu Qiyue. Yun Qingping once again asked her father to withdraw from the marriage and was scolded.
It's just one chapter, there's nothing to say. As for the reason,
It may be that you are older and have limited energy; It may be the little tsundere of a platinum writer, and one chapter is enough; Or maybe lazy!
Let me write an outline for the author!
【Characters】
Meng Chuan, the absolute male protagonist, one of the top ten disciples of the Mirror Lake Daoist Academy, a professional swordsman, one of the five major god and demon families in Dongning Mansion, the family has a history of thousands of years. The protagonist is currently trying to win a place in the Yuyang Palace Demon Slaying Conference.
Liu Qiyue is suspected of being the heroine, one of the top ten disciples of the Lieyang Daoist Academy's Pulp Washing Realm, and a professional archer. is the only daughter of the protagonist's father's brother in death.,Grew up with the protagonist since childhood.,Extremely affectionate.。 At present, the number of places in the Demon Slaying Conference has been designated by the Taoist Academy.
Yun Qingping is definitely not the heroine, one of the five major gods and demon families, the pearl of the Yun family, and a daughter with no cultivation talent in her profession. The Yun family has a very shallow foundation in Dongning Mansion, and it is urgent to consolidate the family status by marriage.
Yun Fu An Yun Qingping's father, the contemporary patriarch of the Yun family. In this chapter, he took on the responsibility of reprimanding his pampered daughter, talking about the family situation, and even letting go of the cruel words and daring to go beyond the rules, and cleaning up the door.
Zhang Chong hooked up with Yun Qingping's Zhang family side branch, and it is estimated that he will not survive 30 chapters.
The maid of the green bamboo Yun Qingping summoned Meng Chuan on behalf of Yun Qingping, and asked her to travel in the mountains and rivers and spend a good night together. In the future, I may be able to hook up with Zhang Chong.
【Plot】
In the second chapter, Yun Qingping was not convinced, and went to Meng Chuan to withdraw from the marriage in person, but found out that Liu Qiyue existed.
In the third chapter, Yun Qingping and Liu Qiyue confronted each other and proposed to withdraw from the marriage again.
In the fourth chapter, the protagonist defends Liu Qiyue and takes the initiative to withdraw from the marriage, angering Yun Qingping.
In the fifth chapter, Yun Qingping and Zhang Chong discussed and decided to find someone to help, attacked the protagonist, and broke off his idea of participating in the demon slaying conference.
In the sixth chapter, the protagonist has the resources to defeat the enemy.
Chapter 7, the selection of the Taoist Academy, the protagonist appears domineeringly.
In chapters 8 to 10, the protagonist finally wins the place after some competition.
Chapter 11, the family crisis, the Yun family failed to marry and was humiliated, so they wanted to unite with other families and destroy the Meng family.
At the beginning of the twelfth chapter, the protagonist participates in the demon slaying conference, and the adventures continue, fighting monsters and upgrading to get treasures, and after the promotion, he returns home and finds that his family has been destroyed. secretly investigated and found the culprit Yun family, but the Yun family had an ancestor.
At the beginning of chapter fifty, the protagonist is forced to leave Dongning Mansion and go to the famous mountain mentioned by his father to practice, and after a period of twists and turns, the protagonist meets Yun Qingping again and knows the truth about the destruction of the family.
At the beginning of a hundred chapters, the protagonist's strength is small, defeating Yun Qingping and destroying the Yun family. But he hooked out a more powerful opponent, and ran away all the way to practice and change the map.
Starting from the three hundred chapters, change the map, fight monsters and upgrade, until the universe is created with the "Cangyuan Map", and even rush to the Hongmeng space, in the name of the official announcement, draw a perfect end to the "Hongmeng Trilogy".
【Emotional line】
During this period, the heroine Liu Qiyue never gave up, shared joys and sorrows, and the two accumulated real feelings. Just as they were about to make friends with each other, the heroine was captured by the wicked or trapped in a dungeon. The protagonist embarks on a bumpy road to escape and rescue his lover.
It can also be written as the heroine dies, and the protagonist no longer believes in love, and will be written as having no heroine.
Or the protagonist is even more trapped in the heroine, rejecting the pride of the sky all the way. In the end, he finally learned the method of bringing the dead back to life and revived the heroine.
【Exercises & Maps】
This is the most powerful part of the tomato giant. I can't write. I'm just a Level 1 author.
[Last]
I will continue to pay close attention to this book, and I hope that Tomato will update it a lot and create more brilliant achievements.
After the first order of the book comes out, analyze it again.
At the end of this book, if I'm still chasing after it, I'll make a big summary.
Today, it's really a bit difficult for those of us who have been paying attention to and loving Tomato.
It's only one chapter, what is it enough for?
【Cang's Whispering】
When the book hit the shelves, I did contribute the first order.
But I haven't watched it.
Many of my friends are reading it, and I have asked them, and they all say that the recent chapters are quite watery.
This is completely understandable.
The number of water words is human nature.
I just hope that Tomato will greatly maintain his physical and mental strength, and will not seek to create brilliance, but only hope to continue to maintain the original intention and enthusiasm of writing, and keep writing.
Although there is not much intersection between us in this book, I still follow you silently, like many readers who like you.
Looking forward to such a small unexpected surprise, it will come soon.
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