319. Commenting on "Soul Patch"
The book recommended today, the most attractive thing to me is that the introduction is crazy enough!
"Soul Patch", Cash, Level 1 Author.
Classification suspense - mystery suspense.
【Introduction】
Brain hole, brain hole, brain hole...... This article is full of brains!
Relying on the fascinated logic and fugue-like ideas, it makes groups of readers ...... Uh-huh?
Unbelieving book lovers can challenge themselves and see which chapter they will persevere?
Remember the book review district FG unlocks the custom figure around the work~
【Golden Ten Chapters】
The first chapter became the carrier. The main character, Wen Jie, was struck by lightning when he came home from work, and he obtained the soul patch system, which needs to be activated by completing tasks. Because I didn't sleep well at night, I didn't pay enough attention to the leader's ass when I went to work, which caused a bad impression. The colleague suddenly talked about the tragedy that happened in the substation, and the protagonist remembered the picture given by the system yesterday, and couldn't help but feel a chill in his back.
Chapter 2, with words on the face. The deceased in the picture is called Yang Shanshan, and when the protagonist went to the sub-bureau to deliver materials, he saw each other and was deeply fascinated. When he answered the system questions, he didn't answer them correctly and couldn't get reinforcement. And Yang Shanshan's death reminds the protagonist of bad childhood memories.
Chapter 3, Butterfly Rope Buckle. When he was five years old, his father died unexpectedly, and he was wearing a butterfly rope buckle on his hand, which left an indelible shadow on the protagonist's psychology. The system is turned on, showing the scene of the night Yang Shanshan was killed in front of the protagonist. In reality, the protagonist is in a conference room. In the end, before he could reach the scene, the crime had already been committed. He only saw the murderer's cold eyes.
Chapter 4, The Pit Daddy System. It takes six hours for the system to turn on again, and the protagonist knows that he has a bad emotional intelligence and always deals with not having a relationship with the leader. He hurried home and finally arrived at the scene of the crime before the killer committed the murder. It's just that the patch provided by the system is to dissuade, how can he dissuade the murderer from committing murder.
Chapter 5, Burlaries. Although he tried to dissuade the murderer, the effect was not good, and the system had already determined that the correction had failed, and he had to temporarily withdraw from the system. In reality, he discovers that someone has broken into the house and stolen his computer. He immediately called the police and waited for the police to come to the door.
Chapter 6, Violence Patch. The police arrived at the scene and searched everywhere, but found no useful clues. The system starts the correction task again, and the protagonist chooses the brute force patch this time. In the picture, he prepared dumbbells and rushed to the scene ahead of schedule. At the moment when the murderer appeared, he successfully injured the murderer.
Chapter 7, it turned out to be you. He took off the murderer's mask and mistook the murderer's appearance as Yang Shanshan's colleague Zhao Xiaolong. But the mission failed again. After six hours, the protagonist enters the crime scene again, and after injuring the murderer, he takes the initiative to say that he is actually the murderer.
Chapter 8 is a word. The protagonist gets the murderer drunk and learns from the murderer why he has always hated beautiful women. The protagonist enters the murderer's childhood and changes what should not have happened. But when the protagonist went to work the next day, he still learned from his colleagues that Yang Shanshan was still killed by the murderer, but it was only a day late.
Chapter 9, a weirdo. The protagonist had to speculate that it was not the obese woman who insulted the young Zhao Xiaolong, but someone else. The police have a new clue that the person who stole the protagonist's computer is a mysterious middle-aged man who controls a night-vision drone. And the protagonist, in front of the leader, messed up again.
Chapter 10, Life Rewritten. The protagonist enters Bruce Chao's childhood again, and the fat woman is a good person, but the protagonist himself misunderstood. Zhao Xiaolong was attacked by a pervert disguised as a woman, and even the protagonist was knocked unconscious. In reality, the protagonist discovers that Zhao Xiaolong really came to the unit to look for him.
[Brief comment]
About the author
Cash, a Level 1 author, he himself said that he has written several books and traveled to several channels.
What female frequency, urban, suspense, all of them have not been found.
There is only this one at the moment.
It was put on the shelves on June 1, the first order was 810, and the boutique was reached on July 13.
The starting point collection is 3.65 million, the book city collection is 172, the number of fans is 190,000, and there are 2 alliance leaders, one of whom is the Silver League.
The author is very powerful, in one year, he wrote three books, and one of them was also a high-quality product.
No blowing, no black!
It is very likely that this silver alliance is a reward by itself, or a certain treasure package.
Generally speaking, books that are normally high-quality will be very lively in this chapter of the previous chapters.
And this chapter of this book is very deserted, and the book circle is well received.
This month's fans are also a water of neatness.
Synopsis
This book mainly tells the story of the protagonist Wen Jie who obtained the soul patch system after being struck by lightning.
This is a very complex system that can reproduce crime scenes, solve the problems of the parties and correct the trajectory of their lives according to different patch schemes.
In order to save Yang Shanshan, who was killed in the sub-bureau, the protagonist entered the system no less than five times. He entered the childhood world of the murderer Zhao Xiaolong and killed the villain who was disguised as a woman.
The system is linked one by one, turning the originally smooth and easy-to-understand plot into a complex suspense detective.
Character characteristics
The protagonist Wen Jie, this is the name of idols, right?
He is an intern with a little low emotional intelligence, and he has always wanted to pat the big leader's ass, but he always slapped the horse's leg.
Encountering a crime scene with repeated twists and turns, a lack of good response, and always wasting the system's six-hour cooldown.
In the end, he resolved the violence with violence.
Stylistic features
The style is generally a mess.
Actually, the author can obviously write this book into a small white text, and a little routine is fine.
But he insisted on getting involved with this system that was not smart enough, tossing and turning, not only the readers were tired of watching, but also tired of writing themselves.
Maybe he didn't have the tone of the book in mind, and he thought of writing it wherever he wanted.
In terms of plot, it's too messy, and I can't find a suitable idea for him to help him sort it out.
Moreover, what affects the reading experience is that each chapter is divided into three subsections, switching back and forth in the form of three scenes.
Reading this kind of book is very hard.
At first, I thought the synopsis was hilarious and eye-catching.
As a result, I really wanted to laugh.
Big brother, let's have fewer routines and tell stories well, okay?
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
This book is more laborious.
The Silver Alliance is very suspicious.
High-quality standards are hard to come by.
The story is messy.
Language points, difficult to compliment.
I'm also a reader who is invincible, but I didn't expect to turn over in this little gutter.
He may be trying his best to create a sense of suspense, but it is more of a sense of mystery and doubt.
He may have wanted to show off his reasoning skills, but in the end, he solved it with a knife.
At this point, I have every reason to believe that this author friend is a newcomer.
Alas, it is really enviable that writing can be made into a masterpiece in a year.
If you think my words are too mean, you can try it yourself.
Let's verify the anti-toxicity of each~
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