208. Commenting on "The Great Battle"
Today I would like to recommend to you a fairy-like Xianxia work.
"The Battle of the Great Road", Author: Misguided, Level 5 Author.
Category: Xianxia - Fantasy Cultivation of Immortals.
【Introduction】
Do not fall into reincarnation into the great thousand,
The heart is spread in the world.
May a sword slay ten thousand calamities,
Ruthless for sentient days!
【Golden Ten Chapters】
The first chapter, reincarnation as a human Xuanmen refining the truth. Donghuazhou, Cangwu Mountain, Zhang Yan, a famous disciple of Shanyuan Guan, was occupied by the traverser who came from the last days. He has been in the school for three years, but he has not yet been able to get started. After figuring out the joints, he decided to use his ability to decipher the etching texts to earn some rice and learn advanced exercises.
Chapter 2, The Eclipse Heavenly Book, I read it by myself. The next day, someone was waiting for the protagonist to arrive early, and it was Zhao Yuan. The protagonist decodes the exercises from the travelogue brought by the other party, and points out that there is a second volume. The protagonist befriended each other with a generous and honest attitude, and naturally won the admiration of the other party. And the protagonist, in the end, is to make a name for himself and worship the Guru.
In the third chapter, condensing the qi and building the original god means dry. "Yongchuan Xingmai Method" is the exercise that the protagonist interprets for Zhao Yuan, and after obtaining the consent of the other party, the protagonist begins to practice. When he changed to eclipse and silently wrote, he miraculously condensed his energy. As for the others coming to find trouble, the protagonist only has a plan.
Chapter 4, Commentary on the Thousand Zhangyan Front. The protagonist came to the Qianzhang Rock of the Explanation, and someone was waiting for him. Bian Qiao is here to make things difficult for the protagonist, and he gives a lot of thanks, but if he can't solve it, the protagonist will be forced to leave the mountain gate.
Chapter 5, Explanation of the Thousand Sho Rocks. Bian Qiao brought three copies of the Taoist book, the first one was easily cracked by the protagonist, and when the second one was cracked, the surrounding peers couldn't help but follow the cultivation and almost had an accident. Although the number of words burned in the third Dao technique is not much, it is better in refinement, only sixteen words, but there are infinite interpretations. At this time, the protagonist enters his own jade space, ten times the time of the outside world.
Chapter 6, Cause and Effect of the Past Dust Dingyang Zhoumen. On this day, the protagonist's old servant who lives at the foot of the mountain is worried about finding him, and the protagonist's brother-in-law, Zhou Zishang, is also brought over. It turns out that the protagonist is still a son-in-law, with a nominal wife, and he is also a cultivator. The brother-in-law came and went in a hurry this time.
In the seventh chapter, Fa Wei is dignified and borrows his name to make a living. Bian Qiao turned to Ai Zhongwen for help, hoping to get back the third Dao technique. Another disciple surnamed Lin said wildly that he wanted to help, and on the way, he met Zhou Zishang, who left angrily, and went directly to the street. After Ai Zhongwen learned about that relationship from the protagonist, he almost didn't freak out.
Chapter 8, Yitong remnants of the jade heavenly machine hidden. The exercises that Ai Zhongwen gave to the protagonist are difficult to practice smoothly. He had no choice but to make the clones in the jade space strengthen their practice and strive to break through as soon as possible.
In the ninth chapter, the dark tide of Dan's heart is gradually surging. The protagonist's doppelganger cultivates in the jade, and wants to bring out the items freely, but the deity withdraws from the jade world. On the other hand, Zhou Zishang went directly to the master of Shanyuanguan, and the heavy money and heart method were finally achieved.
Chapter 10, Dangyun Peak fights for the gate of heaven. The protagonist continues to practice in the view, but he is stuck in a key link. When he went to attend the literary meeting as promised, he encountered a Gu examination school skill. The protagonist wins the other party, but then realizes that the other party is clicking on himself. On the other side, the representatives of the various sects were worried about who could defeat Mo Yuan, a genius boy from other sects.
[Brief comment]
Those who have misunderstood, their works include: "The Emperor of Thieves in Another World", "The Battle of the Great Road" and "Xuanhun Dao Chapter".
Today I want to talk briefly about "Avenue Battle".
