154. Commenting on "Mystery Journey"

"Feel the mystery, cuties!"

"Mysterious Journey", the author gets out, a great god writer.

Categorical Fantasy - Epic Fantasy.

【Introduction】

Travel through worlds with attribute abilities.

Experience the exotic and mysterious worlds.

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter I, Volume I Initial 1. The protagonist Luo Jing accidentally travels to another world and becomes a high school student Garon. His parents are both there, and he has a younger sister named Ying'er. This world, which seems to be the time of the European Industrial Revolution, is dominated by federal states, which is completely different from the pattern of the earth. But the education system is surprisingly similar, requiring everyone to take the UEC before they can go to university.

Chapter 2, Untitled. The protagonist arrives at the school, sits in his seat, feels the mysterious system that suddenly turned on the bus before, and is confused by the numerical indicators of physical fitness. In etiquette class, when the black and red pearls reach his hands, the system's potential percentage is wildly charged.

Chapter 3, Untitled. Jewelry can recharge the system, and full energy can improve physical fitness indicators, but he has not yet decided which direction to develop. After school, he went to the Baiyun Martial Arts Hall to learn martial arts, and according to the coach's requirements, he would practice with a young girl.

Chapter 4, Untitled. During the sparring process, the protagonist subconsciously increases his strength index and successfully defeats his opponent. He didn't expect the effect of the power increase to be so obvious. On the weekend, his classmates asked him to go to Bibo Lake to play, but he had no money, so his friends helped to pay for it.

Chapter 5, Outing. A group of boys and girls are playing by the lake, barbecue barbecue, card playing. With the system, the protagonist's skills in playing cards cannot be improved. On the other hand, his sister is still working hard to practice archery for the competition. At this time, there was an accident at the lake, and someone was bitten by a snake.

Chapter 6 is the establishment of subject items. The protagonist saves the girl, causing another girl who is very cold to take note of the protagonist's help. She gave her a ring as a thank you. The protagonist gets a charge from the ring and goes home at night to divide the points evenly, because if you want to get into a good university, you can't choose a subject. With the help of the system, he initially mastered the basic skills of learning.

Chapter VII, Bronze Cross. Parents are on a business trip.,The protagonist's sister is in charge of the two's food.,The younger sister seems to be intent on getting closer to her brother.。 And the protagonist is concerned about the charging of the system, and plans to try his luck at the antique store.

Chapter 8, special attribute points. The protagonist discovers a bronze cross in the antique store that can provide charging, but unfortunately it is too expensive for him to afford, so he plans to come to see it for free in the future, and try to absorb the energy in it as soon as possible. Later, he went to his uncle's house again, and unexpectedly found that he seemed to add some skills to his skills.

Chapter 9, Changes. As soon as he walked out of his uncle's house, he was stopped by his cousin, and the two of them were a little angry and fought. With the addition of power, the protagonist easily defeats his cousin. I was about to climb the stairs home and met my sister, and the air between the two was a little inexplicable. Note: The two are half-siblings.

Chapter 10, Untitled. He still wanted to buy that medal, so he began to think about how to make money quickly, and finally thought of going to the martial arts hall to improve his personal skills and represent the martial arts hall to participate in the competition, and the prize money seemed to be quite high.

[Brief comment]

1. Author profile

Fuck off, great god writer.

He is the author of seven works, and when I wrote "The True Solution of Kendo" yesterday, I made an introduction, and I will not repeat it.

2. Story features

This book is a Western fantasy story, which was still very popular in those years, but it is not very good now.

The story is mainly about the protagonist who travels to another world and becomes a high school junior named Garon.

He is ordinary in every way, and after crossing over, with the help of the mysterious system, his physical fitness has been greatly improved.

He continued to practice in the martial arts hall, and his strength improved by leaps and bounds, and he also became a core disciple, learning more authentic martial arts and mental techniques.

His system absorbs the energy contained in precious jewelry and antiques, and then adds points to the physical fitness according to the system.

At present, I have only tried to read the early stage, so many stories have not been developed.

But the spirit of the protagonist's constant pursuit of martial arts has been able to read some.

3. Character characteristics

The main character, Garon, has a 16-year-old body and an adult soul.

So he wasn't very interested in the people and things that happened in school.

If it weren't for the need to survive, he might not even be able to get into college.

Because, his grades are at the bottom of the class.

He practiced martial arts very hard, but he was very humble.

As long as someone provokes him, there is no ambiguity in starting out, even if the other party is a cute girl.

He has a half-sister who is very good at archery and has good skills, and he has been pressing him in his previous life.

The two often quarrel, and the protagonist never takes advantage of anything.

However, the protagonist after crossing is not a soft persimmon.

In several confrontations between the two, my sister has suffered a lot of dark losses.

4. Style characteristics

Although this book is a Western fantasy, the exotic characteristics are not obvious, and it feels like it's just a layer of skin.

Maybe it's to avoid some writing risks.

Actually, it's useless.,I like to "kill my sister and preach" and get out of the way.,This book has been blocked for several chapters in the early stage.,So much so that I had to go to the outstation to find the missing chapter.。

The style is generally quite similar to "Kendo True Solution".

also has a sister, has special abilities, an ordinary start, and counterattacks step by step.

It's just that there are not so many battles and killings in the early stage of this book, and the degree of combat enthusiasm is slightly worse.

However, the rhythm control is much more mature, the plot is much smoother, and the characters are much fuller.

The most important thing is that the number of words in the whole book has become more, it is no longer a short party, and the two beasts have evolved more smoothly.

The quality of the book has always been very well guaranteed.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but it is done and cherished.

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering".

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

Yesterday, a reader left a message, saying that the book that was rolled away had a huge brain hole in the early stage, but due to the lack of control of the outline, it always collapsed in the later stage.

He's supposed to be a long-time reader who knows Roll Out very well, and certainly has a much deeper insight than a new reader like me.

But judging from the early plot development, there are still many similarities between this book and my "True Interpretation of Kendo" above.

Specifically, you can take a look at these two books and make a simple comparison.

For those who have never read a book to roll away, as long as the early stage is attractive enough, it is worth checking out.

Of his seven books, I've tried to read five.

To be honest, what was more amazing in the early stage was "Kendo True Solution".

Of course, everyone has their own opinions and preferences.

In general, the book that rolled away is not like the supernatural classification, and it has been sealed too much.

Seven of his books have been preserved, which is not easy.

Despite some mysterious chapters, the mystery is gone.

That doesn't affect the reading experience either.

I hope that readers and friends who have read this article can go and go shopping there~