247. Commenting on "My Stealth Battle Ji"
Today I would like to recommend a city to you.
"My Stealth Battle Ji", the author is broken, and the author is level 5.
Category: City - City Ability.
【Introduction】
As soon as I entered the girls' school, it was as deep as the sea, and from then on I was a passerby
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In the era of extraordinary abilities that only belong to girls, a teenager awakens and steps into a new unknown world.
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, Open the door, send the express! The protagonist Jiang Chanji returned to the rented cottage exhausted, he was very hungry, but there was nothing to eat, he wanted to fall asleep, maybe he wouldn't be hungry. At this time, someone outside the door delivered his courier and knocked on the door very persistently. But to the protagonist's ears, it's just a trap, just like when he was abandoned by his parents.
Chapter 2, The Frightened Bird. The protagonist has known the tricks of dodging debts for many years, which is an extremely painful experience, so he doesn't even bother to reissue his lost ID card. Because he was afraid that he would be found by his creditors. When he received the courier and saw the sender's name, he realized that it was sent by his parents. A super-precious potion of invisibility.
Chapter 3, Suspicious Potion. The protagonist's parents also write him a letter saying that the potion is a birthday present for him. The potion was prescribed from the jade of Southeast Asia, and they also translated the potion to the effect, as if they could become invisible and flee with them.
Chapter 4, All or Nothing. The protagonist has nothing left to lose, so he drinks the suspicious potion. Then he had a dream in which there were Dead Mountains, Dead Valleys, Dead Lakes, and nothing else.
Chapter 5, Incognito. The protagonist smells a charming fragrance in his sleep, and when he opens his eyes, he realizes that it is the landlady who is making lard and egg fried rice, which is similar to the golden fried rice in "The Little Master of China", which is very charming. When he got up, he found that the fighter was invisible.
Chapter 6, Momiji Academy. He found out the recruitment advertisement of Momiji Academy, which is the most famous private women's college in the country, most of the students are nobles, and also admits some ordinary girls, as well as girls with superpowers.
Chapter 7, The Triple Trial. Since he planned to go to a women's college, he had to determine whether he could pass the entrance test first, and he gave himself a triple test. Laba vinegar, chili sauce cool oil. The end result was good.
Chapter 8, the use of scissors. The cooling oil was not used, and he did not know what would happen after applying it. He cut his hair short with scissors, and when he walked out of the room, he was immediately caught by the landlord.
Chapter 9, Excess Self-Awareness. The protagonist has a difficult way out of the landlord with his three-inch tongue. He went to the women's college, but saw a girl with an even stranger look and behavior, and it seemed that like him, she was also going to report to Momiji Academy.
Chapter 10, Peers. The girl always walks with her head down, avoiding pedestrians on the opposite side in advance, but always keeping an eye on the main character. She wonders why the protagonist can see her. The two of them are one after the other, and they can be regarded as walking together.
[Brief comment]
About the author
All broken, level 5 author, author of "Pet King" and "My Stealth Battle Ji".
Among them, "Pet King" is very powerful, with a starting point collection of 250,000, a book city collection of 230,000, and a number of 790,000 fans. The author also managed to advance to Level 5 Author with this book.
Synopsis
"My Stealth Battle Ji" tells the story of the protagonist Jiang Chanji who accidentally received a mysterious stealth potion from his parents, resulting in partial invisibility.
In order to survive, he went to apply for a girls' school, because there was food and shelter.
The exam went smoothly and the school doctor was unable to determine his gender.
After that, he did not immediately move into the school, but continued to stay in the rented place, and the landlord was shocked to learn that he had been admitted to Momiji Academy.
Soon after, his parents send another letter to dissuade the protagonist from drinking the potion.
But the fate of the protagonist has been detached from the ordinary, and he is destined to become an extraordinary person and do extraordinary things.
Character characteristics
The protagonist Jiang Chanji is the protagonist I have seen who is rarely harmed by his parents, owes a lot of debts and runs away, leaving the protagonist to be bullied by creditors.
He lived a life of eating and not eating every day, and the spiritual world was so barren that he even thought of dying at the beginning.
finally got the news of his parents, but he made his dignified male body invisible. The letter in the back made up for it even more ruthlessly.
It's no wonder that many readers are saying that there are basically no such parents in reality.
The protagonist is born with hardship and is destined to have an uneven life!
Stylistic features
The author himself summed up that this book is not a transformation text, but an invisibility text.
Morph texts are not allowed to be written now.
The author actually thought of such a magical setting, stealth?
The first few chapters are a bit boring, but when Chen Yiyi appears, the story slowly becomes exciting.
Especially in the section where the school doctor verifies the true body, how many good boys who want to take advantage of the loopholes have been educated by the instructor in physics.
The protagonist is talented and not afraid of testing!
In the back of the story, it is also similar to brushing copies and doing tasks, and the setting of stealth is no longer obvious.
The first order of this book is only 570, and the current starting point collection is 320,000, the book city collection is 2841, the number of fans is 6.78 million, and there are 4 alliance leaders.
It's been on the shelves for more than five months, and the boutique still hasn't been achieved.
Judging from the results alone, this book was thrown ten streets away from the previous book.
I wonder if the author's mentality blew up?
The poor results indicate that most readers don't like the style. The setting of stealth can actually only be regarded as a characteristic of the protagonist.
I hope the author will keep up the good work!
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
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【Cang's Whispering】
This book is recommended by my big fan.
How so?
The book is okay, but the risk is quite high.
If it's an ordinary battle girl, it can also attract many readers who love secondary two anime.
But the special meaning of the battle Ji is not very wise.
I'll admit, it's a good setting.
It can also reflect extraordinary highlights in the world of thousands of online texts.
This setting is actually a dance on the tip of a knife, and the degree of danger cannot be detailed.
There is a chapter, which the author has revised and condensed from 3,000 words to more than 2,000 words, and many details are gone, and the taste is suddenly weakened by several points.
On the other hand, I really admire this author.
"Pet King" was a big hit, and after the end, he didn't continue to write a similar sister book to create his own "pet" series.
And this new book is obviously a pounce, and it is estimated that it will be difficult to save it.
The books pushed in the past few days are not popular works, but new books by some great gods or well-known authors.
There is a common feature, pounce or about to pounce.
I want to remind many new authors that hitting the street is not exclusive to new people, and they will face this problem every time they go up to level 5, great gods, and platinum.
There is no pattern to the preferences of readers.
This year's hot spots will be different from last year's.
When writing, you must first please yourself before you can please your readers.
Let's work together!
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