353. Commenting on "The Enemy Country Within Reach"
What I recommend to you today is the work that has just finished "The First Sword of the Starting Point".
"Within Reach, the Enemy Country", Riding the Wind and Sword, a great god writer.
Category: Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.
【Introduction】
"I don't read much, don't lie to me, the meaning of the enemy country is clearly that I stand here and there is no movement, and I can destroy a hostile country with the power of one person."
"However, as I recall, the meaning of this phrase seems to be to describe that when two people are very close, the other person is useless even if there is a country behind him."
"Fake." Baili Qingfeng raised his sword flatly, and the electromagnetic field formed by the operation of the thunder true qi burst out with a huge ampere force, pushing the superconductor red god steel in his hand to tear the atmosphere at twenty times the speed of sound, shooting an aircraft carrier three hundred kilometers away, and the flames of the explosion of the powder magazine rose to illuminate the sky.
"Look, I'm just a stone's throw away."
……
A world where there is no cultivation, no ability, no magic, and a little bit of true qi, a world where warriors are educated.
【Golden Ten Chapters】
Chapter 1, Passers-by. The protagonist Baili Qingfeng will not die, and the nuclear bomb will not die. This time, he felt that his life was threatened, and it was a martial artist. The protagonist is actually just passing by and being injured by mistake. But the warrior ignores him and destroys him. So he decided to practice martial arts, because he began to fear death.
Chapter 2, Thunder Beast. The protagonist came to the second grandfather who lived in the countryside to practice martial arts, and things came suddenly, and after his second grandfather was repeatedly confirmed, he began to teach the protagonist Thunder Beast to practice pile skills. The protagonist also said that he wanted to practice swords, palm techniques, and mental techniques. His talent is still quite good, and if he can persevere, he should be able to practice and achieve something.
Chapter 3, Thunder Domination. When the protagonist returns home, his father and sister are very concerned about his progress and enthusiasm for martial arts, and think that he should have a better future in music. The protagonist looked up the two martial artists he fought against today on the Internet, and continued to practice the Thunder Domination Mind Method, which was very fast, but he only cultivated to the third level.
Chapter 4, War Grade. The protagonist's father also comes to the place where he learns martial arts, and he doesn't have a pleasant conversation with the second grandfather. The protagonist learns about the hierarchy of warriors from the other party, and also learns the degree of destruction of war-level warriors. It's just that the subsidy is only 2,000 yuan, and it costs one yuan to take the bus. Alas, did the monetary system collapse.
Chapter 5, The Stabbing Sword. The second grandfather boasted in front of the juniors that he had killed several war-level powerhouses back then, and he soon revealed his stuff. The protagonist follows his cousin to learn stabbing swords, but he didn't expect his talent to be so high, and the number of stabbing times cousins and a few of them.
Chapter 6, Retire after Success. The second grandfather saw the protagonist and practiced in two days, and his performance was quite stable. The protagonist's sister came running one day and told him that the song had been sold. There is a market for the songs that are copied from the public.
Chapter 7, ordinary and ordinary. The protagonist comes to meet the person who bought his song and is treated politely in the other party's recording studio. He proposed to use the recording studio to record a new song, "Ordinary Road". This is a parallel world, and this song is unanimously favored by professional musicians here.
Chapter 8, Double Kill. The protagonist goes to Jiang Ziheng, a second-level martial artist who almost killed him before. Before he did it, he thought he was very powerful, but after he did it, he found that he was quite powerful. He replaced the sword with his fist, killed Jiang's subordinates with the sword stabbing heart method, and confronted him with absolute force, which was slightly better.
Chapter 9, The Future. Back in their own city, the people in the car were still discussing national affairs. And the family came with a cousin, who was the most powerful son of the second grandfather, and pointed out the protagonist. The protagonist was also told by his father that it was good to learn martial arts, but it was more promising to engage in music.
Chapter 10, Orthopedics. When the protagonist learns that the second grandfather has been discharged from the hospital, he hurries to see him and finds that he is preparing a medicinal bath, which turned out to be prepared for him. Stimulated by the medicated bath, the protagonist feels that his physique has improved greatly and he is more able to fight.
[Brief comment]
Riding the Wind and Imperial Sword, a great god writer, author of 11 works, almost all of which are sword cultivation.
Officials couldn't help but call him the "First Sword at the Starting Point", affirming his continuous exploration in the field of sword cultivation.
He is a veteran god writer who debuted very early, and he still looks quite young.
With the mindset of learning, I started to try it.
My heart suddenly couldn't stand it!
This book is a bit poisonous, or a little white. 97 Chinese
The story takes place in a parallel world, and the protagonist is called Baili Qingfeng, which is very similar to the protagonist of a Chinese comic "Painting the Spirit of the Rivers and Lakes".
The name of the protagonist in this book is quite difficult to adapt to, and you need to adjust your mentality.
The storyline is also a bit speechless.
After a day and a half of cultivation, the protagonist dared to come to the door to face the opponent to life and death, and also completed the double kill.
His family's exercises are not peerless, and their power is terrifying.
The monetary system in the book is also a bit of a collapse. The protagonist needs one yuan to take the bus, six thousand yuan to buy a computer, his father's salary is five or six hundred yuan a month, but he sells a song for a thousand yuan, and the subsidy for a war-level warrior who blows for a long time is two thousand yuan.
The chaos of the monetary system is unacceptable to the reader, and it feels like blowing a big cowhide, which is not as good as the money of a computer.
And the force value is also inexplicable.
The protagonist practiced for a day and a half, practiced the sword more than 100,000 times, comprehended his internal strength, worked hard to find the enemy, and completed the kill.
He is so talented, why was he unknown at first, like an otaku, and his sense of existence is extremely weak. was even treated as a passerby and was almost killed in seconds.
And the system, as the standard configuration of the protagonist, gives what?
The protagonist's martial arts training and writing songs all rely on the Internet, especially the core cultivation system of their Baili family is all searched from the Internet, including the image of the thunder beast.
In the early stage of this book, it generally gives people a sense of randomness, and the setting is not rigorous enough. And the author, as a very famous god writer, has been deeply involved in the field of sword cultivation and has written tens of millions of words, but this book makes people very helpless.
Just because you write a lot or write for a long time doesn't mean you write well.
Many platinum writers also face this problem, it is easy to collapse when they are innovative, and there is no progress in writing routines.
But the author of this book is still quite touching, at least the pen is good, and he has been insisting on writing!
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
"Cang's Whispers"
In the past few days, I have started to get busy again, training every day, and I am very tired at night, and I often can't even get up a chapter.
In addition, there are fewer and fewer good books, and most of them have been recommended, which makes me feel like there is a shortage of books again.
But the book shortage is not terrible, everyone work together and recommend it hard!
Let's get this done together.
As for today's book, old white readers, please do what you can, and if you want to read it, take a look twice.
The first sword at the starting point, it's better to be famous than to meet!