Today I would like to recommend a book on the theme of Journey to the West.

"If I Cultivate Immortal Mana Qi Tian", a chili pepper essence, level 4 author.

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【Introduction】

Awakening in Taigo.

You look at the Ming Ting Sutra in your hand, you start studying, you enter cultivation, you raise the Ming Ting Sutra to 100% Great Perfection realm, you open the Heavenly Eye.

You have elevated the Five Spiritual Veins to the Great Perfection, which can be heard clearly from hundreds of meters away.

You have cultivated the "Pulse Sutra" and have begun to shift the meridians and dislocate.

You have elevated the Sutra of Immortal Immortality to the Great Perfection, adding five hundred years of life!

You practiced swordsmanship and swordsmanship.

You looked at the "Zhou Yi", "Hug Puzi", "Washing the Marrow Sutra", "Ziwei Doushu", "Qimen Dunjia" in your hand......

Cultivating immortals?

When you suddenly look back, you have become an immortal.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, Slaying the Dragon. The protagonist Li Hongru is in class at the Simen Pavilion, and a friend sends a small note, telling him that Wei Zheng is going to kill the dragon at noon at three o'clock this afternoon. The protagonist is a time-traveling party.,Comes with a system.,It's not very useful.,You can make some small inventions.。 For example, use a telescope to see how to slay a dragon.

Chapter 2, Fairy Powder. Friend Rong Caijun is a child of a family, and the protagonist is the son of a poor family, and the two have made friends purely by fate. It's just that Rong Caijun was asked by the teacher because of his frequent passing of notes, and he barely flickered over. The teacher got out of class on time, and everyone wanted to go and see the dragon slaying. The two protagonists went home to get the binoculars, and with the fairy powder of Rong Caijun, this wave is stable.

Chapter 3, Emperor Jianzhenguan. The location found by the two protagonists is hundreds of meters away from the noon gate, and with the blessing of the telescope, they can barely see the scene at the noon gate. The sword that Lord Wei invited was actually from the Emperor, and the flickering light made the eyes of the two of them hurt. After the immortal powder was smeared, they saw Lord Wei Yuan Shen flying into the sky with the Emperor Sword and coming to the white dragon.

Chapter 4, The Eye of Heaven that is temporarily opened. The two protagonists took turns using the binoculars, and their eyes still hurt terribly, but they still saw Lord Wei's Yuan Shen grow larger, cut down the huge dragon head of the white dragon, and the red blood rain landed at the noon gate, and the dragon head was taken away by the guards with red silk. Some people want to intervene to kill the dragon, but in the end, they can only take the dragon corpse away.

Chapter 5, "Ming Court Sutra". After slaying the dragon, Rong Caijun understands more and more that the power of the telescope in the protagonist's hand can allow ordinary mortals to see the transcendent. The protagonist is also very distressed about whether he can only use fairy powder for the Tianyan that he temporarily opened. He learned many secrets of his cultivation from his friends, and finally made a deal with him to watch the Ming Court Sutra with a telescope.

[Brief comment]

A chili pepper essence, a level 4 author, author of two books, "Heroic Invincible Grand Master" and "If I Cultivate Immortal Mana Qi Tian". First Reading Network

The former is 5.2 million words, which lasted two years and four months, with an average of 180,000 words updated every month and 6,000 words updated every day, which is not fast, but it is very stable.

And "If I Cultivate Immortal Mana Qitian", which was put on the shelves on August 14, the first order was only 270, and as of today, in less than two months, 630,000 words of paid chapters have been updated.

An average of 300,000 words per month, updated every day.

In my opinion, no matter how much writing or plot a book is, this amount of updates alone is very admirable. Especially under the premise of poor grades, he can still update 10,000 words a day.

The data in this book is not ideal, but the author is in a good state of mind at the moment, and the plot is also very stable.

This is actually a Journey to the West fandom, but the protagonist has an additional game system. The early stage of the system is very weak, so that the protagonist has been in this time for more than ten years, living a mortal life, and can only make some small inventions, show his extraordinary, and get the opportunity to read.

An accidental watch of Lord Wei slaying the dragon made his system change and began to embark on the path of cultivating immortals.

Personally, I feel that the writing of this book is still okay. It's just that the early stage is not cool enough, the focus is not prominent enough, the character image is a little blurred, and the system characteristics are not obvious.

In other words, the author has a certain amount of writing skills and updates, but his ability to create contradictions and highlights is still poor. Therefore, I am afraid that it will be difficult for this book to become popular for the time being.

Also, the title of the book is quite interesting, it reminds me of the old immortals of the stars. checked it, and the title of the book "If I Cultivate Immortals with Boundless Mana" was occupied.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

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【Cang's Whispering】

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