Because I don't see much, I can't talk about much experience.
For a while, I scanned the Xianxia category and often saw this book.
But because I wasn't very interested in the title of the book, and it was a bit similar to "The Road to the Sky", I didn't click on it.
Later, the Xianxia classification rose again "Rotten Ke Qiyuan" and "My Senior Brother is Too Steady", and the trial reading plan for this book was delayed again and again.
However, I have always known that this book still has a very high status in the hearts of many Xianxia fans.
Even though it ended on January 29 last year on its seventh anniversary, there are still people who have been brushing it repeatedly, I don't know how many times.
In the eyes of true love fans, this book is even called the most fairy and most fairy-like work.
Some people even listed it with "Immortal Rebellion" and "Seeking Demons" as the three major immortals in their hearts.
Straight to the point.
After I tried it, I also had a few small feelings.
The book is excellently written.
The choice of words and sentences is very particular, needless to say.
The character dialogues, environmental descriptions, atmospheric renderings, and so on, are all very natural. There are many detailed descriptions, which can be called a model for essay writing.
The author loves to write poetry.
This can be seen in the titles of the books and chapters.
Generally speaking, female frequency ancient sayings and male frequency martial arts like to use neat verses as titles.
On the one hand, it sets off the ancient atmosphere, and on the other hand, it highlights the literary literacy.
Although the chapter titles in this book are not entirely confrontational, they are still very ingenious in many places.
In the main text, there are many small poems.
"The golden palace is full of dry bones and yellow mud mounds, and half a cup of turbid wine is sacrificed to the prince. Today, I have a dream, and I only ask the immortals and don't ask about sorrow. ”
This poem is said to be the first poem in the book, full of artistic conception, showing the protagonist's heart of cultivating immortals and perseverance.
"Ten thousand acres of immortal waves go, and thousands of lakes return to the spiritual light. Xuanji is born in heaven and earth, and Qiankun calligraphy and Taoism chapters. ”
This poem is the last poem in the book, which not only expresses the wonder of the Xuanhe River, but also metaphorizes the title of the new book "Xuanhun Dao Zhang".
"If there is no opponent in the pursuit of the avenue, how can you compete?"
Here is the connotation of the whole book and the meaning of cultivating immortals.
A single chapter, deep in ingenuity, thought-provoking.
It's like: "Tang Ge'er beats and walks, turns back in three steps, beckons in five steps, and then walks and walks." ”
In fact, the habitual use of poetry has always been a common technique in the Ming and Qing dynasties.
For example, the sentence of the twelve golden hairpins in "Dream of Red Mansions" is elegant in chanting poems and painting at every turn. The descriptions of the characters in "Journey to the West" and the fights when Sun Wukong made trouble in the sky to slay demons and eliminate demons are also poems. The same is true for "Romance of the Three Kingdoms". "Water Margin" is relatively less and more vernacular.
To cite these examples, the main thing I want to express is that there are really not too many authors in the online literature circle who pay attention to rhetoric and create an ancient style of Xianxia like the misguide.
After all, online articles have always been characterized as "fast food culture", and they are very commercial.
Therefore, online writing generally requires stable updates and a large amount of control, such as "Global Gaowu".
On the way to "fast", this book has written 7.52 million words in seven years, which is not fast, nor is it much.
But the "meal" is definitely far more than that. Not only is it delicious, but it is also quite delicious, and the fairy atmosphere is leisurely.
Here, I would like to remind readers and friends that you must not read this book at the speed of reading Xiaobaiwen, you will miss a lot of exquisite scenery.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
First of all, I would like to thank the 2014 little book friends for rewarding 1000 starting coins.
This book seems to have been recommended by a reader.
Personally, I like it too.
Misguided people really have their own unique views on explaining the path of cause and effect.
The storyline is very cleverly set, and a seemingly mundane detail can make a huge difference at a critical moment.
The story of this book is very interesting, and the fairy spirit is very full, no wonder in the minds of many people, it is considered to be the most fairy work.
In addition, the author's ability to make poems is really strong.
Although it is only a trial reading, it is undeniably much more exciting than many works in the Xianxia classification.
Finally, I highly recommend friends who haven't seen it to check it out, you won't be disappointed.