The book I want to recommend today is by the same author as the previous one.

It's a fulfillment of last year's promise!

"Meteor Chasing the Moon", Author: Uneducated dog.

Category: Martial Arts - Traditional Martial Arts.

【Introduction】

In the distant Uighurs, a young man, Batur, met an unreasonable Han girl, and although it was only in a hurry, he left her shadow in his heart.

Will they ever see each other again in the future? Fate, where will the two go?

【Ten Chapters Sample】

In the first chapter, the white clothes are rampant. The main character, Amir, is the youngest batur (warrior) in the village, and is good at using bows and arrows. When he went out hunting, he met a girl in white who was surrounded by the villagers. The girl can't speak, and the protagonist communicates with her on behalf of the villagers, but unexpectedly the girl is arrogant and unreasonable.

In the second chapter, the edge is seen in the green forest. The girl lets go of the person at her feet and prepares to leave, but the protagonist wants to take her to the official. The protagonist chases the girl into the woods and shoots several arrows in a row, forcing the girl to draw her sword and face each other. The protagonist, if you didn't have a halo, I'm afraid you would have hung up a long time ago.

In the third chapter, the meteor golden fire is in danger of being killed. The protagonist and the girl fought, the longbow was broken by the opponent's fiery meteor hammer, and the dagger couldn't hurt the other party in the slightest, and the whole person was walked by the girl. At this point, the protagonist listens to the sound and tells that sixteen horses are approaching.

Chapter 4, Fighting the Enemy. When the bandits attacked, the two stopped fighting and returned to the town to report the news, but the martial Hui people were unwilling to leave, but prepared to fight the bandits together.

Chapter 5, the birth of calves and tigers is difficult to prevent. The girl decided to stay with the town name to fight the bandits, and took the initiative to take on the command, and the defense seemed to be clear-eyed. The protagonist cooperates with the maiden and successfully overturns the bandits' horses with a tripstring.

Chapter 6, unite to fight the strong. The girl fights the bandit leader alone, and the means are endless, and the protagonist assists the townspeople in cutting down several people. And the townspeople are under the defense of the girl, and the bravery is abnormal, and the menacing bandits are defeated. Seeing that the leader of the bandits was about to escape, the girl suddenly whistled.

In the seventh chapter, the white carved golden hammers fly with each other. A white eagle responded and went straight to the leader of the bandits, pulling him off his horse. The girl went to chase after the horse, and the meteor hammer in her hand showed her skill again, and the leader of the bandits was dragged to death. The townsfolk celebrate their victory, and the maiden eats and drinks as she unleashes her arms. Haha, good shoulder!

Chapter 8, don't hold the reins at any time. Full of wine and food, the girl prepares to leave, and the protagonist is ordered by the elder to send her twenty miles. The two talked heartily, and there was a sense of parting. After exchanging gifts, they finally separated, I don't know if this goodbye is a permanent secret, haha~

Chapter 9, gossip pushes itself. The protagonist returns home and is seen by his family. At this time, a military master came to visit, saying that the general Zhengdong invited the protagonist to the military camp to reward him for his contribution to defending the town. When they returned home again, their mother and sister joked after hearing about the process: Let's fall in love.

Chapter 10, suddenly changing clothes overnight. The protagonist was called into the barracks, made contributions within half a year, was promoted to the general's personal guard, and bought real estate, and his family was naturally overjoyed. It's just that the protagonist has a faint sadness, and the girl in white planted a seed in his heart.

[Brief comment]

The dog is my buddy (I think so).

He is particularly fond of martial arts, and he is a martial arts practitioner like Gu Mozhi, who is proficient in knives, guns, sticks, axes, knives and forks.

The most valuable thing is that the traditional martial arts are also extraordinary.

After reading it, I found that this book is more vernacular than his previous one, and therefore more easy to understand, perhaps to cater to the market.

It's just that it doesn't look like it's going to work out yet.

The author is especially good at delicate depictions of fights.

Martial arts moves, weapon settings, character personalities, and story lines all have great wisdom far beyond ordinary authors.

Don't look at the author's name, there is no culture, in fact, the piano, chess, calligraphy, painting, dance, and music are all at your fingertips, and the means of flirting with girls are also leveraged.

I still remember that when the two of us were fighting in the exhibition circle, his high-quality posts made me dizzy, and I could only sigh with admiration.

On this beautiful day, I will give a small book review to the dog classmates to help him order the next book for the first time, haha~

As a result, I was milked to death.

The new work has not been seen.

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt for myself!

【Cang's Whispering】

Judging from the comparison of his two books, he chose a more vernacular style, the language is more down-to-earth, there are delicate daily life in the plot twists and turns, and the update speed is also very stable.

All in all, it stands to reason that the results should be a little better than the previous one.

Actually, no, even the recommended seats are relatively few.

At the time, I didn't ask him what was causing this.

Now that I think about it, combined with some of the articles I read before, I have summarized some small experiences without authorization.

When a newcomer writes, he often starts writing directly as soon as his brain is hot, and there is no complete outline.

This leads to a scattered story structure, chaotic pacing, chaotic updates, mood riots, and a really bad ending.

Some people will say that I just want to let the wild ideas run wild and not want to be confined to a small framework.

At present, the only well-known authors who can write books without an outline are great god writers who sleep twice in three days.

People are multi-line development, and there are many side hustles, so there is no need to toss desperately in the stall of online articles.

He has a wide range of hobbies, a unique writing style, and a storyline that is more exciting and agile than his brain.

His style can't be imitated by others!

In addition, many newcomers' books have relatively bland stories, or they write very hilarious, but readers can't feel it, commonly known as self-hilarity.

The result of writing in this way is to move myself and complete myself.

From a business point of view, it was a failure.

Judging from my personal dreams, in fact, from the moment I dared to publish a book, my dream had come true.

There are also some humanities who have more serious diseases, like to chew words and use gorgeous rhetoric to create a beautiful environment and psychology.

Why is Wenqing sick? Is it bad to drag the text? Can't you show off your culture?

Of course!

There is a big difference between traditional literature and online literature.

The online article pays more attention to the delivery of cool points and the speed of rhythm.

When readers are attracted by your beautiful words, they will suddenly realize, why not buy a collection of essays?

Reading online articles, many people care about the wonderful plot and the perfect story, text?

Not that important!

So many people will advise newcomers not to care too much about the writing, a good plot and setting are more important.

Magical brain holes can often bring unexpected surprises.

For example, I recently saw "I Vouch for a Demon Personality" and "Weeds Hanging on My Body", which tell the story of snake cultivation and grass cultivation, which are more attractive than ordinary traditional fantasy texts.

Having said all this, lovely author friends, how many arrows have you been hit in the knee?

Look at me!

The straw boat borrows arrows, and I am the straw boat!