87. Commenting on "The Lost Narrative Poem"
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"Lost Narrative Poems" by Instant Brilliant, Level 4 Author.
Category:Light-derived fandom。
【Introduction】
There is a lonely lost man, wandering between time and space, traveling for a simple goal.
【Golden Five Chapters】
Chapter 1, Goldfinger Please sign. The protagonist Xia Ran had a nightmare of being chased in the prologue, and woke up sweating. Get up, do the laundry, and be in a daze. His special ability is to dream, all kinds of dreams. In reality and dreams, repeated suffering. Memory, only memory.
Chapter 2, though straightforward, is the reality. Sure enough, the protagonist is a Chinese student who has traveled to the neon country, and he is a scholar. I made a lot of money by relying on the stories in my memory. It's just that what the dream meant. His teacher suddenly looked for him.
Chapter 3, I have very few friends. Mr. Hiratsuka is in charge of the protagonist's study and life, and the two were in contact the year before. The teacher came to him just to let him join the club and make a few friends. In this way, the protagonist's body may get better faster.
Chapter 4, Entry. Ministry of Ministry? Minister Snow under the snow! Just rush to the name of this beautiful heroine.,You should read a few more chapters.。 It's a pity that both of them seem to belong to the character of few words, and after staying for so long, the protagonist asks each other for a name.
Chapter 5, The Last Day. The conversation between the two ended without a hitch. Mr. Hiratsuka came to see the protagonist after class and explained a wave, and the protagonist knew that the beautiful girl minister was the first in the previous grade. And he was the first in the new grade. At this time, he slowly became interested in the book in the girl's hand.
[Brief comment]
After flipping through it, this book is quite interesting.
The protagonist Xia Ran is a crossing party and joins a strange society.
He is a person with superpowers, and originally he just loves to have all kinds of dreams, and the memories in the dreams will be brought into reality.
But one day, his soul entered a white space and activated a new ability to read other people's attribute panels, as well as other inner narrations.
Similar to mind reading.
And the minister of the association, under the snow, is not an ordinary person. What is the specific ability, I searched several places, but I couldn't find it.
As for that Hiratsuka-sensei, there may be some amazing ability hidden.
And this club slowly added a few people.
After one of them joined, he even had to quit the group on the grounds that he wanted to play tennis.
So the protagonist hit the other party with various divine skills such as the Tezuka realm.,Only to learn that it was for girls.。
Since everyone is a student, this reason is completely impossible to refuse.
As for the protagonists Xia Ran and Xuexia, they are still relatively pure male and female classmates.
There is nothing wrong with the plot of this book, and those who often follow it should have seen a lot of stories about neon country witches and gods.
Here I recommend a serialized "Fictional Reasoning", the heroine is a witch who is blind with one eye and one leg, a girl with only one eye and one foot and a man who eats two kinds of monsters.
Back to the book.
The writing is naturally very good, after all, he is a level 4 author who has written many science fiction works.
In a short answer, there are three science fiction works under the name of Instant Glory: "Matrix Game", "The Realm Line Crossed", and "Infinite Adventure Guide", all of which are about 3 million words.
Although I don't quite understand why he put his new book into light, he also chose a genre that he doesn't touch very much.
Maybe it's because light is an umbrella, right?
The characteristic of the writing is that it is slow and gentle.
It is mainly reflected in the character portrayal and environmental rendering.
The dialogue is nonsensical and secondary, although efforts are made to create a neon language habit, and the names of the characters are also exotic.
However, in terms of actual reading experience, it seems that it is really not as famous as those books.
For example, the Twelve Heavenly Kings of the Sea Walker, several of his Japanese-style works, the characteristics are still relatively obvious.
Therefore, this book feels a bit constrained and can't be let go.
The author seems to want to follow the style of Japanese comics, but when the plot is foreshadowed and the background is introduced, the wording seems a bit redundant.
Can't get up!
And the dialogue between the characters, the sense of substitution is a little poor.
So, the author has minimized the dialogue.
And in the field he is familiar with, those wonderful points are at his fingertips.
It can be seen that transformation is really not an easy thing.
【Cang's Whispering】
Actually, I rarely read Japanese-style works, and I have forgotten about the ones I used to push.
However, I love to watch Japanese comics, of course, only the classics.
"Naruto", "Bleach ".
Recently, I occasionally looked at station B.,Learn some new knowledge.,Some.,It's really good.。
In fact, many online authors love to read it, and even people across the country love to read it.
It's not just the "Form 2" people who see it.
After all, Mr. Jue is a professional game anchor. If you say that you can play for a while, it will be more than 5 hours.
Nowadays, in the information age and the era of self-media, many people have incomparably rich identities and occupations.
For example, don't look at me as just a street fighter.
I'm still a self-media person on the street!
Vicious, right?
If you haven't seen all kinds of tweets written by me on major browsers, it's impossible.
Because, since I sold my soul to God, I have recently become angry.
Of course, the fire is a little bit.
This short story will continue to be done.
I found that after the book building was sent out, it really attracted a lot of author friends who passed by.
They trusted me and left me 7 books!
It makes me so stressed that I can't finish it in a week.
Even my best friend who opened the light for "Mirror Strike Giant" is here.
I'm relieved that feng shui is in turn, and now it's my turn to take his book.
Sell it first, I don't necessarily really try his book.
Because I am a book pusher with a soul, my soul is here.
Therefore, I hope to recommend some works that are slightly famous or interesting.
Not necessarily.
People, the mood is very fluctuating, everything is uncertain!
Since embarking on the road of writing, no matter what is written or how the grades are, people have become a little more sensitive.
Many times, I'd rather be an empty whistling dog who just wants to look at the sky stupidly and think about nothing.
"Lost Narrative Poems", please have time to take a look, even if you don't like the stories in the book, it's not a loss to learn some writing skills.
Everyone has their own story.
His style of writing is really suitable for us in ordinary life.
It's also because I've watched too many irritable works recently, and my mood has been affected a little.
Look at this book, it can indeed nourish the mind, which is very good.
If you also have all kinds of small troubles, you might as well go with me to "Lost Narrative Poems".
Refills, lovely readers.
Come, let me draw you a dragon~