515. Commenting on "Beginning with the Succession of Kowloon"

Today I would like to recommend a book written by a friend.

"From the Nine Dragons", The Loss of Carthage, Level 4 Author.

Category: Xianxia - Xiuzhen Civilization.

【Introduction】

The eighteen palms of the dragon descended into the sky, the golden dragon soared into the sky, Xiao Li's flying knife shattered the void, the God of War catalogue suppressed the heroes, the warriors were vertical and horizontal, and the grass was careless for human life.

Li Mudao: "This world is too dangerous, how can I be a scholar?" ”

Kiss! Ask for advice!

【…… Progress 70% ......】

Goldfinger hasn't been launched yet, and it's in the middle of Kavin!

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, Kowloon seizes the throne. The protagonist Li Mu is a Tanhualang, and he doesn't want to get involved in the matter of Kowloon's succession, so he invites himself to leave Beijing to be a small county magistrate. When he returned to his hometown, he said goodbye to his father's grave. On the way to his post, he was robbed by a bandit, and when he learned his identity, he wanted to kill again. Fortunately, the three masters, female, appeared, and it seems that there has been a turnaround.

In the second chapter, why can't you be Yuan Fang's swollenness. The protagonist was invited up the mountain by the bandits, greeted him with delicious food and drink, and asked the three masters to teach him martial arts, but unfortunately the protagonist's qualifications were mediocre, and he didn't feel the sense of qi for ten days. He went to visit Shangguan, asked for advice on the law of governance, and asked the six doors in the county for martial arts. A year later, I finally felt a faint sense of qi. The cheat arrived, but unfortunately the progress bar was stuck and has not been activated.

In the third chapter, there are two knives. Someone reported a murder to the official, and the protagonist took someone to the scene, but unfortunately it was two knives, and no clues could be found from the corpse. He personally conducted the autopsy, but he was just fooling the people next to him. Confessed to the inspection to continue the investigation, and discussed countermeasures with the county, but before he could figure out the clue, someone came to report to the official.

Chapter 4, another murder. Someone reported that the old man and his wife died at home, and the protagonist went to the scene again to conduct an autopsy to determine that the deceased died of robbery. The protagonist takes it upon himself again, which is inferred to be a vendetta. It's just that for the time being, it is impossible to tell what kind of enemies the deceased had during his lifetime.

Chapter 5, Zheng Butcher, Thousand Steel. The protagonist sorts out the case notes, and the three masters of the cottage visit, bringing the copycat ledger. The protagonist tells each other about the last two murders, and the three masters judge that the headless deceased is a warrior. Soon the head was found, and judging from the scene, the three masters judged that the deceased should have been killed in a martial arts competition. Moreover, the thousand steels used by the deceased are high-quality steels.

[Brief comment]

The Loss of Carthage, a Level 4 author, is the author of nine works such as "Conquest of the Heavenly World", "The Competitor of the Main God", and "Starting from the Nine Dragons".

Four of them have been sealed for a long time, and it is estimated that it will be difficult to release them.

The book introduced today ended on November 4 and has written 1.44 million words. On the shelves on March 6, the first order is 1200, and the boutique has not yet been reached. At present, the starting point has a collection of 42,600, a book city collection of 9,004, and a number of fans of 93,800.

A few months ago, I asked if I needed help recommending a wave. He refused.

He once humbled himself and said that his writing was not good and he was not worth recommending.

I believed it, and I didn't write it. Because it's generally not particularly brilliant or famous, even if I push it, it may not have any effect.

Recently, when I think about this, I always feel that I should give my author friends a boost.

After all, I've even recommended tens of thousands of words, so why shouldn't I recommend some books around me.

After reading it, I still have a few small understandings.

First of all, the author writes a lot of monthly summaries. This has been particularly prevalent lately, and it should have been influenced by "The Master of Mysteries". Summarizing more can ensure that the general direction of the story does not deviate from the outline, and it is also a combing of your own writing ideas, which is a better writing habit.

Secondly, the style of this book is biased towards solving cases, and Xianxia is just a layer of skin. The story is a bit like the TV series "Detective Di Renjie", which is something that the author himself repeatedly emphasized. Probably, he was greatly influenced by this drama and wanted to work in this direction. So there are a lot of cases in the book, and he also looked up a lot of cases for this. The reasoning and case judgment are quite meticulous, and the major loopholes have not been found for the time being.

Again, it's a bit preachy. My personal reading preference is that I don't like to watch the author's output values. Whether it is "Sword Comes" or "Son-in-law". If there is too much value output, or too much popular science knowledge, I will be a little resistant. Readers are here to read books, not to listen to reasoning or to give lessons. So at this point, it will be easier to dissuade me.

Finally, I have to admit that the author is a very serious and hard-working person. This is also a necessary requirement to become a good author, writing blindly can only be cool for a while, and it will definitely be boring afterwards. Although this book is covered with the skin of Xianxia, it can actually be regarded as history or suspense. If you come for Xianxia Xiuzhen, you may be disappointed.

And this friend has also been in trouble recently, and the book has been taken off the shelves for a time. Because it was involved in being maliciously reported. It can be seen that no matter what level of author it is, the current writing environment is too difficult.

Anyway, if you like it, just support it.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

The book ended quite suddenly, one second it was still trying to update, and the next moment it was over.

The author said that he would take a break for a while, look at the "Historical Records", recharge or something.

I've been communicating with him a lot, and I understand that he has requirements for his books.

But for the time being, I don't have the strong ability to write the story I want to write.

The pain of repeated torture made his writing even harder.

I hope that after this break, I will present you with a particularly comfortable work.