19. Commenting on "Open Heaven Record"

Title: Blood Red "Open Heaven Record": Is the protagonist Pangu or not?

The book I recommend to you today is "Open Heaven Record" by the starting point platinum writer and mentor-level writer Xuehong.

Why do you say mentor-level?

Is it an exaggeration to lick the dog?

Heheda~

Readers who are familiar with the starting point, especially the writers who hit the streets, should know that the writer's assistant often pops up notices to hold various online writer training courses.

Among the teachers in the training class, if nothing else, there will be blood red!

Below, we officially start the journey of drug testing~

"Open Heaven Record", Author: Blood Red.

Category: Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.

Brief introduction:

Survival, it's easy.

Life, it's hard.

What our people want is not a lowly existence, but a life of pride and pride.

My people, swear not to be a slave!

The title of the book is very domineering. Open the sky? Except for Pangu Kaitian, who else can do it?

【Golden Five Chapters】

In the first chapter, the Wu family, the young Wu Tie was struggling to cultivate, but the master advised him to study more. His father defeated the Xiong family and returned triumphantly, but Wu Tie did not feel joy. Killing and killing, one day the Wu family will also encounter changes. laid the groundwork for the rest of the text.

Chapter 2, Hunting. Wu Tie followed his master to interpret the spoils of war—the book. Books are a great treasure for these barbarians. The family's dwarf slaves have discovered a new mine that seems to have access to somewhere else. At this time, the Assassin had already infiltrated the Witch's house. Hunting, start.

Chapter 3, Assault. Wu Tie, who discovered the mysterious river, and his father had not had time to tell the whole clan of their joy, the master and son were killed, the pet beast was killed, and the Wu family was almost slaughtered.

Chapter 4, That Kneeling. The assassin entered the cave, and after a bloody battle, the second brother was killed, the third brother was killed, and the father was also killed. Wu Tie witnessed the tragic death of his father and brother one by one, and his heart was trembled and almost collapsed. And the eldest brother knelt down in front of the enemy.

Chapter 5, Into the Water. "The fourth child is a soft egg, and he is not a threat to you." The eldest brother knelt down, just to beg the enemy to spare the protagonist. The law of survival of the jungle made the Assassins have no mercy. The eldest brother was also killed, and his bloodline sheltered him, but he blew up the enemy to serious injuries. And the protagonist's newly-acquired trophy, Chi Youya, protects it from falling into the water and preventing it from dying. A new life trajectory begins.

[Brief comment]

【Advantages】

Strong storytelling.

The barbarian boy was extremely weak and unable to cultivate, but he was tragically destroyed, how could the great revenge be avenged? Falling into the water, encountering a magical skeleton, claiming to be a divine soldier, and helping the protagonist on the right path of cultivation. Cultivation had just improved, but the secret place was discovered by outsiders who had fled and hunted down. The protagonist is young and ignorant, and his sense of justice is bursting, and he stands up and is a hero to save the United States. Unexpectedly, the beauty is like a scorpion, and the identity of the enemy and the enemy suddenly reverses.

The setting is peculiar.

The protagonist is a barbarian, an abnormal human race, where men raise men and women raise girls. The protagonist was born without seeing his mother and sister, but he has a natural bloodline, can be transformed, and can be awakened.

This book is a complex race, with dwarfs, alien beasts, and human races living together, but they are highly hierarchical.

The Divine Soldier setting is quite interesting. Erlang God, Roaring Heavenly Dog, Heavenly Soldier and Heavenly General, but it turned out to be just a divine soldier, and there were few real physical bodies. The skeleton that helps the protagonist cultivate, who calls himself Bian Que's ninth-generation medical ancient god soldier "Lao Tie", has a great relationship with Erlang God. even took the flesh of the roaring dog and became a "head dog".

The pen pharaoh arrived.

Old platinum is old platinum. The number of words in each chapter is very sufficient, and there will always be a mystery at the end of the chapter, which will arouse people's appetite.

The plot takes a 180-degree turn at any time. The Wu family defeated the Xiong family, but the joy was extremely short-lived, and the clan was wiped out in a blink of an eye. The protagonist obviously can't cultivate, and he sees that he is going to be wasted, but in the blink of an eye, he begins to practice the perfect foundation building technique. The beauty looks extremely soft, but in order to survive, she is committed to the enemy in the blink of an eye and kills all the enemies.

Verbal sophistication.

Since I have only seen the early content, I am not sure if Lao Tie is a modern civilization. Because this product has some lines, very modern, like a talking computer.

The book occasionally drives a twisting car. For example, the protagonist's father said in front of him that he would make a sister. The Master occasionally recites some human poems, songs, and scriptures. Lao Tie is a perfect match for mythology, magic, and technology. Shi Lingqing's transformation from a young girl to a young woman is very simple.

In fact, there are many advantages of this book, as the plot unfolds, the mythology, the witch domain, the martial kingdom, the Fuxi and other grand worlds will also be shown one by one, all of which are fascinating and unforgettable.

The point is that it's not cliché at all.

After all, Xuehong is a tutor-level writer who often lectures, with excellent works, unlimited creativity, and a high status.

However, it's not my style to praise people!

[Tucao]

The style of the work is very different from the appearance of the author. The author was chubby, smiling, and looked very knowledgeable, thinking he was a serious person. But in the book, there are always either "hooligans", jokes, and twisting cars.

The books at the starting point of the blood red are all fantasy and fairy tales. As the one who started the underworld, he didn't even think about continuing to go to the city to classify and stir up the wind and rain, but it's a pity that he has a talent!

[Last]

This book is really good, and to be honest, it is much better than "Cangyuan Diagram"!

It's not about pulling hatred, you can compare it and see if what I'm saying is right.

In the near future, I will continue to try the poisonous blood red book.

If you are interested, you can follow me and take a look, is it poisonous or not?

In addition, friends who are chasing more, please spoil it in the comment area, will Wu Tie become Pangu in the end?

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt for myself!