105. Commenting on "Worm House"

Today I would like to recommend to you a suspense work with a unique way of writing.

"Worm House", Author: Golden Cabinet Corner, Level 3 Author.

Category: Suspense - Wonderful World.

【Introduction】

The chubby man walked to the yard with a broom, he swept the fallen leaves, turned his head, and looked at the plaque on the door - the worm house.

"If you don't show up again, I'll make you into flower fertilizer."

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter I, Transcript. The protagonist Jiang You died unexpectedly due to the tenant Liang Hao and went to the police station to make a record. After that, I went to the house where the accident occurred and met the parents of the deceased and an enthusiastic V.

Chapter 2, The Umbrella. The protagonist takes a spin around the house and takes an umbrella with him. And the feeling of that enthusiastic big V is not normal. When going downstairs, the protagonist encounters another mysterious girl who carries a wooden knife with her.

Chapter 3, Worm House. The mysterious girl's name is Tang Butian, and she is a first-class superintendent of the Special Events Section of the Police Department, specializing in special events. After reviewing the protagonist's transcript, she pretends to be a customer of the worm house and tries it herself. And after revealing his identity, find a strand of black hair brought back by the protagonist.

Chapter 4, Room Types. Tang Butian carefully inspected the layout of the house on the second floor of the protagonist and found that it was unusually clean, which did not fit the daily residence of a greasy man at all. After some inquiry, the protagonist's answer is watertight. And Tang Butian also paid for the postcard in the store that he bought.

Chapter V, Registration. A week later, the protagonist receives a message from Tang Butian asking him to go to the police station to register. After identifying the colorblind pattern and registering the form, the protagonist realizes how easy it is to determine whether a person has an ability.

Chapter 6, Myopia. The protagonist is short-sighted, so he has the ability to see through the sky, (this is really good news, hold your glasses). Tang Butian still found him and brought a master. For the sake of money, the protagonist agrees to go undercover.

Chapter 7, Sell Numbers. The protagonist gets the right to subscribe to the villa, turns around and goes to the intermediary to sell. Because if he buys a third house, he will have to pay for it in full. Subsequently, he asked a few friends to eat crayfish with him and met the person in the accident.

Chapter 8, Serving. When the food was served, the person at the next table was angry, and it was the female V at the beginning. After being identified by the protagonist, he gave up. Because the owner of this restaurant is a friend of the protagonist. And all the signs of the female big V show that the matter of crowdfunding may not be so simple.

Chapter 9, Buy a ticket. The protagonist returns to the worm house, slowly finishes his daily routine, and finds a ticket seller to buy a ticket for the press conference a little earlier. Then, he began to watch the girl group dance, and gave a thumbs up to the most promising members. The last good night is the key point.

Chapter 10, The Pond. The protagonist actually makes a pond in the yard and gets ready to get some plants. While he was talking to himself, Tang Butian appeared again. She sensed that something was wrong in the store, but no one noticed it.

[Brief comment]

I used to see people recommending this book, but I didn't really care about it at the time.

I thought to myself, how can a bug house that sells postcards be related to suspense.

After reading it for a while, I suddenly found that every chapter of this book is filled with a large number of character dialogues.

There are very few environmental descriptions, there are not many plot descriptions, and there are no psychological descriptions.

The story of this book is driven almost entirely by the dialogue of the characters.

So, give the feeling of reading a script.

However, the dialogue in this book is very well designed.

Although some places feel too straightforward and watery, in fact, there is also a hint of wit.

When you experience it carefully, you can feel that the author is trying to create a suspenseful atmosphere and push the story line in the direction of the setting, so it is not boring.

And the protagonist has always behaved very indifferently and clearly.

The tenant's death did not panic, and the police investigation did not interrupt his life of planting flowers.

went to the police station to register his identity, promised to assist the police in solving the case, acted as an undercover agent for "fishing law enforcement", went deep into the press conference of the company involved, and was attacked by the murderer's hair on the spot, but he still couldn't stop his enthusiasm for chatting with his classmates for dinner.

Until the murderer was taken down by Tang Butian, the protagonist returned home and found that there was still strange hair with him.

At this time, the protagonist silently spit out: "I didn't have such a good temper before." ”

His low-key identity as a bigwig was indirectly revealed, and the comments were immediately 99+.

Many people can't help but sigh: What they are waiting for is this sentence, and it is really a big guy.

After that, how does the protagonist show his ability, why he opened a worm house, how to fight against extraordinary events, whether he can repair a marriage with Tang Butian, whether the hair murder incident is completely over, and so on.

The mystery will also be lifted little by little.

In addition, when the author portrays the characters, although the words are minimal, he has profound skills in local close-ups.

The grace of women is portrayed very prominently, and the picture is extremely clear.

Although the number of words in this book is not much, the update is not fast, and the results are not proud, but considering the difficult creative background of suspense classification, it will still make people feel that the highlights are obvious, the quality is excellent, and the reading experience is profound and beautiful.

This is also fully in line with the author's original intention of creation, upholding personal characteristics and not following the crowd, which is commendable.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

【Cang's Whispering】

This book is really good, it is a dialogue, similar to the writing style of the eagle eating the chicken, but the writing is better.

This book can even be adapted directly, and even the script is omitted.

The author's conception of dialogue is indeed very exquisite, the foreshadowing is buried many and deep, and the fog is rendered layer after layer.

If you read it well, you can read a delicate beauty, and when you close the book, you can feel the insects crawling around the back of the plant.

Of course, those who are anxious may feel impatient.

Therefore, this book does not have too many bloody plots, only infinite brain-burning.

But unlike some detectives, the traces are set very abruptly.

Personally, I like this book more, I can't sleep in the middle of the night, while feeling the warm daily life in the book, while waiting for the fog to be lifted, laughing at the characters of the story being played in the palm of the author's palm.

The author is really writing the book with his brain, not tapping his fingers on the keyboard.

A work with such dedication is still relatively rare in the suspense category.

As long as this book does not touch the bottom line of reality too much, and does not make similes, metaphors and metaphors for various events, more people will definitely like this book in the future.

If you're as small as I am, congratulations.

This book is completely in line with the cuties who want to hunt for curiosity but are afraid of being frightened by the plot!

Moreover, this book is neither harem, nor thriller, nor systematic, nor goldfinger.

It's just a simple story of a myopic eye raising insects!

So, what are you waiting for?

Is this book free of charge?