237. Commenting on "Krypton Gold Sword Immortal Li Taibai"

Today I would like to recommend to you a book about the poet fairy Li Bai.

"Krypton Sword Immortal Li Taibai", author Shushan Xugong, level 3 author.

Classification: Xianxia - Xiuzhen Civilization.

【Introduction】

"Tick... Congratulations to the host for winning the prop "Nine Turns Golden Pill"

"Tick... Congratulations to the host for winning the skill book "Yi Jin Jing". ”

"Tick... Congratulations to the host for winning the skill book "Dugu Nine Swords." ”

I'm sorry, the above are all the protagonists dreaming, even if the soul wears the poet fairy Li Bai, non-chieftain or non-chief, out of non-Europe? Inexistent!

【Golden Ten Chapters】

Chapter 1, Shou Krypton. It's been three years, and it's been three years since Li Bai, who crossed into the parallel world of Datang, and he finally saved enough money for kryptonite. Draw a miracle alone, and the first card is the second-ranked Heavenly Card Overlord's Wrist, which is dedicated to breaking wrists. After that, I still opened a god-defying skill from the first charge of the treasure chest, and I never forgot it.

Chapter 2, Early Morning in Shattered Leaf City. The protagonist gets up early in the morning and practices swordsmanship with his father, and in order to fool his mother, he threatens his father to give money. During breakfast, his father told him that he was going to have a parent-teacher conference today.

Chapter 3, One Piece, I'm up to it. On the way to school, the protagonist and his father make an agreement that as long as they can answer the teacher's questions correctly in the private school, one question is one or two silver. Because his father has a fierce rival, and the other party's son is a scholar.

Chapter 4, Li Ke and Su Wu. Although the protagonist's father Li Ke is good at business, he has been suppressed by Su Wu when he was studying, and now it is Li Bai's turn to be pressed by Su Wu's son Su Can. It's really feng shui in turns, and the father and son are just as miserable.

Chapter 5, Broken Leaf Academy. Broken Leaf Academy is the only academy in the city, and it is still standing after decades of wind and rain, and the merchants in the city have studied here. The teachers of the college are standing tall and have witnessed the growth of countless people.

Chapter 6, Reciting the Rokka. The teacher glanced at everyone present and began to write the question, reciting Rokka. Su Can took the lead and it went very smoothly, and the other students also memorized it. When it was Li Bai's turn, it was completed extremely smoothly.

Chapter 7, The Sun and the Moon. Everyone was shocked by Li Bai's changes, which was completely beyond everyone's imagination. The teacher came up with another problem, and asked Su Can to answer by name, but Li Bai cut off his beard, and then recited the whole text.

Chapter 8, two taels of silver. The teacher was even more satisfied with Li Bai's performance, and the others had nothing to say except shock. When his father came home, he returned to his room in a state of despair, waking up the next day in a daze. And Li Bai didn't sleep well because his father didn't give money.

Chapter 9, Old Godmother +6. His father found a lot of books for Li Bai and placed high hopes on him, hoping that Li Bai would be able to gain fame. Li Bai was also very helpless, the effect of reading books was too good, and "never forget" turned out to be a passive skill. After that, he drew a lottery again, and the result was that six bottles of Lao Gan Ma were in hand.

Chapter 10, Goal, Eleven Companies! The effect of the single draw was not ideal, and Li Bai decided to save money for eleven consecutive draws. But where does the money go? He thought of a brilliant note, the old godmother with scones, it will definitely be popular. But I don't believe.

[Brief comment]

The author has only one book under his name, with 170,000 fans and 1 alliance leader.

The author has reached level 3, relying on the accumulation of bit by bit, which is much more real than those who float silver at every turn and get on the list at every turn.

I think the author is a newcomer!

I was drawn to this book for three reasons.

One is Li Bai in the title of the book.

Whether it is the Qinglian Sword Immortal in the Glory of Kings, or the Poetry Immortal in various histories, or the peerless master Li Bai in Xiuzhen.

With Li Bai as the protagonist, it is still relatively rare.

Maybe there are, but it's rare to be able to write a wonderful story.

The second is krypton.

There are a lot of krypton gacha classes.

No matter what the classification is, you can often see this kind of theme.

Whether it's a great god or a street, they have tried this kind of theme.

Krypton gacha has a distinct benefit.

When you are not a chief, it is pleasant, and when you are a European emperor, you are enviable, you can look at your face alone, and you can even draw money.

The type and nature of the cards can also reflect the author's brain.

This is a great fit for many games nowadays, even the starting point itself to draw cards.

The choice of this theme setting is very topical in itself.

The third is the Sword Immortal.

This is also the most charming and mysterious place of Li Bai, and historical data proves that Li Bai is really a swordsman.

Many of his poems also prove this.

At the beginning of this book, the protagonist Li Bai crossed over, although it comes with its own system, it can still be a doll, and there is no money for the krypton gold lottery.

And he finally saved enough money, and he got very unnatural skills in the first lottery, and he never forgot it, and he saw ten lines at a glance.

This skill helped him change the initial personality of the bear child and start a new life as a genius boy.

Especially after touching the world of cultivating immortals, he realized that he also had the possibility of stepping on the sword immortal.

Later stories show that with the krypton gold system, his cultivation also became smooth sailing.

Moreover, the latest plot book seems to have officially turned into a cultivator, and it is not stiff.

Although there are system problems, I can't see this chapter, but the popularity and topic sense of this book are still quite strong.

Although Li Bai's current level of immortal cultivation is not high, it is very obvious that the wind and water are smooth.

Therefore, this book can also be seen as an invincible stream.

Overall, this book integrates a number of popular elements, the plot is more twists and turns, the chatter is constant, the brain hole is quite big, and the risk of card drawing brings a lot of readability to this book.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

This book is actually quite successful, although there is no unique creativity, and there are no major innovations, but these advantages still make it into the hearts of many readers.

This kind of Xiaobaiwen seems to be simple to operate, but in fact, there are still a lot of dry goods hidden in the dark places in the book.

At least scones with old godmother, I don't know what it tastes like.

There are also the functions of those cards, the customs of the Tang Dynasty, the courses taught in the private school, the dungeon exercises in the immortal cultivation world, the level of the pill formation, and so on.

These require the author to think carefully and make a smooth transition without being completely distorted.

I can't do it anyway.

It can be seen that the author's ability to control the story is very strong.

The details are actually very good, the paragraph layout is staggered, and the character dialogues are naturally not stiff.

It's just that some of the settings are a bit confusing, and there are a few typos, and it's a bit like a novice.

Of course, it may be the same as me, and the memory is not good.

However, the monthly ticket ranking of this book is not very high, with a total of 1431, which may be related to the fact that after Li Bai cultivated immortals, the plot began to be cliché.

After all, when everyone clicks on this book, what they want to see is how Li Bai draws kryptonite, not the extremely traditional cultivation of immortals.

If you lose the initial highlight feature, it is easy to lose the initial reader.

According to the current development trend, this book may not go far, it depends on when the author makes up his mind.

The situation in this book is quite similar to that of "Cang's Whispering".

Someone left a message today, saying that the popularity of my book circle has dropped a lot.

Yes, I've noticed this issue as well.

But there's nothing I can do!

You can't learn from Li Bai to save money and krypton gold lottery, right?