245. Commenting on "True Immortality"
Today I would like to recommend a new book to you.
"True Immortality", the author of stewed meat and cauldron dishes, a great god writer.
Classification Fantasy - Oriental Fantasy.
【Introduction】
In modern society, after a young man Roth gained the ability to live forever, in order not to die unexpectedly, he stayed (stable) until he was old.
In the era of Reiki revival, someone was born,
In the era of alien invasions, someone became a legend
In the era of interstellar exploration, someone resounded in the starry sky
Countless heavenly arrogance rises like the sun, and then falls, the thousand-year-old family, the thousand-year-old family, and only Roth, standing on the edge of the long river of time, quietly watched.
【Golden Five Chapters】
Chapter 1, Old Headmaster. The main character, Roth, is eighty years old, but he only looks like he is in his twenties, because he can live forever. He needs to put on makeup every day and dress himself up as an old man. He was also the president of the university, and he was giving the last lecture to the students, but he was scolded by the students. From this, he expounded his understanding of "stability", which makes sense, but it is not the truth.
Chapter 2, Martial Arts and Arts. This chapter details the background of the story, including social changes, aura revival, alien invasion, etc., which is too detailed, and it is easy to dissuade the reader from entering the background of the story so bluntly.
Chapter 3, The Standard for Abnormal Humans. On the one hand, the protagonist is immortal, and on the other hand, he also has a system. But he is extremely cautious and has always avoided the system. He doesn't think the system will choose him for no reason, there must be some limitations. At this time, his colleague told him that there was a meeting of the Education Bureau that he needed to attend.
Chapter 4, The End of an Era. In this chapter, the author goes on to state the background of the story, and the old era is over. Then, in the Education Bureau, the schools were notified to start martial arts classes, which was to select martial artists from colleges and universities to fight against the cosmic locusts, and the protagonist wept bitterly and strongly objected.
Chapter 5, the beginning of another era. The protagonist played with those people in the Education Bureau for a long time, and finally won a very generous resource ration for the school. Neither side has reached the bottom line, and they are both acting talents. And the opening of martial arts classes will also mean the beginning of another era.
Chapter 6, General Trend. The protagonist's mood is affected by the assistant's sycophancy, and he quickly calms down. Martial arts is the trend of the times, and all he can do is gather his students and arrange a way back for them. After the students came, most of them were the protagonists.
Chapter 7, The Storm is Coming. The protagonist points out two paths to his students, among which developing his own martial arts and fighting the general trend with the general trend is the most scientific method. And the youngest student reveals the evil deeds of the Insect God Cult, which finally makes the protagonist leak a trace of qi.
Chapter 8, The Magnetic Field of the Human Body. As the headmaster, he went out on a night patrol despite being told of the dangers he was in danger in the near future. In the girls' dormitory, he felt a drastic change in the body's magnetic field, and sure enough, someone kidnapped the girl and was solved by him with a bow and arrow.
Chapter 9, Ghosts. An old policeman in the police station ruined his family for a suspect named "Ghost" in order to catch this person. He took the equipment, tracked the target task, and approached quickly.
Chapter 10, The Importance of Stability. The old policeman chased him to the suburbs, and the tracking equipment broke down directly, and decades of hard work were finally ruined. The strong blow made the old man cry. The protagonist hid not far away and saw this scene, his mood was very complicated, and in the end he left some clues and elixirs, hoping to fulfill the old man's dream.
[Brief comment]
About the author
Stewed meat cauldron dish, great god writer, official label online literature well-known writer, works with a refreshing rhythm, bloody plot, and strong author.
He is the author of "Wonderful Hands and Mysterious Doctors" (first order 4694), "Invincible Medicine Venerable" (first order 5255), "Invincible Awakening" (first order 2600), "Wonderful Hands Heavenly Master" (first order 8290).
It can be seen that he has also been brilliant before, otherwise he would not have been able to get the Great God Covenant.
And his new book "True Immortality" currently has a collection of only 1.34 million, and there is no good recommendation, and it is estimated that it will be cool to put it on the shelves after visual inspection.
Synopsis
This book mainly tells the story of the era of Reiki revival, the era of alien invasion, the era of interstellar exploration, and how different characters in different eras strive for excellence in the torrent of the times, so as to gain a future for themselves and a destiny for mankind.
Only the immortal protagonist, standing in the long river of time, watching everyone rise and fall and annihilate, has a feeling of peerless mastery.
Character characteristics
The protagonist Roth, the principal of a junior college, has a body in his twenties, and he is forced to make up as an eighty-year-old man.
Being overly cautious, the system does not trust, only trusts his own judgment, and sticks to the word "stability".
In order for the school to be able to allocate generous resources, he can not cry in the Education Bureau without shame, or he can face the positive and tough students and stick to his own principles.
Stylistic features
The style characteristics are not easy to say, to put it bluntly, it is too white, and it is not the name of a great writer.
His previous works may have been more popular, but this new book, to be honest, is on the same level as a rookie author.
Since this is such an unsatisfactory work, why should I list it separately to push a wave?
In fact, it's very simple, I also want to see if this veteran god can survive smoothly in the new era of online literature and whether he can keep up with the trend of online literature in the new era.
Or, it was lost in thousands of online articles and has been in a state of collapse ever since?
【Summary】
Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!
I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!
Welcome to Book Review Paradise.
【Cang's Whispering】
Yesterday, someone left me a message, saying that I only say good things and don't talk about shortcomings.
A long time ago, I said that for well-known authors, I would mention the shortcomings;
For new authors, I will give loving encouragement.
Later, because he complained that Eagle's new book was too watery, fans withdrew from the group.
It's not really a big deal.
Positive reviews from readers naturally encourage me to keep writing, and bad reviews don't stop me from continuing to push the book.
As long as it's not too bad, I don't usually say anything.
Everyone can talk freely about anything, and it's good to be able to make my book circle a large reader exchange site.
Today's book is actually not a good work.
After I tried it myself, I lost the recommendation to continue.
Later, I thought about it for a moment and took it in again.
This is a great god writer, and the quality of the book is very poor, and it can dissuade countless people from the first chapter.
He's not talking about a story anymore, it's purely a background introduction and an inner monologue, a bit like a story outline and psychological description.
No laughs, no highlights, no slots, no readability.
This is really written by a great god!
I never thought that a great god writer could degenerate to this extent, it is no longer a matter of declining level, it is a matter of writing attitude.
He's not creating a story at all, he's just writing as he pleases.
He doesn't care about the hot topics and buzz of the moment, and he doesn't even know who his audience is.
In short, the book is very likely to be over as soon as it hits the shelves.
This article is dedicated to commemorating this book.
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