30. Commenting on "The First Sequence"
Title: "The First Sequence": Elbow, you are the starting point of the first sequence
The starting point is a great god writer, a talking elbow, and his masterpieces are "The King Spares His Life", "I Am a Big Player", and "League of Legends: Cataclysmic Era", among which "The King Spares His Life" won many awards in 2018 and broke countless records.
On April 15, 2019, Talking Elbow released its new book "The First Sequence".
Category: Urban - Magical Super.
This category is also my favorite.
Judging from the title of the book, it is very ordinary, and if the new author chooses this name, it is estimated that it will be unnoticed.
But the big guy must have his deep meaning in this name!
Is it a symbol of the author's ambition? Want to achieve a rank above the great god?
Cover: Unable to complain.
I believe that soon there will be more NB covers! For the big guy, this doesn't really matter at all, right?!
Introduction:
Guys, I'm a talking elbow, and I'm back.
This is a new story.
(This profile is definitely for the big guys!) If the new author dares to write like this, "heheda" will be sent to you, please go out and turn right to find a trash can to draw a circle! )
Chapter 10 Poison Testing:
(The big guy just sent 10 chapters, which completely meets the criteria for my drug test, isn't it a coincidence?) )
In the first chapter, the protagonist Ren Xiaosu, (what does it have to do with Lu Xiaoshu?) A teenager with a story, sick in the head, will pass out. This chapter perfectly interprets Mr. Lu Xun's favorite game "Door Ke Luoque" when he was a child, after the protagonist gets the prey, he encounters a robbery, and then it is a magical turn.
In the second chapter, I beat the sparrows, only gave Yan Liuyuan (younger brother or younger sister) some offal, Ren Xiaosu drank some soup, and the meat was to be sold. What a hard time it was to live in a shelter outside the refuge barrier!
Chapter 3, Liuyuan turned out to be a younger brother! Ren Xiaosu has a palace in his mind, and there are many secrets in the palace, and it is the golden finger. And in this chapter, a woman named Xiaoyu appears, and she is also a woman with a story. Well, there are a lot of unspeakable stories, and I wish I could write more.
Chapter 4, Yan Liuyuan's ability is lucky, which is the same as "Ou Shen"? Ren Xiaosu sells sparrows, three catties and six taels, what a big bird! The protagonist shows superb bargaining skills and raises postures!
Chapter 5, School, the protagonist has no money, so he can only squat on the wall outside the classroom and eavesdrop, and children who study so hard are rare now!
Chapter 6, Walls and Science. This chapter introduces the background of the story, the cataclysm, the insect tide, the evolution of the beasts, and the high wall. It feels a lot like "Attack on Titan" (I'm here again), and the erection of the wall seems to reveal a hint of conspiracy.
Alan, what do you think?
In Chapter 7, the protagonist is upgraded to a substitute teacher, but he wants to pass on the throne to his younger brother, what a good brother, a natural hunter!
In Chapter 8, the mercenary looks for the protagonist to be his guide, but when he hears that the protagonist is sick in the brain, the sentence "Father and son are safe, six catties and six taels" directly makes the mercenary determine that the protagonist is a psychopath.
In Chapter 9, Goldfinger shows his terrifying copying ability, and another copying ninja, Kakashi Hachiki, is born. Congratulations to Ren Xiaosu for his promotion and salary increase, becoming the general manager, becoming the CEO, marrying Bai Fumei, and reaching the pinnacle of life! "It's a little exciting to think about it~
Chapter 10, Ren Xiaosu heroically saves his big sister, his actions are smooth, his moves are scientific and effective, and he controls the enemy like a storm of charges, and the opponent loses this move unjustly, but he may still die.
After the ten chapters of the poison test, I really want to try ten more chapters, but unfortunately the elbow has not been updated yet, it doesn't matter, I will continue to follow up!
Brief comment on:
There are too few updates, and it's not enough to see at all!!
Background:
In the post-cataclysmic world, the beast has evolved, and even sparrows can bully people.
The erection of the high wall is somewhat similar to that of Attack on Titan, with many areas divided into many squads, which naturally divides into many levels (and may be sequences in the future).
The living environment of the shack outside the barrier is very difficult, and there are dangers everywhere, which highlights the courage and ability of the protagonist Ren Xiaosu to survive.
Character setting:
The protagonist's ability is very peculiar and buggy - copying, which is simply invincible. The younger brother Yan Liuyuan's ability is also very peculiar, and the side effects are not big. The female supporting actress Li Xiaoyu is a very warm character, although the source of money is not normal, but in troubled times, it is the ability to live.
Plot:
Ren Xiaosu, the bravest hunter in the town, lives with his younger brother. The protagonist loves to read, but he gives up the opportunity to his younger brother. The protagonist has become a substitute teacher, and he is about to be a guide again, wearing many hats.
To put it simply, the protagonist is currently invincible, and I like it~
Style setting:
It's fun and has a wide audience. The daily dialogue between the protagonist and his younger brother reveals a strong sense of joy, which makes people laugh.
The jokes of the great gods and the jokes of the new authors are really not a joke!
The book was uploaded in the early morning, and as of 4 o'clock in the afternoon, there were already 32 alliance leaders, including 4 in the Silver Alliance.
Such an achievement is simply "the peak of debut", Meng Xin didn't dare to think about it!
Finally, I wish the big guy's new book sesame blossoming and creating miracles!
You are the first sequence!
I believe that follow-up works will emerge soon, so I won't look at any "Nth sequence"~
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt for myself!
【Cang's Whispering】
This article was written relatively early, it is a book review written when "The First Sequence" was first published, and it is also the first time that it has been published on the official WeChat public account.
Stopped flattered at the time!
At that time, there seemed to be a message activity, which was to send an autograph book of "The King's Life".
So, I actively left a message and wanted a book.
As a result, Lan Niang quickly contacted me and gave me a copy.
It was also the first physical document I received.
At that time, I had just dabbled in book reviews for 2 months.
Time has passed, many people have gone to stay, and I have stopped the column group in the water group, but moved to a new place.
Yesterday, a dragon king came out.
I finally became the person I hated the most.
went around and around, which is in response to the sentence in the promotional video of "The First Sequence".
Hope is the first weapon of humanity in the face of danger.
This sentence is also given to this book that is working hard to get a recommended position!
The first place on the list of short new books "Relying on the Car to Eat the Car" has been put on the shelves, only 40,000 words.
And the book, which is the second place, is already more than 50,000 words, and no information has been received.
I don't know what the situation is, is it forgotten by history again?
I would like to use this article to record my feelings at this time.
I hope this book can get a little favor or two from God, telling me that the road to writing is lonely, but not lonely!
In addition, if there are readers who see this book, bubble up and collect a wave!
I'm not expecting a little too much.
Well, 2000 words!