227. Commenting on "Taiyi"
Today I recommend a new work of Xianxia to you.
"Taiyi", the author is Wuwai Jiangshan, a level 5 author.
Classification: Xianxia - Fantasy Cultivation of Immortals.
【Introduction】
Lay the jade group of immortals, burn incense Taiyi Palace.
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The collision of the two universes devoured, and at the critical moment of victory and defeat, Ye Jiangchuan came here.
Traveling through here, he is often able to come to a tavern that is constantly changing.
The tavern seems to have an infinite number of forms, sometimes an ancient oriental pub, sometimes a modern urban bar, sometimes a futuristic mechanical tavern......
Knights, dwarves, demons, mechanical beings...... Ye Jiangchuan had seen many passers-by from different life forms here, until that day, he met an old man holding a green ox!
Miracle card, Chaos Chess.
Secret treasures, bloodlines, supernatural powers, adventures...... When these were at his fingertips in front of him, Ye Jiangchuan understood that everything was different!
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, Just a teenager. Ye Jiajiang's seventeenth young master is a fool who likes to count and play by the pond. The two little guys talked curiously, and the new little guy took advantage of the fact that no one was paying attention, touched the stupid young master, and wanted to push him into the water. As a result, I went and was pushed down. It turns out that the stupid young master is not stupid, he is a crossing party, and he shows people stupidity in order to hide people's eyes.
Chapter 2, The Blessing of the Saints. The protagonist Ye Jiangchuan's talent is average, his cultivation is slow, and even the golden finger is a bit complicated. It was a tavern where he could come and go as he pleased, and the tavern setting changed every three months. One day, he was blessed by Lear. Later, with the help of a certain power, the tavern sold items at a discount during the Spring Festival.
Chapter 3, Helping the Younger Brother. The protagonist has a sister with the same father and mother, who is married to a young master from another place, and her life is very enviable. She went home to visit her relatives and saw that the protagonist was waiting for her return early, and her heart was very moved, and she did not waste the love she had always had for him. And the aura of the tavern in the protagonist's body has reached 193, money essence, 11.
Chapter 4, Activating Miracles. After her sister left, her mother looted the money left by her sister, and she actually knew that the protagonist was not really stupid, and her heart was all about her youngest son. The protagonist understands this, and finally arrives at the New Year's end when the tavern items are discounted, and after he bows down, he finally buys a common card and traces back to the source.
Chapter 5, Tracing the Origins. Over the years, he has seen nineteen open cards, items, exercises, but he has no money to exchange them. Although this tracing back to the origin is just an ordinary card, it can see through the origin of items and exercises, and point out shortcomings and shortcomings. It's already very rebellious.
Chapter 6, My Father, who is out of tune. The protagonist's father stays overnight in the Wu Niang Courtyard, and the protagonist waits at the door until the courtyard door opens, and the two maids behave abnormally one after another. He showed his father that he was not stupid and wanted to change his cultivation methods.
Chapter 7, Moving Mountains for Mountains. The protagonist finally got this exercise, and went to the sand factory to get a lot of gravel, and in the process of digging for gravel, his own brother refused to recognize him. And after the protagonist started to cultivate, he was fortunate to have the cup of spiritual tea rewarded by his father, otherwise it wouldn't have gone so well.
Chapter 8, my own brother. The next day, the protagonist goes to the sand factory again, and the bear children come here to play again, and his younger brother is among them, and even because his companions laugh at the protagonist's stupidity, his younger brother and his companions have a fight. After that, the protagonist did not come to this sand factory to pan for sand again.
Chapter 9, Dissipating Ice Muscles. The protagonist has been cultivating for three months, and he has been promoted to the triple ice muscle, so he can go to the family to practice combat techniques. He asked the second master to read them all, it seemed that he wanted to use the source to see what the level of these exercises was.
Chapter 10, There is an Endless Sky Demon Slash. After scanning, he selected the footwork "Fish Flying Shallow Bottom", which turned out to be a compulsory subject for the Ye family hundreds of years ago. The second master said some family secrets, and learned that the family had been generous before. There are quite a few enemies.
[Brief comment]
About the author
Wuwai Jiangshan, a level 5 author, is the author of works such as "Immortal Pride", "Divine Sword Eternal", "The Road Alone" and so on.
I don't have a deep impression of him, like a traditional Xianxia author, it is difficult to write new tricks.
Synopsis
The protagonist Ye Jiangchuan likes to watch fish by the pond, and he is stupid and stupid to make people curious.
Whoever played tricks on him and called him a fool was thrown into the pond.
And his golden finger is also more peculiar, it is a tavern, between the world of big brothers, every three months, you can often meet many well-known bigwigs who strayed into the tavern.
He spent a special amount of money here to buy an ordinary-level mental method, but he had extraordinary abilities.
His life has nothing to do with stupidity from now on!
Character characteristics
The protagonist is obviously a gifted time-traveling party, but for the sake of safety, he has never disclosed his identity to the world.
Even if he was indifferent to his biological parents and ridiculed by his younger brother, he still endured it silently.
This forbearance alone is very much in line with the character of the protagonist.
At the beginning of the Xianxia class, it is generally difficult to go against the current, and the layout alone will take a long time. This is very patient with the readers of the school.
Stylistic features
The overall style of the book is on the relaxed side, without too many bloody pictures.
There are quite a lot of elements, werewolves, witches, cultivators, etc., which belong to a magical tavern, which arranges capable people from ancient and modern China and foreign countries, and at a critical time, the starting point.
It's just that if it's not handled well, it's just a messy stew.
At the moment, the feedback from readers seems less than ideal.
Another point, the exercises in this book are deeply influenced by "Qinyuan Spring", I hope to be restrained, don't go too far.
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
The reason why I recommend this book is actually attracted by the title.
Taiyi, I originally thought it was a story about a real person in Taiyi.
As a result, it seems to be something like the Taiyi calendar and the Taiyi Palace.
It can be seen, but there are not many highlights.
If you are also an ordinary person who likes to read Xiuxian, you can take this book away and read it slowly, it is estimated that it will be difficult to go long.
Something not very nice happened yesterday, so what a chapter, almost didn't hold Quanqin.
Later, I made a temporary assault, and it is a very good history.
I didn't think about it, I sent it before.
Although the content overlap is relatively high, some have been modified and some content has been added.
Look at it and it shouldn't be a loss.
Of course, purely from the reader's point of view, reading the book reviews is still a bit uneconomical.
However, this book has one distinctive feature: absolutely infinite flow, extremely interactive, unpredictable future, no one knows where the road is going, very strong fan bonding, relatively real data, and readers have the opportunity to decide the direction of the writing outline.
Well, that's all there is to it.
Advantages: If you write too much, the author's face will be hot, accompanied by a slight cough, palpitation, cold hands and feet, internal urgency, and so on.
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