70. Comment on "After Falling Asleep"

Today I recommend a resurrected suspense work to you!

"After Falling Asleep", the author is the right way, the author of level 4.

Category: Suspense - Wonderful World.

【Introduction】

The spirits wandered, and the worms scattered.

Surrounded by the invisible, whispering in the ears where does it come from?

Abominations await in the abyss.

There is no wind, and the ends of the hair cannot be blown by the corners of the clothes.

Mu Su stared at the abyss, and the abyss was watching at him.

Until it began to take off his pants -

The abyss had to look away in embarrassment.

【Golden Five Chapters】

In the first chapter, the man he is back. In the Milky Way-Solar Ring-14 Ring Zone, a psychiatric hospital has a patient who has escaped and forced security guards to trade with it. In the park, a mentally ill person fools a passer-by into claiming to be a magician. Get the other party's tablet and go to the opposite alley to solve a certain free P man. After robbing the money, he fled. In reality, a man named Mu Su is entering the game of "After Sleeping".

Chapter 2, I want to tip. In the game world, Mu Su couldn't choose the single-player nightmare level, so he had to choose the multiplayer casual mode. The game quest is rather bizarre and destined to happen with many unspeakable stories. And the first question the protagonist faces is where he is and where is home.

Chapter 3, I want a little sister. The game is set to swap genders, so when the protagonist meets a woman standing on the street, he has to be scared away. Later, I met the man standing on the street again! The teammates in team mode have found the protagonist, and their names are all vicious, and the worst is Jun Moxiao.

In the fourth chapter, when the identities of men and women are reversed, Mu Su decides to stand up and become Bichi. The four of them turned out to have returned to the earth four hundred years ago, and although it was still a game world, they had to go deep into the game and could not be recognized by the natives.

Chapter 5, the location is the penultimate row by the window, rightfully so. The four of them came to the school and were stopped by the teacher, but fortunately the protagonist was clever and everyone got through in confusion. When I entered the classroom, the seats were also extremely particular, but fortunately, one of the players was a professor of history and knew a lot.

[Brief comment]

This book has been through a lot of wind and waves!

It was originally a book in December 2017, but I don't know when it was sealed or what was unsealed.

The re-upload time was December 2019, and now in just one month, 1 million words have been uploaded, which belongs to the refined version.

Many of the best parts of the original book are gone, and what remains is serious text that can be exposed to the sun, except for the occasional few fish that slip through the net.

The only thing that is difficult to understand in the new book is the chapter titles. The weird chapter name makes people completely unable to touch the north, and even suspects that this genuine version is pirated.

It's too much, for old readers, you need to subscribe again! It's brutal!

As for the content of the book, you can use one sentence to replace the joy of neurological patients, if you are serious, you will lose, if you guess the plot, you will lose, if you can keep up with the author's brain circuit, you will lose, and if you write blindly, it is estimated that you will soon be blocked again, and the editor in charge is crazy to recommend it.

As for the writing, it's good! No major speech problems and typos!

I can't say too much about this book, just remember that it has something to do with "The Biography of Mu Susu".

【Summary】

The revival of this book and the rediscovery of the light of day is really a change of editor, not an eye-opener!

God has been watching this book, and the catastrophe will come again at any time!

I'm Kura Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Crash Demon King"!

【Cang's Whispering】

First of all, I want to make a statement.

This author is a man of great talent.

Some people say that he writes gui and ranks in the top three on this site, and the writer is a mess.

I don't agree with it, but I don't want to argue with it either.

Reading books is extremely subjective.

Personally, I like his writing style, which is changeable, weird, and whimsical.

It feels like he doesn't have any constraints when creating, and he only needs to rely on the countless inspirations in his head to blend up the storyline.

Although he did not directly say that there is no outline.

I believe he has an outline, it's just that the outline is overwhelmed by his talent.

He has a strong ability to control the rhythm and the logic is very tight.

Although the book has been overhauled, you can still feel the surging excitement and blood boiling of the original text.

And the sense of substitution in this book is very strong, full of thrillers, and it is not a joke at all.

I've tried to read so many suspense works, and there are not many that can make me creepy at any time.

I must mention here that the big guy who pushed me before wrote "Urging the Demon King", thank you again.

His enthusiasm for helping others is even more powerful than obtaining the "Helping Spirits for Joy System".

Of course, his ability to operate works is also quite outstanding.

This point was also picked up by my other friend Emma, by name.

How can you say such a thing?

Although it is not recommended and advocated, there are too many rich people who can't stand it.

Speaking in good conscience, I also want to run this short story well, and the money of the Silver Alliance is already working hard to save.

However, now the reader's vision is really too tricky, and the Silver Alliance can only change some psychological comfort.

The topic has extended here, and I can't help but mention the silver alliance that another good friend gave me yesterday.

The book is called "The Rich Begin in Spain" and it hit the shelves yesterday.

It turned out that it was because it was going to be put on the shelves!

I've already contributed to the first order, and nothing else is gone~

About operations,

Some people like to serve the Silver Alliance when they send out books, and they can add some collections;

Some people like to wait for the Silver Alliance when they are on the shelves, and they can add some first orders;

Some people like to be at the end, some people like to compete for the list, and some people are anytime, anywhere.

Poverty limits my imagination!

So, forget about the Silver Alliance, what I can't understand is the Golden Alliance.

In fact, purely from the perspective of the effect of publicity, a golden alliance is not as good as a silver every day for ten consecutive days.

Of course, that big golden treasure chest is really shiny.

I'm very satisfied with this.

Finally, a pure book review that was originally only 1,000 words was turned into 2,000 words.

Actually, I also want to sell more miserable and attract a little readers.

Oh, on that note, just checked the article about kittens recommending my book, and it's a pretty good read.

Of course, it also brought me more than a dozen collections.

Therefore, this wave down, we are a win-win situation.

This is a faint gentlemanly elegance compared to those pyrotechnics.

This hot hint, I'll take a screenshot of the night owls who haven't slept for a while, hoping that they can learn from it.

"Gou Fugui, don't forget!"

Give it to them who have no books to review!

Kitten, Ole gives ~

Of course, I will also be more enthusiastic and creative, and I will talk to you well.

Thank you again to my editor-in-charge, for your awesome vision!

Without further ado, I can't let a dozen of my readers subscribe for nothing!

Please chase "After Falling Asleep"!