497. Commenting on "Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood"

Today I would like to recommend a new book of Xianxia to you.

"Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood", Dragon Snake Branch, Level 5 Author.

Category: Xianxia - Xiuzhen Civilization.

【Introduction】

The doctor said I was mentally ill.

Hahaha!

How could I be a madman?

I suspect this dog doctor is trying to harm me!

My good guy said I was sick and what kind of persecution paranoia it was!

How is this possible?

It's impossible!

The doctor really wanted to kill me.

This is the invincible story of a teenager suspected of suffering from persecution paranoia who travels to the world of Reiki recovery.

【Golden Five Chapters】

Chapter 1, I'm not crazy. The main character, Xia Zuo, was stunted and intellectually disabled when he was a child, and was diagnosed with mental illness by a doctor. At the age of 9, he began to fear the world and worry about all kinds of dangers, until at the age of 15, he crossed into the world of reiki revival and became a dead house. This dead house also writes diaries, watches small videos, and has 6 life-size physical dolls. He felt like he couldn't go back.

Chapter 2, Someone Wants to Kill Me. The protagonist sees the original owner Xia You in a dream, and the original owner is not interested in his body, and tells him that someone is going to kill him in half a month. After waking up, he really found out the identity of the killer, who was a martial artist. In this world of reiki revival, warriors can flatten cars. The only one who can deal with a warrior is a warrior. He had money, but not very much.

Chapter 3, Wild Breath. The protagonist wants to become a martial artist himself, so he checked a lot of information in the morning and decided to start with jogging, improve his physical functions, and learn wild breathing. As an otaku, he jogged for the first time and vomited blood when he came back at night. The next day, I continued to run and completed a 21-kilometer half-marathon.

Chapter 4, All Horses. On the third day of running, the protagonist completed the whole marathon, and ran in less than 2 hours. He ran another half marathon before he stopped. Chu Zidong, who was secretly observing him, stopped him, and she felt that the protagonist might be the kind of genius that the master was looking for.

Chapter 5, it's him. Chu Zidong stopped the protagonist, hoping that the protagonist would be able to join the Liuyun Martial Arts Pavilion where she was. The protagonist was not panicked at all, and even felt that this woman's salesman, Liuyun Martial Arts Hall, was very likely to be the Longtan Tiger's Den, because he actually gave him the money. The protagonist checked the Internet again, but neither the martial arts hall nor the owner found useful information. He himself is a martial artist, and he is still the highest-level martial emperor. Then I figured out that it was Xia You's prank.

[Brief comment]

Dragon Snake Branch, a level 5 author, is the author of two works: "Strange Immortal Cultivation World" and "Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood".

Among them, the former has a starting collection of 160,000 and 380,000 fans, making him a 5-level author in his book. Definitely a vest.

And his new book "Cultivation Begins with Vomiting Blood", as of now, it has been almost a month. The starting point collection is 6931, the book city collection is 0, and the number of fans is 24. Visually, it's a bit hanging.

This book, when I first saw the introduction, I thought it was a bit similar to Xinfeng God's "The Strong Man Who Came Out of the Mental Hospital". Unexpectedly, not at all.

The description of mental illness at the beginning of the protagonist only appears at the beginning and in the introduction. Later, he could say that it was normal. Of course, it may also be reflected in the follow-up plot.

In addition, the protagonist vomits blood and becomes stronger. At the very least, I get the impression that after each long-distance run and vomits blood, his body becomes stronger and he can continue to push his limits.

However, what is confusing is that what kind of existence is the so-called "Xia You" existing in the dream, it is not really a martial emperor or a martial god, and the foreshadowing is buried a little deep. It's too deep.

Aside from the above points, this book is actually an ordinary urban ability. As for the so-called invincibility, it has not yet shown much.

This will make readers who come in to read the two elements of "mental illness" and "invincible text" lose patience.

Comparing it with his brilliant predecessor, disappointment arises spontaneously. It can be said that the book has failed so far. There is a high probability that it will pounce.

Here's also a reminder for new authors, the beginning is really important, don't pave for so long, don't ink.

【Summary】

Writing is not easy, but do it and cherish it!

I'm Cang Yiwei, and I bring salt to "Cang's Whispering"!

Welcome to Book Review Paradise.

【Cang's Whispering】

The author of the book has already cut.

When I was writing a book review, I had a hunch that it would come true so soon.

How to say it, the previous work was too good, and the style was changed abruptly, which is actually the same as opening a vest and writing a new book.

Many readers will not easily recognize it.

Now, the road of online literature feels narrower and narrower.

is more inclined to be nonsensical and funny, and it is over with laughter, leaving nothing behind.

Of course, it's time to laugh and really have fun.