338. Commenting on "Dragon Emperor Martial God"
The book recommended today is on the praise list of Orange Melon Network, ranking first!
"Dragon Emperor Martial God", Bu Zheng, great god writer.
Category: Urban - Alien Super.
【Introduction】
Urban Immortal Cultivation Supreme Shuangwen!
During the Tribulation Period, the great monk Ling Yun's soul penetrated the city, immortal martial practitioners, pills, refining weapons, drawing talismans, and arrays were omnipotent, rising against the sky with an invincible posture, stepping on all directions!
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, The Rebirth of the Earth. The main character, Ling Yun, is an eighteen-year-old high school junior who is hit and killed in a fake traffic accident. He was reborn by the eponymous Great Monk of the Tribulation Period. Xin Lingyun quickly adapted to the new body and the new era, this is an era of thin aura, but for him, it is not a problem at all!
Chapter 2, Heroes Save Beauty. The protagonist washes away the blood and dirt in the river and suddenly feels refreshed. But suddenly a drunken woman came, and after vomiting, she accidentally fell into the river, and if she didn't save her, she would die. At this time, the protagonist has no clothes on him, and it is not very convenient to save people. But he still saved it, and persuaded the other party to leave quickly after saving him. Because he's going to look for the seven obsidian plants on the other side.
Chapter 3, Kicking the Door in Anger. He absorbed a lot of aura from Qiyao Grass, and his body recovered a little, so he hurried to the school. I didn't expect my roommate to lock the door, and I couldn't open it no matter how I knocked it, and it seems that I bullied the former master a lot on weekdays. In a fit of rage, he kicked the door open and asked who had done the good thing.
Chapter 4, stepping on people and slapping them in the face. After kicking the door open, he finds the culprit who locked the door, drags him off the bed, and stomps him under his feet. Someone sneaked up on him from behind and punched him, knocking out two teeth with a slap. The protagonist is so fierce that the other students who watched the play were too scared to dissuade him.
Chapter 5, a slight punishment. He gave the two main culprits a hard lesson, and verbally threatened them, which was a warning to everyone. No one should try to bully him again in the future, otherwise they will bear the consequences. Of course, the leader was not convinced, but he did not dare to resist. It's just that the protagonist will no longer be a role that everyone can bully.
Chapter 6, Anger the School Flower. The story of the protagonist's rebellion against his roommate spread all over the campus the next day, and he also added fuel and vinegar to the school flower. The school girl was furious about these color gossip, but no matter how she explained it, she couldn't stop those people's mouths. The protagonist doesn't wake up until he wakes up hungry, and he turns out a hundred dollars and buys a lot of food. He didn't know anything about the gossip.
Chapter 7, shocking exercises. The protagonist borrows a 50-year-old sandbag from a sports student, and he carries it around the playground and starts running, although not fast, but keeps running. Everyone, whether they were studying indoors or playing ball outdoors, stopped and watched him train like crazy. His sister was the first to burst out of the classroom, tears streaming down her face.
Chapter 8, Ning Lingyu. She is the protagonist's sister, but not her own sister. The protagonist is just a child picked up by Ning Lingyu's mother. In the past, the protagonist would stand up for his sister in everything. But since his identity was revealed, he changed to silently helping. Today, he is being ridiculed for running in the playground with a sandbag. Ning Lingyu definitely didn't agree.
Chapter 9, Gambling (1). Someone started a gambling game about the protagonist's running, and the three major school flowers all poured over. Ning Lingyu is gambling on his brother's dignity, and it doesn't matter if he wins or loses. The other two school girls, one is deliberately angry with Lingyu, and the other feels that the protagonist's demeanor is a bit similar to his brother.
Chapter 10, The Gambling Game (2). In the end, the gambling situation is that the third school flower bets on the protagonist to run one lap, the first school flower bets on the protagonist to run more than five laps, the first evil bet on the protagonist to run four laps, and Ning Lingyu bets that the protagonist can run more than ten laps. All the campus figures are gathered, and the attitude is completely different. It's lively.
[Brief comment]
Bu Zheng, a great god writer, has this book under his name, which seems to be the so-called "one book to seal the gods".
The book was released on December 15, 2012, and was released on February 1, 2013.
At present, the starting point collection is 640,000, the book city collection is 480,000, the number of fans is 1.51 million, and there are 49 league leaders, including 3 in the Silver League, and the cumulative amount of the first fan reward is 3785132 starting coin, which is equivalent to 3 Silver League.
It won the monthly pass championship on July 1, 2016, and reached 10,000 reservations on April 2, 2020.
This is a typical urban immortal cultivator.
Urban Cultivation of Immortals, the most famous is the book "Rebirth of Urban Cultivation of Immortals", the protagonist Chen Beixuan is also a big man in the Tribulation Period, the story of rebirth of the earth. Among them, his most famous line "I, Chen Beixuan, have acted all my life, why do I need to explain to you!" ”
It's just that this book has been banned by itself, and no one knows when it will be released.
And "Dragon Emperor Martial God" is earlier than Chen Beixuan from the time of its release, and it may have been a big hit back then, otherwise it would not have been possible to win the monthly ticket championship. In the first few chapters, hundreds of people rewarded each chapter, which can be seen.
It's just that judging from the current new trend of online literature, the book Dragon Emperor is indeed a bit outdated.
Although it is still being updated, there are obviously not many people chasing more.
First of all, the big guy was reborn in the city and began to cultivate immortals, starting from the campus, all kinds of traditional routines of slapping faces and stepping on people, readers have seen too much.
It's not innovative, but there are still people who love to watch it.
I remember that a while ago, the platinum writer's new book "Saving the World" also started in this way, and it seemed that he wanted to continue the style of "Tiandao Library", but it turned out to be a failure. Even if he changes 100 times a week, it still doesn't help him achieve high-quality products.
This further shows that readers are no longer interested in this kind of routine.
Secondly, the writing is white.
The plot of the Dragon Emperor's book is cliché, and it is similar to "The Sticker of the School Flower", what are the four evil young people on campus, the three school flowers, the brothers and sisters of the opposite sex, etc., which are also the number of bad streets.
The writing can only be said to be smooth, and it is completely out of line with the literary talent. Although online writing doesn't need to be very good, because it is easier to dissuade readers, such a straightforward writing still has a somewhat degrading effect.
Moreover, there are many words in the book that describe the beautiful appearance and color of women, which will detract from the sense of luxury in this book.
As for why the praise of this book can surpass that of platinum authors such as "I Have an Adventure House", "Supergod Mechanic" and "Sword of Dawn", ranking first?
I think it has something to do with the scoring mechanism of Orange Melon Network. The specific judging criteria are not very clear, but they always give people a sense of unreliability. It is far less reliable than the major lists of the starting point itself.
Of course, no matter what the list is, there will be people who oppose it.
This is also why so many readers don't like to read the books on the list, and some readers even left messages asking me not to recommend the works on the list.
In fact, I'm just curious about what makes this book, which has been written for eight years, wonderful.
In fact, this book goes back five years, and it's really wonderful! Now that we look at it, we need to discuss it.
The important thing is that the author is as reluctant to finish as the second generation of fishmen, which is somewhat embarrassing.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
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【Cang's Whispering】
In the last few chapters, I don't want to follow the previous routine and divide it so clearly.
Let's also walk the stream of consciousness and write wherever we want, the reading experience seems to be smoother, and the writing speed can be a little faster.
Pretty good!
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