Today I found a book that I couldn't read.

It's very rare, and it's rare to come across a book that I can't read.

"Sword Master of the Whole People", Persimmon Whale, Level 1 author.

Category: Light - Native Fantasy.

【Introduction】

Normal version introduction:

Times change, aliens invade, old technological systems collapse, and the world is overturned.

After the Great War, human civilization has continued and even prospered under the new supernatural system.

In the dawn of the new era where everyone is high and martial arts are like dragons, the young Zheng Li came to another world, accompanied by swords and spirits, and finally embarked on the road of self-improvement.

Not-so-serious profile:

What's that, this book is quite serious, it's a serious world with a lot of beast girls, ship girls, car girls, and sword girls..... Uh, really serious, trust me.

【Golden Five Chapters】

In the first chapter, my adventure began with a live webcast. Lan Mengqi, a girl from a foreign country, was signed by a live broadcast network company because her rent was about to expire, and she was doing adventurous live broadcasts. As a result, in addition to her cool outfit and slightly shameful Tsukino Hare lines, she also has to face the low-strength Prison Dog Beast. But she doesn't have the equipment, how can she be a hunter. She can't afford to pay for the liquidated damages at all.

Chapter 2, The World of Infinite Travel. This world is a new world after the apocalypse, and I can't tell whether ninety percent of the previous human beings are gone, or gone. As a traverser, Lan Mengqi felt that all the traversal cheats she had seen before were invalid. This world is full of traversers, known as Inhumans, the kind that is very despised. She couldn't do anything, so I'm afraid she had to go and ask the man.

Chapter 3, The Man and the Reality That Gradually Emerges. Lan Mengqi was still forced to accept the adventurous live broadcast career, this time she had to walk on the edge of the cliff, but she quickly fell and was salvaged by the staff from the pool below. And the so-called audience in the live broadcast room are actually people from the Transboundary Administration, and this is really the earth. The rabbit was actually a highly intelligent creature from the outside world.

Chapter 4, The Unlucky Rabbit and the More Unlucky World. Zheng Li is that man, he used to be a public official, and now he has opened a consulting company and takes on any business. Lan Mengqi came to him to accept his various secret tests. That's why there is 67 degrees of bath water, black water is not oil, oil does not explode, technology can slaughter gods, etc. This world doesn't give Lan Mengqi a good impression at all.

Chapter 5, Tradition? The tradition of the town hall is to kill the huge monsters, and use their bones as office space, and the smell is naturally foul. The protagonist was also an employee of the previous place, the former secretary general, and now he is back here, and he has many acquaintances. Some even wanted him to take care of the single-celled orc again. What he didn't expect was that the shark subhuman Awu was waiting for him. This form of meeting does not comply with the regulations.

[Brief comment]

This book will be on the shelves on September 1, 2020, with the first order of 1,000, and the current starting point collection is 15,700, the book city collection is 594, the number of fans is 31,100, and there is a league leader.

The first time I knew about Juggernaut was in Warcraft fifteen years ago. There is a Juggernaut who will be invisible, add critical hits, and the single attack is very powerful. Later, in the game Chenghai 3C, the sword master stealing home is also first-class.

The second time I knew about Juggernaut was in the game DNF. The ghost swordsman is a full-time sword soul, awakened to become a sword saint, and his awakening skills are super dazzling, and the damage is average.

The third time was in League of Legends, that Sword Saint Master Yi. Whether it's jungler, laning, or stealing, it's simply invincible at a certain time. His famous words were: Your sword is my sword.

So, when I saw the name of this book, I thought it was about the story of sword cultivation. In the world of high martial arts, everyone can practice swords and become sword cultivators, and the most powerful sword cultivators are sword saints.

It didn't!

It was only through the circle of book friends that I found out that this book may be related to another game, Sword Spirit.

It's a pity that I haven't played that game, so many plots don't have such a strong sense of substitution.

The other is how to write it. It's weirdly written.

In the first chapter, the whole story is about the female supporting role, whose stage name is Little Rabbit. Engaging in webcasting, from the process of entering the pit to being deceived. In the second chapter, Bunny retravels to other worlds, expecting to grow, but ends up falling back into a webcast created by the same company. In the third chapter, a mysterious figure finally appears. He didn't even give his name in the first place, he was just called the man. Baidu

Then there was a group of bigwigs chatting, chatting for a long time, seven or eight thousand words, most of them chatting.

I remember the first time I saw this kind of dialogue chat, in addition to dialogue, it was in "Global Gaowu" and "Xiuzhen Chat Group".

Someone told me that the style of the eagle is to use dialogue to drive the plot. I don't really like this style. If you like dialogue, why don't you write a script or write dialogue?

As the author himself said, this book is not a single-line story with the protagonist as the main character, but a multi-line development story, a writing technique of peeling onions, layer upon layer.

Therefore, the female supporting role, the female protagonist, and the male protagonist each use three different story lines to promote the entire story plot, and then at a certain ingenious combination point, let them meet and jointly promote the development of the plot.

This is not the same as the multi-line behind-the-scenes stream "The Arrival" that sleeps twice in three days, and the group of bigwigs who love to chat do not have a feeling of being behind the scenes. I always feel that multiple lines can't distinguish between the important and the secondary, and the primary and secondary are a bit confusing.

Another point is that the author's vests are very numerous, very powerful.

According to the evidence, there are already four numbers, this is his fourth number, and I will show you the situation of his number below.

He himself said that every time he changed the author number, he just wanted to try a different writing style.

Actually, I don't think it's necessary to change the number at all, and there is no need to do it in order to see the real data.

He did it, and I felt it did more harm than good. and does not play a role in proving itself.

If he puts all the books under one number, some of the books will catch fire, and some will be extinguished. It's all a normal thing.

Most of the people who changed numbers and repracticed were unfinished or eunuchs who had been too many times, and there was no way to remedy it, so they had to do it as a last resort

Overall, this one is quite difficult to understand. There is no high-quality product.

Let's go and see it, and then come back to exchange ideas.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

Relive the opening.

I read it very carefully.

The author has his own thoughts and thoughts, and his writing is full of knowledge, as well as post-apocalyptic earth technology and the life forms of various races.

This earth is a place where the major planes travel at will, and there are many races.

Humanity is still holding on to its mission to study the characteristics of higher intelligent beings.

Therefore, this book is more inclined to science fiction, or science fiction anime.

I would like to deny the previous conclusion.

Because, it's pretty good!