140. Commenting on "Mythological Screenwriters"

POV, the point of view character writing technique, can freely choose the most abundant angle in the narration of the same thing, which greatly strengthens the flexibility of the narrative, and the author can adjust the order of each POV at any time while telling the story, which brings great convenience to the later revision of the full text, the addition or deletion of the plot.

There are thousands of online articles, and the one that can play with POV is two nights in three days.

He also accumulated many years of writing experience before he wrote his current grades.

If he hadn't done his job properly, he would have been able to write more wonderful stories in this field.

The book I introduced to you today is also trying to write in this area.

"Myth Screenwriter", author trouble to close the moon, level 1 author.

Classification Science Fiction - Evolutionary Variation.

【Introduction】

Behind the scenes.

As a screenwriter, Wei Yuan originally just wanted to make up a good story, but accidentally started the mythological era.

In the land of the East, the Tao and Buddha competed, the ten thousand laws reappeared, and the first emperor of the ages woke up from the mausoleum.

On the streets of Tokyo, the wind roars, evil spirits crawl out of hell, and a hundred ghosts walk at night.

Under the Tower of England, ravens surrounded by darkness flutter their wings, and ghost riders patrol the night.

In the west of the world, the gods woke up from ancient times, and the hero king took the oracle to conquer the world.

In the desert of the Middle East, the pharaoh pushed open the thousand-year-old coffin, and the sphinx roared in the sky.

【Golden Five Chapters】

In the first chapter, the story begins. In the parallel world, the protagonist Wei Yuan packed up his equipment and headed to Zhongshan. After a year of preparation, he was going to start writing the script. The system appeared, and the wonderful value was limited, so he could only shrink the cultivation of all things that could absorb the aura to Zhongshan Mountain. The pen fell into a storm, and the vision rose.

Chapter 2, The Appearance of the Saint. Taiyi Peak Building Viewing Platform, many tourists saw a cow out of the void with their own eyes, Lao Tzu appeared, chanted the Tao Te Ching, rode the bull to the west, and the purple gas came from the east. Wei Yuan hid in the shadows and named the script the appearance of the saint. I don't know if it was an accident, Lao Tzu seemed to glance at him.

Chapter 3, The Great Age. Zhong Shan's aura was revived, everyone could cultivate, and Wei Yuan could clearly perceive that his strength was improving. He had seen a news story before, and using the script, he found out the reason for the girl's suicide. Here, he will write the script to bring the girl back to life.

Chapter 4, the wind rises at the end of the mountain. Zhongshan Reiki Rejuvenation can allow the soul to condense the soul body and restore the consciousness before death. There is revenge, there is revenge. He wants to wake up the world. The purpose of the unjust soul is very clear, but it does not harm the innocent.

Chapter V, Public Security Bureau. The unjust soul demanded Zhang Yu's life, and the latter's parents hurried to the public security bureau. The appearance of the saint on Zhongshan during the day has already caused a headache for the people of the Public Security Bureau, and there is a case of unjust souls asking for their lives.

[Brief comment]

First of all, it is certain that the author of this book is a veteran and belongs to the new number of new books.

It doesn't matter who the tuba is!

The book was released on February 28 and is available today.

At present, the collection is 370,000, and it is being strongly promoted on the homepage.

Looking at the latest chapter, the number of people interacting has decreased dramatically.

Therefore, the first order situation is not optimistic, and it is not easy to reach 2000.

Second, talk about the plot.

This book can be read as a collection of short stories.

Because of the POV writing, the protagonist acts as the mastermind behind the scenes, showing the myths and legends of this parallel world through one story after another.

The characters are not very connected to each other.

All kinds of bizarre and mysterious events, intricately intertwined.

The main character uses the system to write the story, such as the appearance of the Kanesan saint, the revival of the aura, the revenge of the evil spirits, the legend of Tokyo, the Mayan civilization, European mythology, and so on.

Under his pen, they appear in turn.

The Public Security Bureau is responsible for dealing with the matter, but most of them are powerless.

What exactly the main character's purpose is for doing this is unclear for the time being.

In addition, the story is transferred to Europe, the sense of substitution is slightly weakened, and the attraction becomes not enough.

The author said that the story will be transferred back to China after it is put on the shelves.

But the big backstory that can be drawn has been written by him almost as well, and I'm afraid it will be difficult to write a more brilliant plot.

Again, talk about the characters.

The protagonist Wei Yuan, known as the "magic pen Ma Liang", relies on a pen and a book to build these stories.

He himself went directly behind the scenes and rarely appeared, making the character image unclear.

The setting of playing the mastermind behind the scenes, the creator, is easy to make the reader unable to find a feeling.

The stories he made up were also too concise, and many details were not fully displayed, which also hurt the reader's enthusiasm for reading.

This is also a major disadvantage of POV writing.

The protagonists of the three scum films, although they are also hidden behind the story, still show their personal charm through strong logical reasoning at critical moments.

This book does a somewhat inferior job in this regard.

Still, the way this book is written is encouraging.

If you don't have any writing skills and cultural heritage, you really can't get it.

Therefore, today this book is on the shelves, and interested friends can subscribe to a wave to see if the plot can be reversed.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

This book will be on the shelves on April 17, and the first order data is estimated to be out at noon on the 18th.

My forecast is for the first order of 2000, and the author's own target is 1600.

New authors will not have such a clear understanding of the first order.

The quality of the book is really good, with tight details and a bright pace.

The author's desire to survive jumped on the page, and the first three sentences of the first chapter pressed the introduction for the book.

In the author's testimonial of the first ten chapters, the slogan is shouted very loudly.

It's just that these still haven't been saved, and a few chapters have been ruthlessly blocked.

The author said that the beginning borrowed from "Making Up Myths", and I also went to look for it, and it was very intense.

No wonder it's been completely blocked.

This shows that there is still a high risk in this kind of theme.

Therefore, the author set the story in a parallel world, and various key names were hidden.

But there are still a lot of places, a little bit intense.

These plots are certainly a good reading experience for readers.

But for the author, it's not a good thing.

So, if the author can see my article, be sure to pay more attention.

There are some plots, if you can't touch it, you won't touch it, it's fine.

In the world, there are more things to write, and there is no need to keep your book at high risk.

Writing this, I still envy these open-minded authors in my heart, who can always write some good stories.

Finally, I also hope that my book can be seen and liked by more people.

Especially that adult is so kind that he has already given six recommendations.

If this is placed in other categories, at least it will be pushed to the homepage.

The collection can break at least 20,000.

But it doesn't matter.

The results of a book cannot be judged by the data of a certain stage.

Chapter 139 is an obvious counterexample.

I hope that "Cang's Whispering" can become a unique Xiumei from the starting point!

Xiu'er, show up~